Fox_McCloud Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 ok, since i was last here, they closed the rec room. therefore, it was impossible for people to add to the "multi-author" fanfic that i started there. so i recovered all of the fanfic from my profiles history (thank god!) and will paste it below. It follows an (and then...) format. For example: First poster: Fox entered the brig... (and then...) Second poster: The prisoner looked at him... (and then...) If you still dont get it, just read throug the story. everyones segments are separated and you will get the idea. i am adding to the rules that YOU CAN NOT POST MORE THAN 500 WORDS PER ADDITION. NO LESS THAN 100 WORDS WILL BE ACCEPTED EITHER. since i was the last poster, i need someone else to post in order for the story to continue. the story will continue up untill Marcus (fox's son) finds Falco and forms the Starfox team again. this includes him finding slippy's son and peppy's granddaughter. when it come to this event, i will make the final post and end the story. I will also thank all those who helped and will then start work on another fanfic that will be done the same way. I will not start it though untill this one is done, so if you want to find out what its about and help make it, then finish this one! have fun! I learned about storytelling being more fun when you do it with others, especialy when they can add to it! so, this is a story that will pick up after ending two when fox goes and gets krystal. it will start on Sauria. RULES: 1. no beating up characters brutally 2. no killing characters 3. NO ADULT CONTENT (THIS INCLUDES SEX, PORN, STRONG LANGUAGE, SUGGESTIVE THEMES, ETC.) 4. please make it relevent to the story. none of this "Then a Missile came out of thin air and blew them all to kingdom come" crap 5. the story follows an "and then..." format. write no more than 100 words. after reaching the limit, type "and then...". after that let someone else post before posting again. 6. don't end the story. i created this little game for everyone. after it has been going on for a while, i will end it and lock it so no more is added. 7. the most important rule of all (other than 3), HAVE FUN! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Good Bye Fox Fox waved good bye to his team as his arwing left the GreatFoxII and headed towards Sauria, and the one thing he loved the most. Earlier, after defeating the emporer Anglar, he disbanded the Star Fox team permenantly and decided to find Krystal. He only had one thing on his mind, and that was to ask her a very important question he should have said a long time ago. He landed in an open field and saw Krystal by a small group of rocks. She had recived a message stating that she should come to the field at once but she did not know who sent it. But when she saw Fox get out of the Arwing, her heart filled with joy and her eyes with tears. She ran to him and they hugged each other for a long time. Then Fox backed up some, got down on one knee, and said "Krystal, I'm sorry for the way I treated you. I was wrong to kick you of the team. please forgive me." Krystal nodded and said "Its ok Fox. I understand and I forgive you." Fox was filled with relief. "Krystal," he said,"will you marry me?" Now it was Krystals turn to fill with joy. she embraced Fox so hard that he had to ask her to ease up some. "Yes!" she said. "Yes!Yes!Yes!Yes!Yes!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "...Yes! Yesss.... What is... that?" Krystal asked, perking her ears up. "Oh no," exclaimed Fox. "FOOOOOXXXX!" came a loud cry as a large dinosaur drove towards them. The dino jumped into the air in such a way that law of gravity seemed to be as easily broken as the speed limit. Fox casually pushed Krystal away and stared at the bulky triceratops belly approaching at an unsafe speed. "He seems bigger since the last time we were-OOOF!" Fox made out before he was forced to the ground by the landing Tricky. "You know, you're too old to be jumping around like that, Tricky," Fox said as he pulled himself up. "I can't help it, Fox! I'm too excited. Oh, hey Krystal!" Tricky said, noticing she was nearby for the first time. Krystal giggled, "Hey, Tricky. Nice timing. You caught Fox right in the middle of his proposal to me." Tricky smiled mischievously, "So, I guess you guys really did come back on your honeymoon, heh heh heh! Oh! Speaking of which, I should explain why I'm so excited." Another triceratops crashed through the foliage into the opening, panting heavily, "Tricky! You shouldn't go scaring the planet's visitors! I've told you... Oh, hello!" Tricky smiled, "Guys, I want you to meet my fiancee, Sara." --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Thats Wonderful!" Krystal said. "Congradulations Tricky." said Fox, although he thought, "I never thought it would hapen." "Yea. we're gonna get married in 3 days!" Tricky said. "You will come, won't you?" asked Sara. Krystal looked at Fox. "Its fine with me." Fox said. "But what about your team?" Krystal asked Fox. "Krystal," Fox said, "The team is over. I've disbanded it permenatly this time. I'm not going back this time." Krystals eyes filled with tears. she hugged Fox and said, "Oh Fox! I love you so much!" then turning to Sara, she said "Yes we'll come. And we'll get married as soon as you are done." "Ok!" said Tricky. "Then what are we waiting for?" asked Fox. " Lets make the guest list!