Yorokobi-Ageru

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Yorokobi-Ageru

(A small story to get me back in my creative mood)

Fox stared blankly into the empty space, the stars sparkling endlessly. He sighed lightly, thinking of the years that he's spent as the leader of Team Star Fox. He thought about his dad. His friends. His enemies. His secret crush. The thought ended there with her face in his mind when she suddenly walked up to him. He thoguht he could smell her, but he was pushing the scent away, thinking it was all in his mind.

"It's beautiful, isn't it?" she asked him, not looking at him, but standing in front of the giant window, looking at the magnificant scene he was.

He looked over at the blue vixen, her eyes locked on the ouside. He smiled a little, looking back into space. "Yea...it is."

A few seconds passed. To fox, it seemed like minutes, maybe hours, as he inhaled her scent. It was mixed with the smell of a rain forest, along with the shampoo they used on the ship. The shampoo was like an enhancer for her natural smell, peaches. He never understood why, but she just LOVED peaches...

"Fox, what IS this smell?"

"What? You don't like it?"

"No, silly!" She giggled. "It's AMAZING!"

"It's...uh peaches. You don't have those on your planet?"

"We have fruits...just...none like this. Do they taste good...?" She begins to open the shampoo bottle, about to taste it.

Fox quickly snatches it away from her. "No! Don't do that!"

A look of hurt flashed across Krystal's face.

"It's bad for you. It's meant to clean your fur. Not to eat. It tastes really bad..." he said with a smile. He made a horrible face, as if he just ate something really nasty...Slippy's cooking flashed through his mind. it was no longer acting.

She giggled at his face, admiring him trying to cheer her up. "Thank you, Fox.."

He blinked in surprise, wondering where her wonderful smile came from. "For...for what?"

She kissed him on the cheek, walking past him. Her tail swished left and right as she left him there. "For being there..."

"Fox..?" she asked, waking him up from his flashback.

Fox shook his head alittle, looking over at the beaty to his right. "Yes, Krystal?"

"Have you ever been..in love?" she asked sheepishly, acoiding his gaze, looking off to her left a little.

The question throwing him off, he thought about his past. Highschool, Academy, missions. "Well...there was this one woman..."

She looked up, seeming interested. "What was she like..?"

He smiled. "She's beautiful. I saved her life once. At first she didn't seem to keen on me being there, but soon she started to like me as a friend. The more and more i talk with her, the more i seem to fall for her. It seems like all she seems to see me as is a friend, and the thought stings a little, but i've never had the guts t just...come up and tell her how I feel..."

She looked a alittle bit sad, seeming to feel his pain. "Does this woman have a name...?" She didn't want to push, but a small voice inside of her mind...her instincts...told her to press on just a little.

He looked up at her, meeting her gace. He slowly pressed his paw against hers, holding her hand in his. "You..."

She gasped a little, a bit of heat reaching her cheeks.."Fox...is that true...?" A thousand things were running through her mind, until everything stopped. Her body froze, and melted all at the same time. She wondered why at first, but soon realized that this feeling that was erupting from her chest was not bad at all...it was warm. It was welcoming. It was peaceful. Almost as peaceful as his lips pressing against hers.

Fox wrapped his arms aorund her, deepening the kiss, closing his eyes almost the same time she closed hers.

As the stars pass, the two hold eachother close. Krystal leans in to his ear and whispers "I feel the same.." and the scene slowly darkens.

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Guest Julius Quasar

Great story! :yes:

I almost thought Fox was gonna say Fara.  :P

Fara: *hides in the bushes outside the bedroom window, staring in at Fox and Krystal, while seething in rage*  :P

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Guest FoXXX

Great story! :yes:

I almost thought Fox was gonna say Fara.  :P

Fara: *hides in the bushes outside the bedroom window, staring in at Fox and Krystal, while seething in rage*  :P

I wonder what's going on in there  :D  :wink:

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StarFoxIII

Fara: *hides in the bushes outside the bedroom window, staring in at Fox and Krystal, while seething in rage*  :P

Fara: *hears moaning from the bedroom* "THAT'S IT!!! I HATE THAT F*** BITCH WHO STOLE MY MAN  :evil:!!!"

hehehe, Great story though  :).

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killacroc

not bad, but i think u should expand on this, tho

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Caat01

great story, very good I liked

fox expressed his emotions in a form that i think he would do it

I almost thought Fox was gonna say Fara.  :P

^i thought the same when i was reading.

and when Krystal began to feel sad, i said no way is Fara, how can fox make this? is he nuts?

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Yorokobi-Ageru

Great story! :yes:

I almost thought Fox was gonna say Fara.  :P

Fara: *hides in the bushes outside the bedroom window, staring in at Fox and Krystal, while seething in rage*  :P

Lol Poor Fara. Idk much about her, though...O-o.

I wonder what's going on in there  :D  :wink:

Everything  :wink:

Fara: *hears moaning from the bedroom* "THAT'S IT!!! I HATE THAT F*** BITCH WHO STOLE MY MAN  :evil:!!!"

hehehe, Great story though  :).

lol Thanks.

not bad, but i think u should expand on this, tho

Hm...maybe form an earlier time. Idk. Have to think about it.  :cool:

great story, very good I liked

fox expressed his emotions in a form that i think he would do it

^i thought the same when i was reading.

and when Krystal began to feel sad, i said no way is Fara, how can fox make this? is he nuts?

Thanks. I still don't know who Fara is...I'm no true fan. That sucks lmao.

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Caat01

ok fara was or is a character of the SF comics. she was supposed to be on SF2 but was replaced by miyu and fay also was fox girlfriend (she is considered the true fox girlfriend ) if i remenber well. she introduces the Starfox team to the Arwings

i think that cover the basic about her

here is a picture of her

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The Green Fox

:amethyst:*hides in bushes behind although clearly aware of what is going through each of their minds*"he is s..."*stoping and,ducking just before her eyes met his.all his blood rushing to his head.*

Yes???

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StarFoxIII

Yes???

Disregard tyler's spam comment, TGF. Once again, great job on the short story, Yoro :).

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rainfyre66

Aw, this was a great short story! I hope to see more from you.

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