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PuffNStuff

So Wolf gets resuced by Krystal of Starfox, but here ship gets destroyed also. Krystal stays with wolf while he is injured on a planet that is having a storm or something that prevents anyone from finding them. Wolf falls in love with Krystal and tries to steal her from fox!

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foxbird22

Star Fox isn't necessarily a soap opera...and it's FE's story, so he can do what he wants.

I like the idea of Wolf's ship crashing...one would think it'd be the other way around!  Good luck to you once you start writing.

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Four-eyed Vulpine

So Wolf gets resuced by Krystal of Starfox, but here ship gets destroyed also. Krystal stays with wolf while he is injured on a planet that is having a storm or something that prevents anyone from finding them. Wolf falls in love with Krystal and tries to steal her from fox!

Don't forget that I'm only writing one chapter.

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PuffNStuff

Don't forget that I'm only writing one chapter.

one long good chapter!

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Guest Chiro-Chan

I wanna write something different for once, and base something off of the '93 comics. (Yes, this means Fara is in it.) I dunno what should happen though. I also want to continue to work on my 'Akursed' thingy, but I'm not taking 'Too short to review' as a comment. C'mon people...

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starfox87

Ok, I think I've got a good story idea:

Basically, this latest story is a blend of Star Fox and Star Wars. The storyline sort of follows the game "Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic". In it, Fox and Krystal are Jedi knights, Peppy is a Jedi master, Slippy is a Jedi apprentice, and Wolf and Leon are the two Sith lords of the story.

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absoludicrous91

Sounds great! I love both Star Wars and Star Fox, so this is the kind of crossover I've been waiting for. What will the other characters be doing in your story?

I always imagined Pigma as being like Jabba, Falco like Han Solo, etc.

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starfox87

Sounds great! I love both Star Wars and Star Fox, so this is the kind of crossover I've been waiting for. What will the other characters be doing in your story?

I always imagined Pigma as being like Jabba, Falco like Han Solo, etc.

Well, for starters, Panther is a mercenary that the gang meets up with sometime during the first area, Pigma is the admiral of Wolf's Sith army, Andross is a deceased Sith lord who's tomb Fox must enter and Katt is a spy for an underground biker gang. Several original characters also come into the story.

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absoludicrous91

Awesome. You are in command now, Admiral Star Fox 87.

It's A Trap!

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starfox87

Part one of the story is now up.

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Ranger One

Not bad... seems to have a bit of Episode 3 when it comes to the jedi/romance bit, while the rest is KOTOR thru and thru, but that's not necesarily a bad thing. Just recomend you add in some descriptions of the enviroment for the readers sake, however. It doesn't have to be TOO detailed, since it's way to easy to overdo that sort of thing, but small descriptions that make it seem as if the reader is seeing the surounding scenery thru the eyes of the character (or characters) can actually make a huge difference to a story. What you have now is good for a start tho, keep at it.  :ok:  :D

Going to have an update to Broken Lines sometime after this post as well - rather than a new section, i've re-worked part of an old one, so check the last two posts for update(s) soon.  :cool:

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starfox87

Not bad... seems to have a bit of Episode 3 when it comes to the jedi/romance bit, while the rest is KOTOR thru and thru, but that's not necesarily a bad thing. Just recomend you add in some descriptions of the enviroment for the readers sake, however. It doesn't have to be TOO detailed, since it's way to easy to overdo that sort of thing, but small descriptions that make it seem as if the reader is seeing the surounding scenery thru the eyes of the character (or characters) can actually make a huge difference to a story. What you have now is good for a start tho, keep at it.  :ok:  :D

Going to have an update to Broken Lines sometime after this post as well - rather than a new section, i've re-worked part of an old one, so check the last two posts for update(s) soon.  :cool:

Thanks. I'm aware of the episode 3 comparison, and it was completely intentional. I plan on put slight references to the SW films in certain spots throughout the story. For example, later on, the Force ghost of James appears to Fox to give him advice.

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PuffNStuff

Just got chapter 8 of cursed with Regret up. I am really happy with this chapter, it hit me like lightning. I wrote it and I smiled. Seeing as FF.net is flooded with this crap, I am glad to help weed it out by updating finally.

