TheRedFox8 3 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 As do I, mate. I write depressing stories the best I've found out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FoxMcCloud 98 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 Are you kidding? As I posted somewhere else, I <3 depressing endings, just it needs to have build up and such. It's just me, but when it seems like a very small thing then someone dies, it's just not my thing. : /. But then again, I can sometimes get picky.I'm Sorry, but i get sad when there is a depressed ending, and it feels like a cliff hanger....Plus I like to keep characters, "in Character" And I can't have my favorite character dying, it just makes me feel incomplete But hey! everyone has their ways and I respect that I'm going to shift over to the rest of the Star Fox team (Falco giving Slippy hell), if you want to focus between Fox and Krystal, I can focus on Falco, Slippy, Peppy, and ROB.I am telling you this so you can come up with your next idea.Ok i can do that.Whenever you get the next thread made, just post a link in the forum, so that way we have the dedicated thread.Another thing....We need to come up with a title Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheRedFox8 3 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 Already made it.http://forums.starfox-online.net/index.php?topic=8073.new#new Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FoxMcCloud 98 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 I like!! Especially the Title! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Mr. Mario Report post Posted July 28, 2010 I guess I could give a shot at making the next chapter but it's probably not going to be that good... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mr. Fox13 0 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 Oh my gosh, awesome work on the story guys!! Y'all really expanded on it. I was originally going to have two different endings (the one I have now, and a smiler one to FoxMcCloud's) but, I just didn't have the time to put in on it. I'm glad y'all are teaming up on this, it makes for a better story when there's more then just one furson contributing to it. I guess I could give a shot at making the next chapter but it's probably not going to be that good...I wouldn't say that. I'm sure it'll be great! There's plenty of stuff to expand on in this. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheRedFox8 3 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 Well it was, after all, my idea. And Mr. Nintendo, if you want to further the story, I'm going to put in a part where Falco is chewing out Slippy because he is the one who handles the Arwings. Just don't steal that idea :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Mr. Mario Report post Posted July 28, 2010 I'm going to put in a part where Falco is chewing out Slippy because he is the one who handles the Arwings.Chewing out as in...eating him? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheRedFox8 3 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 The idiom form. Chewing out, jumping down the throat, "I'm gonna KILL ya!"... basically yelling and screaming at him ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Mr. Mario Report post Posted July 28, 2010 I see now.*works on next chapter* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fluxy 139 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 I'm Sorry, but i get sad when there is a depressed ending, and it feels like a cliff hanger....Plus I like to keep characters, "in Character" And I can't have my favorite character dying, it just makes me feel incomplete But hey! everyone has their ways and I respect that I get that. I do like happy endings too, and can write them also well, just sad and depressing endings are what I do best and enjoy the most. But, thus said, if they die stupidly, or for no just reason, that would make me feel pissed, upset, or also incomplete as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mr. Fox13 0 Report post Posted July 28, 2010 Well it was, after all, my idea. I know, I'm just saying I'm glad you and FoxMcCloud expanded on it. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites