GC's Detective Agency

[Gamecuber459]

Gamecuber459 again. I'm making a whole new topic, because this one is really special and important, and I don't want my poems and artwork to clutter up this topic. I'm making this Artwork topic all about my new mystery series called "Inspective Detective". It may take me a week to think up a new case, but it will all be worth it. I hope I might be able to publish this series someday.

Meet David Thompson, just your average 7th Grade student. He didn't have many friends, no popularity, and he at least had a girlfriend. To him, he though he had everything. That was...until his father was murdered. A man had broken into the house at Midnight on March 13, 1995. He was searching for money, jewelry, or anything he could still. David's father, Virgil, had been getting a mid night snack at the time. The robber snuck behind him and stabbed him. David woke up to his fathers painful cries and ran downstairs to find the knife in his fathers back. The man soon began to attack David. David held him back for a while, but began to lose. Cornered, the man struck David with a metal stick and took off.

His girl friend had spent the night and was upstairs where David told her to stay. She got curious and went down the stairs to find David and his father. David was conscious while his father was dead. He called the police and even watched them investigate the house. David realized things the police didn't, found clues that would normally be useless, and even solved the mystery. David had always loved reading detective books and he always new the culprit before the end. He read things from "Encyclopedia Brown" to "Nate the Great" when he was younger.

David didn't really think of himself as a detective at first. Soon, people around the High School kept congratulating him of his amazing detective work. His popularity soon began to skyrocket, but that didn't stop him from sticking with his best friend, Nick Bratt, and his girlfriend, Ashley Johnson. It is now 2000 A.D.; five years after his fathers death, and David, Nick, and Ashley have now banded together to form the D.N.A. Detective Agency.

Now in High School, the three solve crimes and cases around Warsaw, Indiana that stump the police. "I always knew midnight snacks would kill my father someday", David would say as he remembered his father's death. With his new detective work, and his friends with him, David can now over come anything. With they're minds at work, and their friendship together, will the D.N.A. Detective Agency solve any crime. Who knows?

[Gamecuber459]

Here's the first case, hope it turns out better than suspected

Case 1: The School Dance Death

It was the day of the School Dance at Warsaw Community High School. The streamers were hanging and drooping all around the school as students headed for class. Like any other day, the hallways were crammed with students rushing to class. One particular student wasn't running for class. He wore a green jacket over a black T-shirt, with carpenter jeans and white Nikes. His red hair waved in the air as he ran toward his friend ahead of the crowd. "David", yelled Nick as he continued, "David, wait up".

He eventually caught up to David, wearing his blue shirt and jeans. He also had a pair of Nikes and was wearing his trademark sunglasses. Nick could see Davids brown eyes and hair as he turned around to see his friend. I cant wait for the school dance, Nick said as he slowed his pace to match Davids, Its going to be great, everyones going. I just hope you arent planning anything stupid to embarrass yourself again, David said. That vanilla pudding was asking for it David, Nick said as he recalled last years dance. Nick had accidentally tripped and knocked the concession tables vanilla pudding all over him. Accidentally isnt the right word to use if you were there.

Have you seen Ashley around? David asked, I cant find her anywhere. Shes at her locker, I passed her on my way here, the great detective can find clues, but cant find his girlfriend, Nick laughed. Arent we a funny guy, David said as he rolled his eyes and they entered the classroom. When they finished Math, they caught up with Ashley and had English, Science, P.E. and Study Hall together. They always joined the same classes so that they could help each other with homework and projects.

After school everyone went home and got ready for the dance. David, Nick, and Ashley agreed to meet at the front of the school before heading in. David and Nick were both wearing blue tuxedos and black shoes, while Ashley wore a beautiful flowing pink dress that she had just recently bought. Are you guys ready for this, Ashley said as she walked over to the two of them. Im ready for this dance and to watch Nick by the pudding. Theres no pudding this year, because of someone, Ashley said as she glared at Nick. Can we all stop living in the past and go in already, Nick said as he began pushing the two through the doors.

The gym was gigantic with decorations everywhere. Streamers, balloons, tables, chairs, food, drinks, and dancing: everything for the perfect dance. David, Nick, and Ashley took a table over by the wall and started talking. Mean while, other partiers were dancing and eating. Are you sure you all right about not having a date, David kept asking Nick. Its alright guys, I can live without a girlfriend right now, was always Nicks response.