Edit--

300 posts in 3 months!? This is madness!

"Madness... this is PUFFY!"

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Gene Inari

Now I didn't come up with this stuff, but I think it would be nice to post this here.  :D

You can find the guy who came up with this stuff here.

Well, what you are about to read is an insane combination of my overactive imagination, boredom, inferring hints from all forms of Starfox media, and my own common sense, all mashed into the Lylat System. read and review. and if you like it, feel free to use it for your own fan-works, just give credit to me for the creation.

CORNERIA

Size Class: B

Population: Approx. 5 Billion

Major Income: Science, Farming, Military

Habitat: Moderate climate all around, about 50% water and 50% landmass

Enviroment: A few super-cities, several large cities, wilderness consits of forests, plains and ocean

Government: Democracy

Average Family Class: Lower to Upper Middle Class (rank 5-7)

Notes: Owns the largest army in the system. All around average planet.

KATINA

Size Class: C

Population: Approx. 1 Billion

Major Income: Military

Habitat: Moderate tilting towards hot. +90% landmass.

Enviroment: Few large cities, mostly dispersed lower cities and suburbs, with large military bases. Comparable to mid-western United States.

Government: Militant branch of the Cornerian Army

Average Family Class: Upper Lower Class to Middle Class (rank 4-6)

Notes: Katina is not independent, it is a Corneria territory and primarily used as a military base due to its remote enviroment and flatlands.

FICHINA

Size Class: D

Population: Approx. 100 thousand to 1 million (nomadic native population), dispersed amounts of Cornerian Military Fringe Bases and Personnel

Major Income: None

Habitat: Snowy fields, freezing mountains and lakes, tundra around the equator. Landmass and water indeterminable due to frozen wastes.

Enviroment: Warmest recorded temperature is around 40 to 50 degrees farenheight around the equator. Ice caps are inhabitable. No Major cities.

Government: Nomadic people have a patriarctic family structure, but hold no power in the Lylatian League. Military personnel are Cornerian.

Average Family Class: Lower Class (rank 1-2, applies to nomads only)

Notes: Fichina's native nomadic population holds no power in Systemary Government, as they tend to keep to themselves and are not unified.

AQUAS

Size Class: C

Population: Approx. 2 to 3 Billion

Major Income: Water Exports, Fishing

Habitat: 100% Freshwater Ocean with Lylatian-made surface ports and underwater dome cities.

Enviroment: Very warm waters, colder around the polar caps. Sentintent life lives underwater inside air-dome cities that are connected to ports and shops above the surface. All cities are interconnected with underwater train tunnel system.

Government: Constitutional Monarchy

Average Family Class: Middle to Upper Middle Class (rank 6-7)

Notes: Aquas is entirely a freshwater ocean, as such, their strongest income source is the exporting of freshwater to other planets in the system. Polution caused from the Venonium Invasion in the Lylat War was eventually cleaned up and life returned to normal.

ZONESS

Size Class: D

Population: Approx. 1 to 3 Billion

Major Income: Vacationing, Marketing, Stocks, Buisnesses

Habitat: Island covered planet. All oceans are satlwater, with freshwater lakes on the larger islands.

Enviroment: Very warm planet, never snows. Tropical beach-like in appearence, the largest islands are comparable in size to Australia.

Government: Aristocracy

Average Family Class: Upper to Highest Class (rank 8-10+)

Notes: Living on Zoness requires a large amount of money as well as social status. The planet is run by the wealthiest and most respectful Noble Families in the Lylat system. Most common people vacation on Zoness. Toxic oceans were cleaned up after the Lylat War and life returned to normal.

MACBETH

Size Class: C

Population: Approx. 2 to 4 Billion

Major Income: Industry, Construction, Manufacturing, Mining

Habitat: Comparable to Katina, with more moisture in the atmosphere and a few large major lakes. +75% Landmass.

Enviroment: Mostly dry flatlands with large lakes. Plantlife is scarce, unlike Katina. Many of the cities are industrial ones.

Government: None. MacBeth is owned by the Corneria Government. A respresenative or governor looks over it and reports to Corneria.

