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You may've mislabeled Jade's name on her profile information, but nonetheless, great job :D.  I look forward to you joining the RP section, stop by the Luxury Lylat Hotel while you're at it :D

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i can just walk right in and join, or do i have to get permission, Also i fixed my characters :D Thanks for pointing that out for me :D

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i can just walk right in and join, or do i have to get permission, Also i fixed my characters :D Thanks for pointing that out for me :D

No problem :D.  And in stickied RP's, like the Cornerian Bar and Luxury Lylat Hotel, you can come and go as you please.  Not sure about the bar, but for the hotel, just walk right in and register at the front desk :P

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Not sure about the bar

The bar is sticky you can go in a any time, no permission necessary.
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The bar is sticky you can go in a any time, no permission necessary.

No, I mean I wasn't sure how to enter the bar exactly (Introduce character) lol

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No, I mean I wasn't sure how to enter the bar exactly (Introduce character) lol

Just walk in and hope things go swimmingly improv man improv.
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Added a nickname for my FC John. He is going to be referred to as Mav, or Maverick:

John, was just getting to bland.

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<<CLASSIFIED FOUO INFORMATION ONLY>>

Agent Mark McConnelly

Nick Name: Scrubs
Sex: Male
Leaning: Hero
Species: Cornerian Fox
Fur Color- Red Fox, Arms and legs being black. Tail section with a black ring around it

Clothing Style: Business Suits, Professional clothing. Tends to wear Black suits, with dark sunglasses. Earpiece always concealed in his right ear. At other times when it comes to a break, usually Khaki shorts and a black t-shirt.

Weapon: Prefers to use logic and reasoning to win a fight, Will use hands mainly and if needed his 9MM Plasma Pistol.

Body: Medium, built. Can run and jump high. Super athletic and lightweight. Light and quick on his feet, however a weakness at times is getting overwelmed.

Fighting Style: Loves hand to hand combat. His weapons training is par, but can be his downfall, and has been known to be an excellent driver. He can also be a daredevil at times, doing some crazy things with his driving either for his ship (depending on RP, or his SUV)

Personality: A kind-hearted person and a gentleman. He tends to have a soft heart, and a kind soul. He was not gifted with the greatest childhood, and he keeps it mostly sheltered. He tends to help others before helping himself. He comes across as a jerk to those he does not like, but a sweetheart to others.

Bio: <<ACCESS NOT GRANTED, OMITTED INFORMATION FROM HIS BIO--HIDDEN INFORMATION BLOCKED FOR PUBLIC USE>>. His first assignment was at earth as an undercover human, where he took the cover of Cliff, one of Maverick's friend's on earth. He has been friends with John since he started his career in College and has been watching him. Now that John is a member of Star Fox, Mark has been serving as one of Corneria's well known Cyber-Crime security personnel. He has provided cover back on Corneria in the absence of Star Fox on many occasions where planetary or small skirmishes would occur. during his college time with Maverick, he also learned vital skills in computer hacking and general hardware manipulation.


Parents

Cliff McConnelly: DECEASED
Margeret McConnelly: DECEASED

Siblings
Doug McConnelly: DECEASED

Theme
http://alonetone.com/badjuju/tracks/agent-scrubs-theme.mp3

<<DE-AUTHORIZING ENCRYPTION BLOCKS>>
<<GAINING ACCESS, DISABLING SECURITY PROTOCOLS>>
<<ACCESSING CDFC FILE DATABASE>>
<<TOP ACCESS GRANTED>>

Mark McConnelly better known by the CDF as Captain McConnelly, was the Captain of the USS Kestrel, a Modified Intrepid Class starship that was the best of its kind when invented, It housed trans-warp capabilities and phasers that could cut through the hull of a ship like butter. It was the elite Starfleet vessel at the time. It had shields that could withstand the power of 10,000 nuclear bombs. The Kestrel never was never fully commissioned as it was lost from the Alpha Quadrant and sent way out beyond the Delta quadrant as a Deep space science and exploration ship with necessary firepower as a precious ship (Voyager) was lost without proper protection.

He has had 15 years of experience as a Starfleet Captain, during a routine training exercise they were transported by the Atachiri to the Lylat System, which was Far from home. The crew would make it home years later, but without some of their crew and Captain McConnelly who was hit by a virus that transformed him into a Cornerian Fox, and deaged him to the ripe age of 15. He was given special privileges based on his background, sent to an early assignment years later
to earth to recover another human since John had the capabilities and knowledge of human life. The human that he went to recover was John. (See above Character)

When first sent to the Lylat System, he met the Starfox Team and grew to be friends, he gave Starfox Knowledge into Starfleet technology and weaponry to help maintain peace in the Galaxy. He then relived the teenage years, and college years of his life. Regoing through the academy, top of his class. He is bestowed the authority of a Captain as given by General Pepper himself, as Mark has had years of experience in piloting, starships, and etc.. However his experience would only be called upon if necessary, and he doesn't like to flaunt this notion.



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EDIT: 11/17/2014 - Minor changes to the character for updatedness

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A strong arm character hm? We'll put his bio to the test.

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Name: Grant

Sex: Male

Age: 26

Species: Artic/Silver Fox

Fur Color- Artic, solid pattern

Clothing Style: Professional clothing, Military BDUs

Side: Good

Weapon: 9MM Plasma pistol

Body: Medium, built. Athletic, and all around fit.

Fighting Style: Loves hand to hand combat, and is known for his amazing sniping skills, along with his CQB weapons combat.

Personality: Pretty good person to get along with. He seems to have a heart of gold when it comes to talking to people, and others. He tends to be pretty shy around girls, and can be flirty. After all he is a Military member, though sometimes tries to be humble about it.

Bio: Grant is good friends with Mark, which in then turn helped him become friends with John and Jade. Grant and Mark met in the Cornerian Defense Agency (CDA) Academy. They became good friends after a certain food fight incident in the mess hall.

While Mark handles the Information Security, Grant likes to handle the Search and Rescue aspect of things. Grant is still a good computer, but not a hacker, he has basic skills in improvising electronics, and creating improvising objects to create something totally different. He can be a McGyver at times He has been given numerous citations for going out on SAR missions alone, and saving lives. As one of the most decorated, and best member of the CDF Combat Search and Rescue Squad. He is one of those that would do anything to save the hide of another.

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Huh, two soldier type characters, eh? Well, I like them both.

I will admit that Marcus seems a bit powerful, but eh, still a cool character. And that Grant is a lot more balanced in the long run, and definitely took my favorite spot out of these two.

Annnnd, since these are tied to John and Jade, I can only imagine it is due to your story? XD Either way, cool characters.

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How could I balance Mark a bit better. I really do not want to make my characters super powerful. any tips? :)

Yeah its all due to my story xD

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I do get what you are going for, but I would have to say if anything, add a weakness if anything. He has lots of combat talents, make it so he has a small flaw? In this case, it is hard to say because he should be good at all these things, but lowering one would hamper most. So a simple weakness/flaw [in my opinion] would do good. =]

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I do get what you are going for, but I would have to say if anything, add a weakness if anything. He has lots of combat talents, make it so he has a small flaw? In this case, it is hard to say because he should be good at all these things, but lowering one would hamper most. So a simple weakness/flaw [in my opinion] would do good. =]

Awesome once I get back from a Lab, I will add one, gives me some good time to think of one :P

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How could I balance Mark a bit better. I really do not want to make my characters super powerful. any tips? :)

Yeah its all due to my story xD

maybe by not using the words "very" and "super" but maybe not I don't know. :) :friends:

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maybe by not using the words "very" and "super" but maybe not I don't know. :):friends:

I added a weakness, but I will be making some finer additions

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I added a weakness, but I will be making some finer additions

you mean that wasn't there before... :oops: ...I need to start reading these more thoroughly. :P

oh well

Nice job I mean really excellent work :)

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you mean that wasn't there before... :oops: ...I need to start reading these more thoroughly. :P

oh well

Nice job I mean really excellent work :)

Thank you :D

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Ok made some serious edits to Mark, gives you more on his history and etc. Be sure to review it ^-^

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Ok made some serious edits to Mark, gives you more on his history and etc. Be sure to review it ^-^

Way better I mean it was excellent before but... GUYS THE BEST STUFF IN THE WORLD... JUST GOT BETTER!! :lol::friends:

If there was a "like" button I'd click it. :yes:

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Way better I mean it was excellent before but... GUYS THE BEST STUFF IN THE WORLD... JUST GOT BETTER!! :lol::friends:

If there was a "like" button I'd click it. :yes:

I must agree, very nice work. I like what you've done with Mark. I also like the art you've put in to give us an idea of what they look like.

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It usually is good to add pictures.

I will be getting involved with RPs soon. I am in the planning stages now for a good one. Stay posted ^^

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