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- And so the days passed quickly as Fox and Krystal planned their wedding with Tricky and Sara. Fox and Krystal were treated as royal guests in the large temple-like palace where Tricky now ruled the planet from. However, Krystal began to question whether everything was alright. "Fox," Krystal said after a few days. "Hmmm? What's wrong Krystal?" Asked Fox. "That's what I was hoping to find out. I've know you for a long time and... how could you just give up on your father's work?! I'm thrilled that you decided to come to me, but I just don't know if you'll be satisfied in a life without constant adventures." Krystal had trouble putting her thoughts into words. Fox thought about this for a moment. "She's probably right," he thought to himself, "ever since father died, I've never gone very long without some sort of life-threatening mission." "I honestly don't know, Krystal," Fox said after some time, "I have gotten used to a life of stress and danger, but I swore to everyone that I would never fly again, and I intend to keep my promise." Krystal was taken aback, "You swore you'd never FLY again?!" "Well... yeah? I mean, I told everyone that if I made it through the final mission to destroy the forces of the Anglars, I'd marry you and settle down, never to take another mission," Fox stated. "Well that's just silly, Fox. What would you do if I got kidnapped or something?" Asked Krystal rhetorically. "I'd... well, it's a given that I'd have to save you," Fox responded. "Of course you would. And how much more valuable is the fate of Lylat compared to mine?" Krystal asked. Fox smiled, "That's not a fair question." Krystal smiled, seeing her point taken, "Just promise me this: If Lylat needs you, you'll come out of retirement." "Fair enough, but I don't like that I'll be going back on my word," Fox said. "Tough, you shouldn't make such unreasonable promises," Krystal said, "Now come over here and tell me what kind of lace you prefer on the invitations." --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (That night) Fox: "good night krystal" Krystal: "Good night Fox" fox turned over and fell into a deep sleep. he dreamed that he was getting married to krystal. just as they were wedded and about to kiss, the ground started to shake. the sky turned dark, and trees burst into flame. suddenly, a huge (and i mean HUGE) ship decended onto the planet and into the clearing. the doors opened and Apes came pouring out with guns in thier hands. then fox saw a familiar figure. it looked like andross! the figure spoke and said "BOW BEFORE YOU NEW MASTER, DASH!" then the army opened fire. fox saw himself running with Krystal toward a group of rocks. he pushed over one of them and found a hole. they jumped in and were immerged in darkness. then tricky ran up to them and said "C'mon Fox! I know a way out to saftey!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Fox! Fox! come on fox wake up!" Fox opened his eyes and saw Krystal. "Whats wrong?" he asked as he saw the look of horror on her face. Krystal: "We have to get out of here! Dash has gathered andross's remaining army and launched an attack on the planet!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Fox and Krystal were grabbed by a huge ape. Ape: You two are coming with me Krystal: Let go! Ape: Hey your kind-a cute, hows about a kiss --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sunddenly the ape's face twisted with agony, and he droped Fox and Krystal on the floor and doubled over in pain. Fox realized that Krystal had kicked the ape square in his "family jewels". "Come on!" He said to Krystal as he helped her up. "I know where to go...I think." they ran outside and what Fox saw made him sweat. Everything was exactly like it was in his dream. "If what i saw in my dream was true" he thought,"then we have a way to escape and call for help!" He turned to Krystal, "I know where to go and find Tricky. He can help us." He looked around quickly and saw some rocks that looked similar to those in his dream. when they got to them, he said to Krystal "Move the rocks around until you find a hole." Krystal stared at him and while she did what he said, asked "Fox there coming! Why are we doing this? How do you know where to go?" Fox looked at her and said "Last night i had a dream that this would happen. as soon as it did, we escaped down a hole that was under a rock and we found tricky. he said to follow him to safty. Here it is!" he said as he moved a rock over and exposed a hole big enough for them to jump through. "There they are!" an ape shouted. "get them!" "Go!" he said to Krystal. krystal obeyed and as she hit the bottom, fox had landed next to her. "Where are we?" she asked. "Guys! Thank good-ness your ok! follow me. I Know a way to saftey and where we can call for help." some one said. Krystal looked at fox amazed. the voice was that of tricky! