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The great storm a fichina sealed the young fox Jackie in a snow cave. She cuddled up next to a wall to keep warm. The freezing temperatures might freeze the fox to death if she wasn't saved in time. Her whole body was shaking in fright. Would she make it out alive? Looking toward the left she saw another cave entrance. Jackie ran over to it but when she got there, she heard noises from the sky. When she looked up there was an epic battle in the sky.

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IN the climate control center.

"Mom you sure about this."KAri asked.

"Pretty sure someone is out there that isn't normally here."Krystal said opening her eyes.

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Para was hunched over against the cave's wall, cloak enveloped over his body, and was silently watching the fighters' numers diminish with every explosion.  "...You know, staying out in a blizzard like so might be unprominant for a vixen, such as yourself."  He said to Jackie; his head turned slighty to her and his voice echoing in the cave.

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" Get in the hoverLand master Kari I'll gun!"Krystal shouted.

"Right mom!" Kari replied running to the hoverlandmaster and taking the driver seat followed by her mother who took the  Gunner seat.

"All systems go Floor it Honney!"Krystal shouted as Kari slammed the gas down the hover landmaster  practically  jump from the sudden rush of power to the engine

"MOM WE GOT ENEMY ON OUR TAIL!" Kari shouted worriedly

"Calm down Kari I got this."Krystal said shooting the two fighters that  were tryign to hit them down.

"Para this is Krystal I know your out there are you alright?"Krystal asked over a comm channel she knew Para was usually on as she defended the Landmaster with teh cannon.

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"I'm just fine,"  He responded back "I just happened to stumble across a vixen wondering around outside the cave I'm in.  How are things on your end?"

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"oh the USual mess."Krystal replied "THE USUAL MESS?! MOM!" Kari interrupted "I'll pick you two up just relay me the coordinates I'm a little busy to track you down telepathically."  Krystal finsihed.

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Para fumbled with his communicator but the map was on the fritz.  He grunted, "Radar's offline.  I'm unable to send you them.  Just try and fend off for awhile and then start back on your search.  My sabers' crimson glow might give away our position is Snow Bandits wonder by and I REALLY would disallow this until I knew the area was safer."  He looked back down at his arm communicator and began fixing it as soon as he finished informing Krystal.

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"That's Great."Krystal muttere sarcasticly after she cut the link "Kari We've gotta find Para and that other lifeform  keep searching and trust your instincts."

Kari nodded and continued their search while Krystal fended off the ships that attacked them leaving the ones that didn't engage them alone.

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Jackie looked at Para. "My name is Jackie and I am sorta lost." She replied. She pointed her finger to the direction of the collapsed entrance. "My ship is over there." She informed Para.

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Para nodded and pushed off the wall, "Good.  Then you've found a worth ally.  Lead me to your ship;  I'll be able to repair it to the best of my abilities."  He said and removed his cloak, offering it to Jackie.  "You seem a little cold without any winter gear.  Here; use my cloak for now."

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"Thank You!" Jackie said as she accepted the cloak. She led para to her ship. It had quiet a few dents and marks on it. "Yea, this is it...my ship." She said barely using any enthusiasm.

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Para slowly walked up to the ship and placed a hand down on it, examing the damage it dealt.  "Impact dents are clearly shown.........Scorch marks that origin from possible laser fire.......Scratches possibly due from hard surfaces, such as glacier towers and sheet ice....."  He said and walked around to the back of the ship.  "Any further damage dealt back here?"  He asked pointing to the rear of the ship.

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THe Hover landmaster stopped near Jackies Ship Throwing a blanket of Snow over her ship and anyone nearby Krystal popped her head out of the top of the Landmaster "sorry bout that Student driver."KRystal said "MOM!"Kari shouted. The back of the landmaster opened to reveal a troop transport room with seats. "Good thing Tigress upgraded these things"Krystal muttered

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Para shivered the snow off and patted himself down.  "Reason sought.  Her ship seems as though she were tailed and apparently shot out of the sky."  He exclaimed kneeing down beside the brake thruster and rubbing the long scratch.  "Thats my theory, hypothetically speaking."

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"Not Surpizing seeing what's going on here some civil war or something."Krystal muttered "Pile in before you two freeze to death."Krystal replied.

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Para shook his head and stood up.  "If you know what a Super Soldier is, then you should know that our bodies tend to cope with our surroundings farely quickly."  After saying this, his fur color changed from a scarlet red to an icey arctic blue.  He looked at his arms and hands, then to Krystal.  "See what I mean?"

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Jackie jumped into the landmaster. She hopped into the back seat and fell asleep. She didn't snore at all. Her body was completely exhausted from all the excitement that happened today. She slept like a rock that night.

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Krystal set a warm Blanket over Jackie befor returning to her gunner seat "Now we need to worry about getting out of this storm any Idea's Para?"Krystal asked

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"Sure beats the heck out of walking."  Para acceptantly noted and hopped onto the top of the Landmaster.  "Head 20 degrees south-east, then 15 degrees to the east, and we should run into it in no time."

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"Sure beats the heck out of walking."  Para acceptantly noted and hopped onto the top of the Landmaster.  "Head 20 degrees south-east, then 15 degrees to the east, and we should run into it in no time."

"alright " krystl said closing the hatch and kari started driving in the direction Para had told Krystal."Now hopefully they'll go about their buissness and ignore us."Kari replied with  a sigh of releif.
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"Not everyone is as passive as you may think.  Bandits are unpredictable at times since they tend to be reasonable at first, then uncooperative the next."  He explained to everyone through the Landmaster's speakers and served as a lookout.

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