The doors opened again as more people began to show up. Hey guys, said a girl as she walked over to their table. It was Dana Hicks, she shared all the same classes with them and could usually be seen hanging around Megan Hawking. She began talking with them, and then she left. Nick couldnt stop starring at her the whole time. Ashley and David nudged Nick at the exact same time. If you like her, ask her to dance, David said. I told you guys, Im not ready for that yet, Nick responded as he drank some punch. All three of them soon saw Megan Hawking and Andrew Charles dancing together. They thought it was sweet how Andrew finally found the perfect girl.

Soon, everyone was on the dance floor. David wouldnt stop rolling his eyes behind his sunglasses as he watched Nick dance like a lunatic. Dont you think you should take those sunglasses off David, Ashley asked while they were dancing, Not only is it night time, were indoors. David took them off and put them into his pocket as they continued to dance. This is one of the greatest nights of my life, David kept saying.

People kept dancing, until something happened. David kept looking over Ashleys shoulder at a girl that didnt look very well. She kept wobbling around and turned a little pale. She then fell to the ground, which made everyone stop. Everyone began to back away. That is, except for David, Nick, and Ashley. David checked her pulse and pronounced that she was dead. She had a strange white foam slowing coming from her mouth. Howd she die, Ashley asked while still astonished. Poison, Ashley, he said as he stood up, This woman had been murderedand everyone in this room is a suspect. People started to head out the door, but Nick ran up to it and locked it. Good job, nick, David said as he congratulated his partner, Nobody leaves until we find the culprit. Nick walked over to David just in time to see him put his sunglasses back on. Some one call the police while I check the scene, David yelled as a girl pulled out her cell phone.

The police sent their best inspector to the crime scene. Mr. Robert Johnson, Ashleys father. Its a pleasure to meet you again, Mr. Johnson, David said as he shook the mans hand. The inspector and David kneeled next to the body as other sat down at the table. I dont see anything that could lead us to a culprit, the inspector said, Maybe it was just a suicide. Never assume anything, David said as he pulled several strands out of the victims grasping hand. He examined it and discovered that the hair was brown hair, and because it was long, it was a females hair. Would all the brown haired girls please move to the northern corner of the gymnasium, Mr. Johnson said as 50 girls headed over.

Muddy shoes, David said. What are you talking about, Inspector Johnson asked. This girl has traced of mud on her shoes, and over by the doorway are lines where her heels dragged on the floor, said David as he stood up and walked over to the door, Im sure if we look outside, well find something very important. David, Nick, Ashley, and her father went outside to search the grounds. They looked around and found muddy footprints and some small white shapes. Dont touch them, said Mr. Johnson, Thats the poison. Relax Mr. Johnson, David said as he picked them up, theyre just Tic-Tacs. David soon realized that these werent any ordinary Tic-Tacs. They were all glazed with a white powder. What Im holding in my hand is the murder weapon. Whoever our killer is offered our victim some Tic-Tacs glazed with a poisonous substance. The victim must have accidentally dropped some here. Thats easy, our culprit is someone who like Tic-Tacs, said Nick as if solving the case. The other three just glared at him as they headed back in.

Back in the Gym, the four saw a boy crying next to the girl. His name was Andrew Charles. Whats up Andrew, David asked as he walked over. The watch I gave to Megan is missing. The dead girls name was Megan Hawking, and Andrew and her were boyfriend and girlfriend. I gave it too her before we entered to show her my appreciation for her, but now shes dead and its gone. David, Nick, and Ashley walked over to the group of girls and stood there. David lowered his glasses as he looked at each one of them. He raised them again then turned his back. The murderer isDana Hicks, David said as he turned back around and pointed at her.

All the girls in the group began gasping and backing away from her. Stop being silly David, Dana said angrily and frustrated like. David started to laugh for a few seconds than looked back at her. I know Ive read so many lines after the detective finds the killer, He began to say, Dont be stupid, it couldnt be me or What are you talking about is what they usually say, but Ive never heard the killer call the detective silly.

