chaos_Leader 52 Report post Posted August 11, 2011 This is a short but intense "spy thriller" type scene set in the Star Fox setting. There are no cannon characters that make an appearance here, and the scene is made to stand on its own as an independent short story. A Deadly Game of Secrets.pdf I don't feel this scene warrants an official warning, as it doesn't technically meet the criteria, but it is still no less intense. If you feel it needs a warning, feel free to say so. Anyways, have fun, enjoy it, and let me know what you think! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Psygonis 50 Report post Posted August 11, 2011 That's very dynamic, it felt like a scene from The Bourne Identity and such. The story-telling is well balanced, no useless dialog... Really, it was pleasant to read! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Thu'um 260 Report post Posted August 11, 2011 Very cool , a fan fic i actualy found worth reading Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chaos_Leader 52 Report post Posted August 12, 2011 That's very dynamic, it felt like a scene from The Bourne Identity and such. The story-telling is well balanced, no useless dialog... Really, it was pleasant to read! Very cool , a fan fic i actualy found worth reading That's essentially what I constantly strive for as a writer: to write what reads well. Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