Average Family Class: Upper Lower to Middle Class (rank 4-6)

Notes: MacBeth was originally self-governing, supporting itself with its incredible exports and industries. However, it allied itself with Venom during the Lylat War and lost independence to Corneria when Venom was defeated.

ELADARD

Size Class: B

Population:  Approx. 8 to 10 Billion

Major Income: Buisness, Manufacturing, Science, Mining (on the rings)

Habitat: Very cool planet, never gets warm much. Rainy during the winter seasons.

Enviroment: Nonexistant. Eladard is one large Magnum-Class City Planet. It has no natural resources and must import everything from food to water.

Government: Republic. Eladard is divided into districts, with a represenative overlooking each area. They report to the main council at times.

Average Family Class: Lower to Lower Upper Class (rank 2-8), as living on Eladard is cheap, but living well is not.

Notes: Eladard is the biggest city in the system, and suffers from polution due to the expansive population. Rumors of underground lakes are abound as well.

TITANIA

Size Class: C

Population: Approx. 800 Million

Major Income: Livestock, Soil Exportation, Mining (surface and rings)

Habitat: Very hot, very dry planet. Virtually no rain, moisture is drained from the air with vaporators. Many life forms only grow on Titania, though.

Enviroment: Hot, arid desert. Most cities are built into cliffsides for the natural shade and cooling, but the captial cities can afford artificial coolants and can be built with normal technuiqes.

Government: Confederacy. Titania is divided into sectors, and each sector is self governing, but cooperative.

Average Family Class: Lowest to Lower Middle Class (rank 0-4)

Notes: Titania was not cooperative with Venom's occupation on it during the Lylat War. Given its disperse population and decent size, Andross was able to easily sneak small amounts of forces onto the planet. Corneria has installed several small outposts, with Titania's permission, to prevent this from happening again.

PAPETOON

Size Class: D

Population: Less than 500 Million

Major Income: Piracy, Personal Expedictions

Habitat: Temperate. Comparable to Katina, though slightly hotter in some areas.

Enviroment: Wastelands. Decent amount of water and plant life, but not enough to support a full-scale planetary population.

Government: Papetoon has no unified planetary government. All towns and areas are self-governing.

Average Family Class: Lowest to Upper Lower Class (rank 0-3)

Notes: Since Papetoon has no unified government or income, it is a great place for pirates and vigilantes to hide out, as well as for citizens of other planets to embark on personel expedictions and adventures.

VENOM

Size Class: A

Population: Approx. 500 Million

Major Income: Mercenaries

Habitat: Warm and Dry. Lacks real moisture, as rains are acidic.

Enviroment: Wastelands, with small actual living areas. Oceans are acidic, as is the rain. All natural resources must be imported.

Government: Militant (de facto)

Average Family Class: Lowest to Upper Lower Class (rank 0-3)

Notes: After Andross's defeat in the Lylat War, His loyalist forces left Venom to the far ends of the system in hiding. What was left on Venom is what would become it's new government, the small remains of the Venonium Army. As Venom has no resources and mostly only knows war, the Venonium Army became a planetary mercenary force, selling their services across the galaxy to support themselves. While they hold no real voice in the Lylatian League, they are slowly building their presteige.

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starfox87

I know this is a bit different, but I've suddenly had the idea to cross SF and Pirates of the Caribbean. Each SF character would portray a different POTC character.

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PuffNStuff

I'm not that great a fan of Crossover's but then again, what say do I have when you write?

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starfox87

I like to do out of the box stuff. Anyway, I'm preparing the story's castlist.

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Ranger One

Just had to post to say thanks to Gene Inari for posting that list of info - just made a huge diff to Broken Lines, wasn't sure what classifications to use for the planets in later stuff, and finding information on the planets besides Corneria and Venom was proving to be a royal pain. Should be able to move a lot smoother now, instead of trying to improvise it. Thanks again.  :ok:

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Gene Inari

Yeah, I knew it would be good to post it here. Thank me for posting, but give the credit to the guy I mentioned in the first post. Also I have more from him. =D

For the record, the Lylatian League, Celestial City, MSS and Venom Defense Graveyard are my creations. Cornerian Defense Satilite  and Astropolis are from StarFox 2. Meteroland and Out of this Dimension are from SNES Starfox. Again, all is free for use, just give credit if you use.

