Xi Silverfang Posted December 29, 2013 Share Posted December 29, 2013 In general like most fan fics, I am bending the rules a bit as it comes to the story, in it I remake adventures as if it had several hours of game play that got cut, then it spills to a total remake of assault. I add a character for several reasons, and through him I can both add, and sacrifice with out totaly upsetting most fans, but you cant please everyone and I'm not going to try. Though constructive thoughts wouldn't go amiss. this is a taste, more to come if you fans want. Lylats resolve, prologe two years ago, when fox freed me from the crystal at the top of the krazoa palace, I then in listed his aid in returning to my home world. I had left it years previously in search of aid for it. For despite my kind having a well developed ability to for see danger on our harsh and beautiful world, after a stranger came, something had been going wrong. But on landing on that planet I was accosted by the sharpclaws, I was young, and unable to defend myself properly, it was then some earth walkers drove them away, at the coast of them taking my ship. years passed and I grew, eventually needing new cloths, but they people of this world, with some exceptions, are kind, I learned to hone my powers and procured the staff. I then began to fight back, both to pay back the earth walkers, and to reclaim my stolen ship. For I still wished to at least discover what became of my people... Chapter 1, returning home (Coming soon) like I said, just a taste. is it worth continuing on this site for your enjoyment? and ya, the first few chapters are from krystals point of view, and she's telling this story to someone. I did this mostly because I think she deserves some spotlight, as well as more of her story told. and before you bring it up, I know I'm not the first to say that, or to write about it. I'm merely asking if you fellow sf fans want more from me. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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