Afterwards

[Dr. Orange]

I've been thinking.

After the brutal multi-story lines of Command what do you, People of SFO, should happen aftarwards.

Also what happens in between Adventure and Assult. Ran out of ideas for a storyline for my Manga book and need some...Badly.

(SF3D hasn't came out yet! We still got time.)

[Dr. Orange]

All right..... But before I start to tell the story, Remember there's a Copyright.

It's starts right before Krystal comes on board the Great Fox. Fox is talking to General Pepper about the Payment. After that Krystal comes onto the seen. Fox gets embaresed ( ) and R.O.B says.....what he said in Adv.

Next before the next day, fox has a dream about Sadness and Pain. He wakes up startled and goes to get a aspirin. Standing next to the sink tired he says "What was that all about?" and it fades away.

Next it's roughly 7:27 am, An anoucement comes over the loud speeker, "Attention, ariving near Zoness!" Fox suprisingly, jumps out of bed racing to get ready for the new day, falling and stumbling and out of his quarters. Literaly falling out of the room and is greated by Krystal in the Hallway to the bridge. They talk when they arive at the bridge. Krystal making an anouncement saying she want's to join the Starfox Team. Falco being how he is asks "Why should we (pointing around) let you (pointing at her now) in the Starfox Team. Krystal embaresed says "to Repay Fox." Fox also Blushes and Slippy says she should be in the group. Then he leans over to Fox saying "Don't worry, I got you covered! ." Fox with a look on his face says. "Well Krystal do you have any Flying experence with a Fighter, or any type of Mecanical, flying machine?" she responds with "no....But i can learn." Peppy stands up and says "I can teach her Flying techniques, Functions of a Airwing, and how to Barrleroll!" Slippy says he can teach her about the Airwing." Now everyone looking at falco. Falco looks around then saying " I guess I can teach her about being a pilot." with a look. Fox then says "Its settled, Welcome to the team!"

Next day, Its 2:43 pm, They are now passing Solar. Fox, Falco, Slippy and Krystal stand by the window looking at the Burning planet. Krystal says it's amazing, since never seing the amazements of space. Fox replies with a soft "ya" and looking at Krystal. Slippy Walks away stoping Suddenly looking at Falco.....how is tanning. He takes of his shades saying "........What?:mellow: "

They are now all settled in the bridge slippy is working on the jukebox. Peppy sleeping. R.o.b doing computer stuff. Krystal looking at everything and Fox telling what everything is. and for fun i make Falco Cooking in a small looking kitchen outside of the bridge listening to the radio, what I believe is You Are A Tourist by Death Cab for Cutie. Then R.o.b says we are approching Corneria.

I have more of the story but its after a couple of "chapters."

[Sylum]

Oh. Hai guys. Cleaned up the topic for ya. Quit being dicks. Stay on topic. and If you are going to give him advice, See the first reason for the cleanup.

[Drasiana]

Hmm, didn't realize "valid concerns" equated to "being a dick for not doling out asspats".

I will reiterate what I said before:

-What story do you want to tell?

-What characters and relationships do you want to explore?

-Are there any specific locations you want to play with?

-What tone were you aiming for? Comedic? Adventurous? Dark?

My point in saying that you aren't going to change the world with this is that you don't even know what you want to do, and are asking us for ideas. You don't start off with the intention to change the world; it's something that will happen if your themes and story are powerful enough. That'll be quite a feat for a Star Fox fan-project, but it's something to keep in mind in general. You have to know what you want to do before you do it.

Many of us WILL help once you have an idea. But won't you feel a lot better about yourself being able to call the idea your own? (As much as you can with a fanwork, anyway)

[Dr. Orange]

I will reiterate what I said before:

-What story do you want to tell?

-What characters and relationships do you want to explore?

-Are there any specific locations you want to play with?

-What tone were you aiming for? Comedic? Adventurous? Dark?

Many of us WILL help once you have an idea. But won't you feel a lot better about yourself being able to call the idea your own? (As much as you can with a fanwork, anyway)

~The story is supposed to be in between Adv. and Assault. Answering the "How did Krystal get to be a good pilot" "And other questions that were left hanging at the end of Adv.

~The Characters are the Starfox team, General pepper and the military, Katt, Bill, Starwolf, and a Two new characters: a Black Wolf named Stephen or Alex I haven't decided, and a female fox named Rachel. And the relationship is supposed to be between Fox and Krystal, But the idea of the new characters is potability adding a new relationship.

~the location is the Lylat System, But also an idea of some holiday and other stories. And the posibility of a Warp to a Zone called Blackwater Zone.

~ And the Tone was a Adventure with some Humor and comedic attributes. And some Hilarious Happening through the story.

And as for the idea for calling the story my own. It won't just be mine. It will be to the Community of SF-O for helping me. I can't take something and call it my own. Just ain't right.

[Drasiana]

So with your new characters Rachel and Stephen/Alex, do you want to kind of set it up to contrast Fox and Krystal's relationship? That would be interesting. Showing what happened between games is probably a good idea, there's a good chunk of time there to explore what happened, Krystal's past, etc.

Were you thinking about having a main villain, or it just being a kind of episodic thing? Like a new mission every issue or something.

Edit:

Did you ever read Star Fox Sagas? I think it's discontinued but she did a really good job of a Star Fox comic. Would be a fun thing just to read if you like Star Fox.

[Dr. Orange]

For the Rachel and Stephen/Alex thing, I thought of having more of a...... jealousy of better couple kind of thing.

As for Krystal's past, that's a pretty good idea. But I would need to do some serious research.

For a Villain, Stafwolf as for some other baddies now and then.

And the Star Fox Sagas, there were great.

[Thu'um]

ending kystal and lucy is the best, i think it gets us throught command with out raping fox.

as or between adventrues and assualt : krystal learns to fly and apariods apear for first time since their attack 17 years ago so that'd be cool to write about

[Drasiana]

For the Rachel and Stephen/Alex thing, I thought of having more of a...... jealousy of better couple kind of thing.

Do you mean Fox is jealous of them, or they're jealous of him and Krystal? I think it should be the former, personally.

So were you planning on doing it in sort of the style of Star Fox: Sagas?

[ZM Anonymous]

Do you mean Fox is jealous of them, or they're jealous of him and Krystal? I think it should be the former, personally.

So were you planning on doing it in sort of the style of Star Fox: Sagas?

Ooh, Something that should've been asked. Are you going to do the art or is it going to be done by someone else?

[Zzz]

Could a mod please move this topic to the fanfic section?

[Dr. Orange]

Do you mean Fox is jealous of them, or they're jealous of him and Krystal? I think it should be the former, personally.

So were you planning on doing it in sort of the style of Star Fox: Sagas?

More like Fox and Krystal, and Staphen/Alex, and Rachel break up and switch partners. and for doing it in the Star Fox: Sagas, that would be the best way to sum it up.

Ooh, Something that should've been asked. Are you going to do the art or is it going to be done by someone else?

Well it would be better for someone else to do the art if I can find someone, but if no one takes the job, i guess I will. I've always wanted to take some art lessons.

[Fira-Astrali]

Moved to fanworks section.