Guest Chiro-Chan Posted June 1, 2007 Share Posted June 1, 2007 I decided a while ago to kind of re-chronicalize Star Fox 64 as a comic, mostly for kicks and giggles. So far, I only have 4 pages (2, front and back-wise), and I'd like suggestions as well as comments. So without further ado, here it is. Yay. EDIT: Now more readable! (will update fully once the legibility is fixed. I has me an editor now.) Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 And yes, I know my handwriting sucks. I'd probably try to clean up the lettering, but I don't trust Paint, so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Krystal Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Those look great. Yeah, the text was a little hard to read, but that can be fixed easily with a little photo editing. When are you going to ink these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chiro-Chan Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 I *would* ink them, but the only problem is that the ink would bleed through onto the next page, and make it look all icky. I've kind of figured out how to ink things on the computer, but I really don't trust it. (my computer is ancient, and it always screws up the colors/text/ect.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Krystal Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 I *would* ink them, but the only problem is that the ink would bleed through onto the next page, and make it look all icky. I've kind of figured out how to ink things on the computer, but I really don't trust it. (my computer is ancient, and it always screws up the colors/text/ect.) You just need the right program... or a new computer. I recommend a Mac. You can hack together a $300 Mac out of an Apple TV. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chiro-Chan Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 You just need the right program... or a new computer. I recommend a Mac. You can hack together a $300 Mac out of an Apple TV. Yea, I probably do, seeing as my computer is a Windows '98. xD Of course, I don't think I'm going to get a computer any time soon, so I may as well bear with what I have. I do have 'Photo Impression 5' on my computer, but I've never used that. I may try it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pyre Vulpimorph Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Even for paper-and pencil, that looka pretty impressive. Good stuff. If ink bleeding through is a problem, why don't you just use one side of the paper? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Four-eyed Vulpine Posted June 2, 2007 Share Posted June 2, 2007 Yeah, you could scan just one side of the page and print it out. That way you don't have to worry about redrawing or anything. By the way, the art in the comic is great. It would be cool if the text was a little bigger, though. I'm not saying it was illegible or anything, just a little too small to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chiro-Chan Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 I have someone re-typing the text so it's ledgible. And the reason why I'm using both sides is because I want it to be more like an actual comic book, and plus I'm a little tree-hugger, and I use as much of the paper as I can. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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