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StarFox Betrayal

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Kursed

well  despite being done with Fan-fics for awhile i think it's time to open up some of my old ones and  finish it.

now currently unlike My friends fan-fics most of my fan-fics have nothing to do with one another, I might start doing that  ,but anyway here's what I have on Starfox: The Betrayal.

Prologue: Fox Mccloud has been Killed by his Friend his Friend, Falco during a mission a betrayal that shook the whole Starfox team has killed Fox Mccloud. It shook me as well Marcus is now without a Father and Krystal is without a husband the one who saved her From Saruia will either Cerinian Fox be able to move on without Fox Mccloud?

“Fox Mccloud My husband has been killed, by one of his so called friend, Falco Lombardi. Someone I thought was our friend I always wondered about his past, which I was never able to figure out. He is now with a Team Called the Hot Rodders I’m not sure whose side they’re on. “  “I regret that I had not seen it sooner.” ”I regret that I couldn’t have saved Fox like I did myself when they tried to kill me.” “I wish I could have prevented it I hope wherever he is he is with his Father.”

“I am left with one young boy to raise and the remaining Starfox team, Tigress Arcnon, Miyu Lynx, Fay Spaniel and Fara Phoenix.” ”Fara and I despise the fact we both had our eyes set for Fox have become great friends.” “We both mourn the loss of Fox Mccloud, Marcus Mccloud my son also mourns the loss of his Father.”

” We must move on. I plan to move out of the Lylat system , but first we must speak to Peppy about Fox’s will. End log.”

Flying In Fox’s Arwing to honor her now dead Husband Krystal descends to the surface followed Closely by the rest of the team as well as Marcus who is only 12. The team lands at the Cornerian Military Base where peppy Office resides. The Funeral for Fox had already been held it was very extensive perfect for Fox he had saved Lylat many times.

The team walked into the base guards accompanying them Incase Falco’s cronies would try at Krystal again or Marcus. Once they walk into Peppy’s office Peppy Greets them “Hello Krystal, Marcus, Team Starfox. ”He started coughing a bit before starting again “I’m as sad as you are about this, but I will proceed with what you all came here for.” He finished holding up Fox’s will he began to read “Dear Krystal and Team Starfox If your reading this it means I’m no longer here to help you.

I want you all to remember me as I was. For Krystal and Marcus I leave you Team Starfox Take care of My dad’s Team I Know your not much of a leader, but it’s time to step up I want you to Guide Marcus till he is old enough to lead the team himself. To Tigress I leave you the Arwings you’ve kept every ship intact through all the time I’ve know you please keep them In good shape Thank you for being My Wife’s Friend through her days of being alone I believe it is you who led her back to me.” Peppy stopped

“That is it. “He replied “I’ll see you Krystal and Marcus I hope you can move on well without Fox I know how much of a blow to you this is. Krystal nodded and hugged Peppy he hugged back. “I need to get going Peppy I hope Coneria can do well without us.” Krystal said with a Salute before leaving his office and back out to their ships then took off and headed into space to the Great Fox. Once there on the Great fox Krystal broke out of tears into Tigress Arcnon’s stomach the large tiger tried to comfort her “Why did he have to Go Tigress?” “I guess it was just his time Krystal.” Tigress replied. “I know but I could have saved him.” Krystal replied still crying. “You know very well you couldn’t have done any more than you did.” Tigress replied.

Marcus clung to his mother’s leg trying to comfort her also. Krystal sniffed then stopped Crying as the Great Fox docked in the Galatae. Krystal walked out of the great fox into the hanger she turns back sensing someone behind her someone familiar. She sees Fox and James standing next to each other the two seem like ghost partially transparent. “Fox…James?” Krystal asked walking to them ignoring Tigress and Marcus who were looking at her strangely. The two ghost looked up at her “Never give up My daughter.” James said. “Never Ever give up Krystal.” Fox said the two then disappeared “Wait I need you!” she shouted, but she was too late they were gone. Krystal turned around to See Marcus and Tigress looking Concernedly at her “Are you alright?” they asked. “I’m fine Tigress let’s get out of here.” Krystal replied walking out of the hanger, through the hall and towards the turbo lift. Tigress and Marcus looked at each other then nodded following close behind Krystal. The turbo lift brought them up to the bridge Krystal walked out First then Marcus and then Tigress. Krystal sat down in Fox’s chair closing her eyes to think “Activate Sub-space Drives Tigress.” She said a little Darkly. Tigress stayed silent but activated the drive A large portal opened up in front of the Galatae it entered and was suddenly in a large cylindrical tube of blue energy, Sub-space. Will Krystal and the remaining Starfox team find anything useful on the other side of the portal will Krystal be able to settle down and relax?

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Scott7

Very sad Begining... But it sounds its sounds like its going to become interesting.

Your pretty at this sort at this sort of thing, I'm looking forward to hearing the rest.

