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Cornerian Army Fanfiction


Jcopper24

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Hello everyone,

 

I am starting this topic because I have started writing a fanfiction revolving around the soldiers of the Cornerian army. It can be found on Deviantart under this same username. I invite you to give it a try and tell me what you think. The first chapter is titled "Lylat Wars: Sector Y Chapter 1" if you are interested.

 

Thank you

 

Jcopper24

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A link would be kindly appreciated.

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Its definitely a  good start! When you write though "more" is usually better

 

What are Fara's raw skills exactly? Does Thomas have real organizational strengths and work ethic strengths she lacks?

 

I assume this is a SF64 story told from Cornerian army's point of view?

 

Anyway keep writing. More is always better.

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Well the chapters are getting longer and a few characters have little explanation because they were scrapped by Nintendo. Fara Phoenix was a canon character until 64 came out. As for raw skill Fara is an ace pilot while Thomas was raised by General Pepper. Keep reading and see what I've included. Also this will follow them until the end of Assault's story with the 9 year skip. It's my 1st fiction so please be considerate.

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Of course Ill be considerate Jcopper. I wont intentionally hurt your feelings, but I will ask questions about the work and offer my advice when I can. I myself am 3/4 of the way finished with my own fiction "SF Genesis" and have benefited from advice.

 

Btw, by the standard of SF fanfictions yours already is very appealing and readable!

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Thanks for leading me here :-) had no idea you were an assistant admin

 

Yeah I don't usually people that when talking about it, I just let them see when they get here. I just recommend SFO as a good and friendly forum. X3

 

Also, TCPeppy here has been looking for decent fanfiction recently. I know he'll like this. :D

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Of course Ill be considerate Jcopper. I wont intentionally hurt your feelings, but I will ask questions about the work and offer my advice when I can. I myself am 3/4 of the way finished with my own fiction "SF Genesis" and have benefited from advice.

 

Btw, by the standard of SF fanfictions yours already is very appealing and readable!

 Much appreciated. Until I joined SFO I only had 3-5 readers, so lets hope I can increase that. Please keep reading since most things were made up on the go.

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