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tricky emerged out of darkness. "See, I told you, Krystal!" Fox exclaimed as they followed Tricky through the cave. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Are we there yet" Fox inquired. They had been traveling for more than twenty minutes."No Fox we still aren't there yet." "How 'bout now"."No Fox" Krystal replied getting very irritated. "Are we ther..." *smack* Krystal slapped Fox so hard he almost fell. "Will you shut up!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Jeez Krystal no need to be so edgy" Tricky said in a mildly scared voice. "No Need, NO NEED!!!!, I just had my perfect day ruined, The $2000 dress I bought is useless now, I'm running from an a**h*** who is the reason I'm miserable in the first place, and if that...Man doesn't stop asking about when we're gonna get to where ever we're going I think I might just kill myself." --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "uh guys." Fox started. "What is it now Fox" Krystal said through her gritted teeth. "I think we're here" In front of them was a huge door. Tricky steped on a pad and the door opened. "get in quick!" he said, as they ran through the door, fox pulled something out of his pocket. he pushed a button and said "ROB, this is Fox. Dash has taken an army and launched an attack on the planet sauria. we need help." then he turned to krystal, "I made a promise not to get involved anymore." he said. "But i swore that i would if i had to." " I know." said Krystal. tears appeared in her eyes. sh huged Fox and said, "I love you." a voice came through on the radio, "Fox, this is ROB. Falco and Slippy are on thier way." (and then...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gene Inari Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Falco flicked on the comm in his Arwing, checking the channel, "Man Slipp, I'm getting really tired of picking' at Dash's cronies and saving Fox's tail when I want a nice vacation." "Aww, c'mon Falco, it isn't that bad is it?" Slippy said in his usual optimistic tone. "We get to see Fox again!" "Yeah, yeah. He owes me big time now." Too bad Slippy's natural enthusiasm didn't rub off on Falco. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fox_McCloud Posted January 30, 2008 Author Share Posted January 30, 2008 "Fox, can you hear me? This is Falco." "Falco!" replied Fox, "Dash has started an attack on Sauria! We need help." with that he turned to Krystal. "I don't Want you to get hurt." he said. "Slippy, you there?" "Right here Fox!" came the frogs reply. "What 'cha need?" "I need you to pic up krystal and get her back to the Great Fox II. Keep her safe." "But who will help Falco?!" Slippy exclaimed. "I will." fox replied. "But you Promised-" "Yeah, well, i made a second promise to someone more important." Said fox. "meet uss at these co-ordinantes. Fox out." He turned back to Krystal. "I never break a promise if i can help it." he said. and she embraced him and kissed him. after a moment, they broke apart, and fox turned on his mike, "ROB, how many missles does the Great Fox II Have?" "4 missle pods, each with 25 individual fireing missles." ROB replied. "We are at full load." "Good." fox said. "Because ill need you to cover slippy." Slippy landed at the co-ordinates fox had given him. "Dont worry Krystal. as soon as im back, we'll get married. I know someone who can do it for us." said fox. Krystal's eyes filled with tears as she hugged him again. "I love you Fox! Please stay safe!" "Don't worry. ive made it this far." he replied. "i have a feeling that someones watching over me." he said as he thought of his father, James McCloud. Krystal and Slippy landed in the Great Fox II's hanger bay. Krystal leapt out and darted for the Bridge. when she got there, she opened up a com to fox. "Fox, can you hear me?" she asked anxiously. "I hear you Krystal." came fox's reply. "Now lets go Kick some ape ass!" (and then...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest krystal08 Posted February 8, 2008 Share Posted February 8, 2008 Krystal was so anxious about Fox safety that she had a view of Fox who have hurt so she get in her arwing to go help Fox and Falco.She says to Slippy: -"If you want to let me here and far of Fox you can forgot this!" And Slippy say: -"But i have to keep you in safe!What will Fox say if..." -"Shut'up!I go help my love and if you don't want to help me well stay here and pray for me and Fox!!!!"Say Krystal. She run in the Great Foxll the fast she can run and grab a blaster in her race for helping for Fox before it will be too late.She arrive to her arwing in just one minute but she feel this like this has take an hour.She jump in her ship and say to her-self: -"I love you too much to let you there juste with Falco!I love you too much for let you do this without my help!" So she start the engine and push the gaz.Just in the moment the Arwing go out of the Great Foxll she have a REALLY BAD felling about her decision but she don't listen herself and go to help Fox. (and than...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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