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Kursed

Ask and you shall receive  unfortunatly I only have chapter 1 on this.

Chapter1:

Krystal breathed Deep as she concentrated on what was to come with her husband dead and Falco now their enemy it was a lot to think about.

About an hour later the Galatae exits Sub-space re-entering Real space in a System Far From Lylat.

“Location Sol System” Serena the White Fox Hologram of the Ship board AI said appearing in front of Krystal.

“SOL?” Tigress asked getting up and walking to the holodisplay in the middle of the bridge and brining up a sub-space node map “There’s no Subspace Node from Lylat to Sol.” She muttered. Krystal got out of her chair and looked at the map too. “Odd it seems we’ve either found a new sub-space portal or something malfunctioned.” Krystal said “M-m-mommy where are we?” Marcus asked shaking. “Don’t Worry Marcus.” Krystal assured her son patting his head.” Tigress get the  fighters ready I want  us to be ready at a moments notice."KRystal told Tigres  the Large Tiger nodded.

The Galatae Orbited Pluto able to evade the Terran’s for now, but for how long? the Arwings put in boxes we won’t loose them in battle, I owe Fox that much.” She said to Tigress muttering the last part. Tigress Nodded and ran to the turbo lift to get to work in the hanger.

Meanwhile back In Lylat at the Hot rodders base of operation.

“What you missed her!” Falco complained to the Hot rodder that was assigned to kill Krystal who had just returned with the bad news.

“Want something done do it yourself. Falco complained getting out of his chair and stomping off down the hall. Katt Monroe came to him.” She’s not In Lylat anymore Falco. “Great now she’s going to bring a whole armada after us!” Falco Complained.

Back in Sol Krystal was sitting in a holodeck in a Zero-G environment Floating in space she was trying to meditate on what had happen over the last 2 days it all had happened so Fast. It was then

That she had realized that it wasn’t Falco who had tried to kill her. She opened her eyes, deactivated the holo projection and walked out of the Holodeck walking towards the hanger she jumped into Fox’s Arwing the only one to be left out she looked deep into the console as if it had some deep meaning to it. Closing her eyes remembering the good times she had with Fox. She still couldn’t believe it had come to this. She slowly fell asleep in the cockpit.

Her dreams included the many times Fox and herself had tried to kiss or have a romantic moment, but were always interrupted.

Warning sirens Flared onboard the Galatae Waking Krystal from her meditation she jumed out of Fox's arwing running, towards the bridge taking the captain’s chair once on the bridge “What is it?” She asked in a worried tone.

“Unknown ships approaching we detected weapons firing, but not towards us also we have a report of two smaller cruiser size ships destroyed.” Tigress replied as the rest of the Team got to the bridge. Krystal thought for a moment closing her eyes. She opened them then said. “If it gets to close disable it, I will be in the boarding party.” “Miyu, Fay, Fara your with me, Tigress take care of Marcus and stay here to provide us tactical data let’s move!” she added everyone nodded.

Miyu, Fay and Fara Followed Krystal down the Turbo lift and into the hanger, Krystal opened the ramp of a boarding craft, ran up it into the pilot’s seat. Fay, Miyu a Fara ran up the ramp and buckled down in preparation for the launch.

Marcus sat down in the Captains chair as Tigress controlled the beam cannons targeting disabling the pirate vessel once it’s engine was disabled she disarmed the weapons then she launched the boarding craft after making sure everything was clear.

Krystal piloted the craft into the bays of the pirate ship it all seemed quiet just a few lifeboats and fighters were in the bay. The Four girls (Krystal, Miyu, Fara and Fay) got into Eva suits then out of the boarding craft and began their boarding operation towards the Bridge, down a long hallway Fara didn’t say anything remaining calm, but a little jumpy “Isn’t it a little odd that nobodies here?” Miyu asked over the comm. channel the four where using as they walked down the hallway. “Yes Miyu it is, but keep on your guard I don’t like this.” Krystal replied. “I’m not picking up anyone nearby.” Fay said using her medical tricorder to scan for life forms. “I don’t sense anyone nearby either Fay, but I’m getting faint brain patterns.” Krystal replied as the group finally got to the door to the bridge.  The girls entered the bridge of the disabled ship, turning on the lights all of them ,but Krystal shrieked in fear  as they spotted ghost. Quickly Fay grabbed one side of Krystal and Fara  the other while Miyu held her torso  as they all picked up Krystal and  Ran out of the bridge back towards the shuttle, once back In the shuttle Miyu fired up the engines and rushed back to the galatae On the way there Fara informed Tigress  “Start up the subspace drives and quickly get out of here the disabled ship is haunted!” the shuttle  hastily landed in the docking bay, the galtae jumped seconds after that. Everyone was so scared and in such a rush they barley heard what Krystal had to say.

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evilwaffles

Nice job, I didn't think someone would do the unthinkable, kill off Fox O_o

Sad start, but it looks like it has great potential for a great story. :yes:

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EazyIN

Epic...just truly...epic...And I ain't sayin' that as a friend, it takes a lot for me to like literature...