FORTUNA

Size Class: B

Population: No permanent standing sentinent lifeform population

Major Income: Forestry (other-world), National Parks

Habitat: Humid and warm, with average snowfall in the north and south.

Enviroment: Lush forests and many natural springs and lakes. Uninhabitated.

Government: None, but there are few military bases from several systems sparsely spread around, as well as conservation parks for tourism.

Average Family Class: None

Notes: Fortuna is uninhabited, though it has non-permanent settlements occasionaly.

SAURIA

Size Class: E

Population: Unknown

Major Income: None

Habitat: Temperate, warm in the middle, cold at the poles

Enviroment: Lush forests around the middle, mountains to the north and east, ocean to the south and west.

Government: Dual Monarchy (two royal ruling families)

Average Family Class: Unidentified

Notes: Sauria is a double-system planet, spending half its orbit time around another sun. This is why it was not seen my Lylatians until the events of Starfox Adventures. It's native inhabitants are primitive dinosaurs.

LYLAT SYSTEM GUIDE

-NONPLANETS-

LYLATIAN LEAGUE

What it is: Interstellar Space Station

Location: In orbit around Lylat (Solar, the star systems sun)

Purpose: Council for all rulers of the independant planets of the Lylat system to discuss matters and conserve peace

Owner: Corneria, Aquas, Zoness, Titania, Eladard

CELESTIAL CITY

What it is: Ultra-expensive space hotel and minicity

Location: In orbit around Lylat

Purpose: Provide the most expensive and luxurious form of entertainment for Lylat's most wealthy

Owner: Lylatian League

SECTOR X

What it is: Expansive spacecloud that resembles a large letter "X"

Location: Between Fichina and Titania

Purpose: Shipyard for constructing large captial ships for any planet, for a price

Owner: Various ship construction companies (LylaTECH, Space Dynamics, ect)

SECTOR Y

What it is: Expansive spacecloud that resembles a large letter "Y"

Location: Between Corneria and Katina

Purpose: Cornerian airspace for captial ships. Unauthorized access is a crime.

Owner: Cornerian Army

SECTOR Z

What it is: Expansive spacecloud that resembles a large letter "Z"

Location: Between Venom and Zoness

Purpose: None. Usually untraveled due to its reputation as a galactice grave yard. Comparable to the Bermuda Triangle.

Owner: None

METEO

What it is: Large asteroid belt

Location: Dispersed throughout the system

Purpose: No offical one, cheap to build installations on, if one is willing to take the risk. Also provides some natural defense for some planets.

Owner: None

SARGASSO

What it is: Large area of space and space station, Starwolf vigilante hideout

Location: Just out of Titania's orbital range

Purpose: Hideout for the Starwolf vigilante team

Owner: Wolf O'Donnel

THE BLACK HOLE

What it is: Transdimensional warp rift

Location: The black hole fades in and out of space time, its location is not constant

Purpose: Some say that warp travel throughout the galaxy and through other dimensions is possible with it

Owner: None

VENOM DEFENSE GRAVEYARD

What it is: Orbital remains of the Venonium Space Armada, Area 6 Defense Network, and Bolse Defense Sattelite

Location: Orbit around Venom

Purpose: Former defense outposts, now pose as a natural defense against invaders, much like an asteroid field

Owner: Technically, Venom

OUT OF THIS DIMENSION

What it is: Warp rip in timespace

Location: Has been seen in Meteo and Sector X

Purpose: Can instantly warp one to random locales of the system...if one is willing to take the risk

Owner: None

MERCENARY SUPPORT STATION

What it is: Large space station of mercenaries

Location: Typically orbits Corneria

Purpose: Hangout and base of operations for a band of mercenaries

Owner: Members of the MSS

LYLAT/SOLAR

What it is: The sun of the Lylat System

Location: Center of the System

Purpose: Bring life to all planets in the system

Owner: None

ASTROPOLIS

What it is: Lost city in space

Location: Unknown

Purpose: Said to be an ancient space city. For what and made by who is unknown.

