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Guest Kit Airheart

Hello. Very new here...I've recognized some people from DA, so I say hello to you all. And thank you for the welcome, GX.

I did a few fan-pictures myself, but...they weren't very good. I'm not much of an artist; I'm more of a writer. With that, I give you my first, and most likely last, fanfiction:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1887508/1/

If for some reason that doesn't work, then it's in my DA account as well, along with my crappy doodles:

http://kit-airheart.deviantart.com/

I've been working on it for over a year; some people think it's dead, but I assure you it's not...I just haven't gotten around to it. It's a little strange, a little dark, and there's some humor and romance in there...And well, those who have read it said they liked it, so...if you take the time to read it, I really hope you enjoy it :3

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*tear*

I have to be logged into something, is it DA or something?

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Your fanfic is awesome! It's very detailed, something I wish I could do! Gah, I envy you, and I hope you still going on with it!

:P

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Heheh, well, I DO play F-Zero GX a lot... :P

Crappy doodles? What are you talking about? Those are really good!

EDIT: I hadn't watched you on DA yet?!?!? O_o Well, I guess I'll do that now... *watches*

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WOw, you have talent to write.....indeed very impresive....and i dont get impresed so easy....

I have to say it again,great job!!

Awesome! :shock::shock:

Edit after 4 more reads: mmm, Nintendo really could use(and they really need one) a writer with such skills like the ones you have...and yes I read the 18 chapters....

2Edit:mmm so are you planing to finish the stories...in the time that the assault story starts?

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Awww, thanks for that, Steve9. I'm glad I could be up to your standards, heh.

Write for Nintendo? Well, I can keep dreaming. But you wouldn't want someone like me on the staff--I'd make Fox and Krystal get married, thus completely shatterring your already far-fetched dreams XP

You know, once upon a time, I was wanting to finish it before Assault came out...as you xan see, that didn't pan out. I apologize, I am very slow and sometimes just flat out lazy. But I will finish it if it's the last thing I do. It will continue to be post-Adventures, pre-Assault, but I guess the silver lining to me taking so long is that I can adjust some things so it fits better between the games.

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Wow Kit Airheart, that Fanfic is incredible. I really injoyed reading it.

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Write for Nintendo? Well, I can keep dreaming. But you wouldn't want someone like me on the staff--I'd make Fox and Krystal get married, thus completely shatterring your already far-fetched dreams

Im REALLY talking serious, because the first process of a game is the story, and well, the staff of nintendo is out of ideas now(and yea they arent planning to release any game for some time), you may want to send a story to them, and belive me, THEY NEED SOMETHING LIKE THAT(well you can erase the part of when Krys and Fox get married....XP).......

Do you know that they sometimes use fanfics(like the ones you made) to create games?

Pd: im not that kind of dreamer.......

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Im REALLY talking serious, because the first process of a game is the story, and well, the staff of nintendo is out of ideas now(and yea they arent planning to release any game for some time), you may want to send a story to them, and belive me, THEY NEED SOMETHING LIKE THAT(well you can erase the part of when Krys and Fox get married....XP).......

They'll probably get married, anyway...one day ^-^

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:cry: :cry: and another thing,,, i dont say all that stuff,to be the "good looking guy".. is just that im a fan of that kind of writing, and i have some exp. in reading and looking small defects on them, anyway my point is this:

"an artist pollish his skills by discovering new stiles and trying other different ways for making art, also an artist look for some real or fantastic situation, with this he can paint anything..... dont fall in the dark side , dont create art only for please others, create things that come from your hearth, from that bright mind,dont hesitate just let the art flow thru your hands and close your eyes, feel that fantastic power growing into your soul, look at the sky, dream.......and when finaly ,you look at your art, say: this is my creation,my heath and soul are in this; but the most important thing is that i like it......"

as you can see im not very good at making metaphors, but well i think you got the idea,....?

:lol:

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They'll probably get married' date=' anyway...one day ^-^ [/color']

From Starfox Assault:

Tricky: So, Fox! You're here to fight 'em, right? Well, I'm going with ya!

Fox: Aw. I appreciate it, but you're needed here, pal! Besides, I'm leaving Sauria in your care.

Fox: Remember, you're the leader here now, Tricky.

Tricky: ...OK. Mm, I'll do it!

Tricky: Yeah, yeah! I'll take care of things here so you two can come back on your honeymoon!

Fox: What? What are you nuts? Uh... we're not... we're not yet...

Tricky: Not yet?

Fox: Uh... I mean... I mean... This isn't a conversation for children!

Tricky: You said you weren't going to treat me like a kid anymore.

Fox: Then stop acting like one!

Krystal:*Laughs*

Tricky: You're just mad cause you don't want to talk about it.

Krystal: All right. That's enough, boys.

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well.....thx... :lol:

..keep doing a great work!!!, is just...that ,...your writings are something that i havent read in 5 years as a fanfic reader......is new for me...your stile is just awesome.... :D:D :!:

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I have dail-up, so I'l download it later.... It might be some insperation to me.

as far as time, the best work usually takes the longest, although not for me, 13 pages and my fanfic, DarkShift, is mediocare, at best.

Keep goin'!

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  • 4 months later...

*cry* Kit, that was the best fan story I have ever read, heck it's better than most books I've read!!! Oh and what you call crappy doodles look to me to be masterpieces! YOU'RE AN ARTIST AND A WRITER!!!!!!!! Seriously, I mean everything I say here, I'm not just humouring you, I'm being sincere! Keep writing and drawing, you could have a future in it, if you want to. Oh the only dissapointment in the story was the ending where nothing happened between Fox and Krystal, but you couldn't really do anything about that because of SF assault, but I have a suggestion that you would be really good at, Just because Fox and Krystal aren't married yet (well nothing has really happened between them at all) why not have a story after assault where Fox and Krystal actually start to show their love for each other, not get married or anything just like, girlfriend and boyfriend. Something needs to happen already!!! If you get time, I would really like to read something like this written by you. You write in that style that sucks the reader in really well. Keep it up!

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Please look at the date if the last reply before posting.

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