What should I write about in a fan-fic?

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

I've been without SF for a while now, and I started getting back into it recently. I just have one problem: I want to write a fan-fic, and don't know if I should do one thing or another.

Option A- Re-write my first fanfic: StarFox: Avenged. I havn't gotten too far into it (8 chapters) and I think I could have done ALOT better with it. More detail, better storyline, better plot, less jumps. More "Life of James McCloud" stuff instead of everything else. Add in the other stuff I put into it after a few more chapters of James.

Option B- Write a completely different storyline. If I go with this one, it has to be after the DS game. I'd like to take the few endings I liked into it. Krystal joining starwolf, Fox joining the F-Zero look-alike wiht Falco, Team Falco, Kursed, and Peppy being the General of Corneria. The good endings lol.

Option C- Write both. I mean, it woudl take a me a little longer, but it's not impossible. Besides, I might just write a few chapters for Avenged and then go on to the other story for a few chapters when I get tired of writing for the first fic.

Here's my problem...>_>

I don't know wich one to pick, and I need some feedback about my first story if that's what you guys want. What I could put into it, what I'd need to take out, things like that. What YOU guys woudl like to see. True die-hard SF fan opinions, here.

OR/AND I'd like some opinions on what I should write about it the unkown fan-fic. Add any characters you want, or awsome storyline plot, or something just that YOU guys would like to see in a fan-fic.

I'll come back when I see a few replies and tell you what my final decision will be after I get some.

Oh, and pelase add some details in your ideas if any. Any at all. lol. Thanks.

-Yorokobi

[Kursed]

if you want you can use my command ending.. or one of my ideas...

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

if you want you can use my command ending.. or one of my ideas...

I remember reading it once. Could you give me a link? And thank you. I'll be sure to give full credit on the idea on fan-fic.net and this site as well. Giving a direct link to it once I begin writing it. ^_^

[Kursed]

I remember reading it once. Could you give me a link? And thank you. I'll be sure to give full credit on the idea on fan-fic.net and this site as well. Giving a direct link to it once I begin writing it.

I'll tell you here...

A few months pass after the defeat of the Anglars by Starwolf. Krystal decides to quit Starwolf a day later after her leave she had startling discovery the pains in her lower abdomen weren't what she thought they were she was Pregnant A few months and a year later during Marcus's first birthday Krystal, Tired of being ridiculed for leaving Fox reluctantly left Marcus in the Caring hands of Peppy and Lucy then sadly left the Lylat system. Changing her name to Kursed to fit her past life she became a bounty hunter collecting rewards on the scum of the Galaxy ,but she still thinks of Fox and her son Marcus. Will she ever return to them?

I've done many roleplays on this ending... and  by the time she comes back Fara or some other girl is with Fox playing as Marcus's foster mother whom he belives is his real mother so not only does Kursed have to deal with Fox when she comes back ,but also getting through to her son.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk34/Vixen2005/ForKursed.jpg  - this is marcus reading the birthday card Krystal left him at his first birthday ,but that would be like when he's older...

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

I'm not into the whole "Marcus" ending...but....it wouldn't hurt to try. I'll see what other people's ideas would be on this. I'm not a big "Marcus" fan. But that's just becasue I'm not keen on giant plot changes. Kursed was alot for me to handle already lol. PLus, I'm reading a fan-fic by SyxxFox that is jsut...amazing. That's what's got me hooked again. But I don't want to have Fox go all...rouge. Still keep his composure as a good leader and  all that good stuff.

Idk. I'll ahve to think about it like I said. Thank  you, though. ^_^

[Kursed]

I'm not into the whole "Marcus" ending...but....it wouldn't hurt to try. I'll see what other people's ideas would be on this. I'm not a big "Marcus" fan. But that's just becasue I'm not keen on giant plot changes. Kursed was alot for me to handle already lol. PLus, I'm reading a fan-fic by SyxxFox that is jsut...amazing. That's what's got me hooked again. But I don't want to have Fox go all...rouge. Still keep his composure as a good leader and  all that good stuff.

Idk. I'll ahve to think about it like I said. Thank  you, though.

I've got other idea's

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

Well share some. I'll take any and all into consideration. I might even mix a few together, so by all means. Tell me any ideas you have. 

[Kursed]

Well share some. I'll take any and all into consideration. I might even mix a few together, so by all means. Tell me any ideas you have. 

well how about the whole team gets into F-zero because nobody is threatening lylat? or something like that?

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

Hm. I like that. The whole team...hm. A giant race. Krystal/Kursed would be sent on a bounty for one fo the racers becasue he's got a 50,000 credit bounty on him for other things against a few...certain people. Nothing illegal against Corneria, but against the people.

She has to go undercover to find out who the racer is, so she decides the best way to find out is to participate int he race. Her and Fox bump into eachotehr every once in a while, but nothing big at first. Keeping up the suspense for a while. You know?

Then the racer she was sent to take down, she finds out is Fox. And the "informant" that ave her the op mission was...idk. I want to say Andross, but that would be too...cleche. Maybe someone else. Idk yet.

And to keep people from being all "It's StarFox! We're going to loose!/We should let him win becasue he saved Lylat!", they go under different names, and even go out and dye their fure/skin/feathers. So it adds on to the suspense even more lol.

[Kursed]

Hm. I like that. The whole team...hm. A giant race. Krystal/Kursed would be sent on a bounty for one fo the racers becasue he's got a 50,000 credit bounty on him for other things against a few...certain people. Nothing illegal against Corneria, but against the people.