Owner: Unknown

METEORLAND

What it is: Artificial meteor Zero-G themepark

Location: Orbit around Lylat

Purpose: It's a thempark. Have fun.

Owner: Zero-G Themeparks Industries

BELTINO RESEARCH STATION

What it is: Research and development space station

Location: Between Corneria and Meteo

Purpose: Beltino Toad's personal research goes on here. Also locale of a warpgate.

Owner: Beltino Toad, Cornerian Government

CORNERIAN DEFENSE STATION

What it is: Small, computerized sattelite created after the Lylat War to defend Corneria with a powerful laser cannon

Location: Orbit around Corneria

Purpose: Minor defense and first alert system for Corneria

Owner: Cornerian Army

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Ice Fox 111

Meh, I'm probably going to write a new short story...that takes place in one chapter. And that chapter would probably make SF Ghost proud, as it'd be pretty long (or not, who knows?).

...Trust me to come up with depraved and outlandish ideas for stories:

A mentally unstable woman (not quite sure as to what species yet) derives her living solely off of capturing victims, torturing them, and selling recorded films of the grisly sessions to a selective market. She idolizes Krystal and is absolutely obsessed with her in every possible way, and her life's dream is to feature the Cerinian in one of her recordings. So what luck when the very same vixen had scheduled vacation time in the very city in which the woman lives. She captures Krystal and performs unspeakable acts upon her (yes, guys, this is a torture-fic and will be quite M-rated indeed). All the while Fox becomes increasingly suspicious of his friend's whereabouts, and when irrefutable evidence turns up surrounding her capture he immediately starts scavenging for signs of the vixen. He may be her absolute last hope.

...You know, someday I might just write something positive. Just maybe, though it is unlikely. :|

Yeah, I know the whole "gritty, gory" type of thing doesn't appeal to a very large audience, but it doesn't really matter to me...I write what I feel like writing, simple as that.  :lol:

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starfox87

Well, I've decided to return to writing Star Fox meets Star Wars for awhile. I was just having trouble planning out my other ideas. Anyway, this chapter is going to be an exciting one. Currently, Fox and friends are trapped on a Sith-occupied planet that has a military blockade around it. As soon as they escape the planet, the adventure begins. There's lightsaber action in this part, but all the major ones happen after the escape. Here's a list of some of the fights:

Fox and Peppy vs. Darth Trucidus (Leon)

Fox vs. Darth Raan (Wolf)

Fox vs. Krystal (She turns to the dark side for a time, but is brought back)

Krystal vs. Darth Raan (short fight)

Also, new OC's are coming in:

Lily Conlin- A feisty, attractive raccoon girl of about 15 years of age. She joins Fox in the upcoming chapter. It is little-known that she has a softer side. This is discovered by Krystal during the journey to stop the Sith.

Rianna- A somewhat cocky opossum girl of about 23 years of age. She's a Jedi apprentice, but gave into anger and attacked her instructor. She then fled to a Jedi meditation grove. Fox finds her there, fights her with lightsabers and defeats her. She gives him the option of killing her, but he refuses and spares her. She is then redeemed by the Jedi council.

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PuffNStuff

Yay to icefox!

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starfox87

I do want to say that SF meets SW does involve three torture scenes, all of which involve Krystal.

1st- Fox refuses to give Pigma an answer as to what the team is up to, and Krystal is fried with electricity.

2nd- Wolf uses Force lightning on Krystal to turn her to the dark side.

3rd- When Krystal turns light side again and goes after Wolf, he uses Force lightning on her.

She lives through each one though.

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Ice Fox 111

Alright...but I'm not sure you really know what I meant when I said "torture"...but perhaps that's a good thing.

That actually sounds like a pretty interesting idea for a story. Are you going to start on the first chapter soon?

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starfox87

Alright...but I'm not sure you really know what I meant when I said "torture"...but perhaps that's a good thing.

That actually sounds like a pretty interesting idea for a story. Are you going to start on the first chapter soon?

If by the last comment you mean my Star Wars/Star Fox story, three chapters of it are up already.

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