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Kursed

Nice job, I didn't think someone would do the unthinkable, kill off Fox O_o

Sad start, but it looks like it has great potential for a great story. :yes:

I like to explore the darker side of krystal's life sometimes don't worry though My next one will not be sor Darn Chapter2 coming soon.

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Scott7

That was a little quicker then i expected. Your putting very good Detail into this, Though i can't help but wonder what Connection The Portal and the ship have to do with Krystals vision.

I look forward to the next enrty. k_e_smile.gif

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Kursed

That was a little quicker then i expected. Your putting very good Detail into this, Though i can't help but wonder what Connection The Portal and the ship have to do with Krystals vision.

I look forward to the next enrty. k_e_smile.gif

This is a very old fan-fic of mine so i had the prolouge and chapter one up already

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Guest DRL

This is something really interesting,

I never thought Falco would betray the

Team... Perhaps he was jealous of Fox?

(You know, Falco is up there with Fox

in skills, but Fox is the leader).

...And sorry if I am spoling anything,

but what about...  :slippy: ? :|

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Kursed

This is something really interesting,

I never thought Falco would betray the

Team... Perhaps he was jealous of Fox?

(You know, Falco is up there with Fox

in skills, but Fox is the leader).

...And sorry if I am spoling anything,

but what about...  :slippy: ? :|

I'll explain that later.

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Scott7

This is a very old fan-fic of mine so i had the prolouge and chapter one up already

Makes it that much easier.

I'm terrible when it comes to making something from scratch But If i Have something to base it off of, ideas flow through a little easier and Addon to itself a little better. You've done great so far, i hope the next is just as good.

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Guest DRL

I'll explain that later.

Oh, okay...

Is he going to be allright?

:lol:

O-Kay, the story is G00D... And I am

not sure, but are there some Freespace

elements thrown in? :?

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Kursed

Oh, okay...

Is he going to be allright?

:lol:

O-Kay, the story is G00D... And I am

not sure, but are there some Freespace

elements thrown in? :?

yeah i couldn't think of a better name for the ship so yes the Galatae is from fresspace the name only though.

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Guest DRL

yeah i couldn't think of a better name for the ship so yes the Galatae is from fresspace the name only though.

I was thinking more about the

subspace node to Sol, actually... :lol:

There is nothing wrong with that,

thought.

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Fluxy

WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol. VERY sad start, almost didn't want to read it, but it is very entertaining, and can't wait to see how the story progresses! :D

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Kursed

I was thinking more about the

subspace node to Sol, actually... :lol:

There is nothing wrong with that,

thought.

Sub-space ,Hyperspace Warp speed , light speed it's all the same thing really just diffent ways of faster than light travel i just prefure sub-space it's kinda cool.

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Guest DRL

Sub-space ,Hyperspace Warp speed , light speed it's all the same thing really just diffent ways of faster than light travel i just prefure sub-space it's kinda cool.

Oh well, it is ok.

I preffer HyperSpeed (for the Hyper  :oops:).

Sub-space is C00L too. I wonder which of

all is faster, but after all I think it depends

on the engine.

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Guest Julius Quasar

I can't wait for your next chapter.

Todd: "I swear I'm gonna kill Falco for this!" *breaks a glass bottle bottom off onto the fence post*

(Feel free to use any of my FC's for this, Kursed)

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evilwaffles

Reece: You and me both Todd. *Readies his blaster*

This is some good work Kursed, keep it up! :yes:

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rainfyre66

Wow, this is a very interesting concept, Kursed. Good job so far, I hope we get more, I'm eager to read more of this story!

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Kursed

Good news i've finnaly kicked my buttox into gear chatper 2 will soon be coming.

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Guest Julius Quasar

Good news i've finnaly kicked my buttox into gear chatper 2 will soon be coming.

Cool, I can't wait! :yes:

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Scott7

Good news i've finnaly kicked my buttox into gear chatper 2 will soon be coming.

And I was starting to get the feeling that you forgot about it k_e_blush.gif

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Kursed

Chapter2:Reunion.

After explaining to the girls that the ghost they  had seen was not real ghost the Galatae entered a dark region of Lylat as it exited sub-space, SectorZ. “Well Krystal we’re back in Lylat Now what?” Tigress asked. “Guess we make a plan now we’ve jumped too much the sub-space drive will need to charge.”Krystal replied. Meanwhile at the nearby HotRodder’s base; “Falco we’re picking up the Starfox mother ship near our SectorZ outpost.”Katt informed the blue falcon in front of her.  “Your kidding me  Krystal wouldn’t be that stupid.”  Falco replied.” No Falco look.”  Katt replied showing Falco the readouts.. he grabed them  bitterly and looked them over  ‘Looks like you’ve slipped up this time Krystal and it will be your last mistake.’ Falco thought.

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