She has to go undercover to find out who the racer is, so she decides the best way to find out is to participate int he race. Her and Fox bump into eachotehr every once in a while, but nothing big at first. Keeping up the suspense for a while. You know?

Then the racer she was sent to take down, she finds out is Fox. And the "informant" that ave her the op mission was...idk. I want to say Andross, but that would be too...cleche. Maybe someone else. Idk yet.

And to keep people from being all "It's StarFox! We're going to loose!/We should let him win becasue he saved Lylat!", they go under different names, and even go out and dye their fure/skin/feathers. So it adds on to the suspense even more lol.

as for the dye for starfox no racers don't care who the other racers are.

Actually I was thinking the whole team as in krystal slippy,falco and fox all joined F-zero.

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

I know. I was just...idk. I wanted to put a twist on it Lol. It's not a bad idea. That and the "Marcus" one, either. 

I'll wait until I get other input on the ideas.  I gtg to work. I'll come back when I can.

[Kursed]

I know. I was just...idk. I wanted to put a twist on it Lol. It's not a bad idea. That and the "Marcus" one, either. 

I'll wait until I get other input on the ideas.  I gtg to work. I'll come back when I can.

well i have to admit that one is interesting.

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

well i have to admit that one is interesting.

which one?

[Kursed]

which one?

the f-zero plot you came up with/

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

the f-zero plot you came up with/

Yay! ^_^

[Kursed]

Yay!

i'd like to see how kursed comes to teh conclusion that her target is fox and then how she deals with it since she knows fox and all I'd also like to  see the Reason of all people it has to be fox has he been wining to much is tehre a certain driver he happened to  bump into and make crash?

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

i'd like to see how kursed comes to teh conclusion that her target is fox and then how she deals with it since she knows fox and all I'd also like to  see the Reason of all people it has to be fox has he been wining to much is tehre a certain driver he happened to  bump into and make crash?

I'll have to think about it. I just need to start writing, and it'll come to me. Right now, I'm at a frend's house, so I can't write anything right now. Plus it's REALLY dark, so idk...>_<

[Guest krystal08]

here is what i say, don't do like my, don't start an other fic. I'm doing it, and i'm realizing the other is just...too crappy for even say i did it... in my opinion, i would re-write and continue your first fic. I said what i have to say, now its you to choose ^.^

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

here is what i say, don't do like my, don't start an other fic. I'm doing it, and i'm realizing the other is just...too crappy for even say i did it... in my opinion, i would re-write and continue your first fic. I said what i have to say, now its you to choose ^.^

If I do that, I'll be adding alot of descriptions, details, feelings, ect. Things that make a story...juicy! You know?

Plus I'll be putting more story with Vixy and James. I feel that I didn't put enough in there.

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

It just hit me. I'm goig to start writing after right after I post this.

I'm going to start writing it off with how the original StarFox team got together. Peppy, James, and Pigma.

Then after that, I'll write about how James met Vixy.

Then I'll go on about Fox's birth. Then after that, I'll write about Vixy's death.

Then 7 years after Fox's birth, I'll do some side storyling about Krystal's birth. Fox was born 18 BLW (Before Lylat Wars) and Krystal was born 11 BLW.

Considering that they'll end up meeting and BOTH be important, I'll want to do a few chapters here and there about her and her progression through adult hood.

I'll also write about her parent's death, a fight in the tribes or something caused by Andross, and I'll throw in some extra plost here and there if I can.

Then after all of that, I'll write about StarFox 64.

Oh, and before the StarFox 64 series, I'll add in Fara and Miyu and maybe even Saru. A tiger, Vixen, and Dog. Lol.

Idk. Depends on how I feel when i reach that point.  What do yall think?

[Kursed]

It just hit me. I'm goig to start writing after right after I post this.

I'm going to start writing it off with how the original StarFox team got together. Peppy, James, and Pigma.

Then after that, I'll write about how James met Vixy.

Then I'll go on about Fox's birth. Then after that, I'll write about Vixy's death.

Then 7 years after Fox's birth, I'll do some side storyling about Krystal's birth. Fox was born 18 BLW (Before Lylat Wars) and Krystal was born 11 BLW.

Considering that they'll end up meeting and BOTH be important, I'll want to do a few chapters here and there about her and her progression through adult hood.

I'll also write about her parent's death, a fight in the tribes or something caused by Andross, and I'll throw in some extra plost here and there if I can.

Then after all of that, I'll write about StarFox 64.

Oh, and before the StarFox 64 series, I'll add in Fara and Miyu and maybe even Saru. A tiger, Vixen, and Dog. Lol.

Idk. Depends on how I feel when i reach that point.  What do yall think?

hmm have miyu and Fay stay in till krystal gets tehre so krystal has someone to talk to..as far as girl stuff and if you want I could type up in pm what happened to cerinia if you want.

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

The Tigress and Vixen...stay until Krystal becomes a part of StarFox? Or When Adventures starts? You wording confused me.

On the other part, yes. The fate of that planet will be VERY appreciated. I'd like to know, as wll. I've done some research, but  havn't found much.

[Guest krystal08]

it would be awesome dude!!!

[Hatsworth III]

why don't you watch some animes? they always give me inspiration.

[Yorokobi-Ageru]

why don't you watch some animes? they always give me inspiration.

I've actually been reading some SF fan-fics, beleive it or not. That's what inspired me to be all like "I want to start writing again!"