Nick and Ashley were astonished that David could be so calm during this matter. I didnt do it you idiot, Dana said as she began to leave, but Nick and Ashley caught her. What makes you so sure it was her David, Mr. Johnson said as he walked over. Its a very simple deduction, Inspector. David began, Megan and Dana were great friends. Dana had been dating Andrew for a few weeks now, as Im sure we all remember, but Andrew dumped Dana for Megan. Im pretty sure Dana got very jealous, and decided to kill Megan to get Andrew back. So she took Megan outside and offered her some Tic-Tacs, which are Megans favorite. Megan accidentally dropped some in the grass when she was putting them in her mouth. Dana had poisoned the Tic-Tacs, and as she died, she caught her so her dress wouldnt get dirt on it. To cover it up, she drags her inside.

That explains the marks by the door, but how did she get her to where she is now. Very simple, David responded, All she had to do was make her look realistic and take her to the dance floor, then she propped her up, stood back, and let her body fall to the ground. But what still makes you think it was me, Dana yelled with anger. Because, David began to say as he walked over and grabbed her wrist, Your wearing the watch Andrew gave Megan. You were jealous that he gave her a gift, so before she died, you tried to take it from her. Thats why she had hair in her grasp; she pulled your hair while trying to fight you off. Am I right Mr. Hicks? Dana instantly fell to her knees in tears. Its trueIts trueI was so upset that Andrew choose her over me, she began to say, So I had to do something. You know, David said as he knelt beside her, If you hadnt have taken the watch, you would have gotten away with this. That made Dana cry even more as Mr. Johnson escorted her to his police car.

The party was over now, and everyone headed home. I cant believe she did that, Ashley said as she started to cry, How could anyone do something like that? People do some really strange things Ashley, David said as he kissed her. So much for the dance, Nick said as he grabbed the last fruit punch. I guess this really was your best night ever, Ashley said through her tears as they headed out the door. How did you know it was Dana, asked Nick. I didnt , he said as Nick and Ashley glared at him, Its a simple detective trick. You figure out an idea and a motive and focus it on the exact person, if they really are the criminal, they will confess like Dana did. Thats amazing David, Ashley said. The first official case of the D.N.A. Detective agency has been solved, they said as they headed toward Davids car. This is just the beginning guys, David said as they pulled out, I have a feeling its only going to get worse.

Next time...Case 2: Household Homicide

[XG Fox]

:( DUDE, you should write a mystery book! That beats out Scooby Doo by a LOOOOOOOOOONG shot!

[Gamecuber459]

Thanks XG Fox. For the record, everything beats out scooby doo. just my opinion. That dog should have died 30 years ago.

Let's get on with the next case.

Case 2: Household Homicide

I cant believe this happened, said David as he stared at the body. It belonged to Mr. Morison, his next-door neighbor and fathers best friend. David, Nick, Ashley, and Mrs. Morison were all gathered in the living room, thats where the body was found early. The house was a complete mess from top to bottom. Mr. Morison had been cleaning the house, said Mrs. Morison. Apparently, he was cleaning when he was attacked from behind and killed. David had this really serious look on his face. This is exactly how my father died. I solved that case, and Ill solve this one, he said as he raised his sunglasses.

The day had started like any other day. The gang went to school, did their homework, and everything normally. When they went to Davids house is when they heard the scream. Help, yelled Mrs. Morison while still quite in shock at the death of her husband. Whats wrong Mrs. Morison? Nick said as he, Nick, Ashley, and the rest off the cul-de-sac residents entered her home. Its George, Hes been stabbed, she answered. David had now officially turned serious as he lowered his sunglasses and walked into the living room. Mr. Morison was lying on his stomach on the shag rug. David walked over to him and looked at the knife carefully. Standard kitchen knife, he said, A common household utensil thats often used as a weapon. Ashley called the police and her father arrived shortly. Greetings Mr. Thompson, He said as Ashley escorted him to the living room. The pleasure is all mine, said David as he shook the mans hand.

David began to scan the living room of its people. Everyone in the Cul-de-sac was there: Mr. and Mrs. Wright; Mr. Johansson; Mrs. Morison; and David and his mother. David took a closer look at the knife and noticed that blood was still dripping from it. Because the knife is still dripping some blood, he began, I can say that Mr. Morison was killed about 10 minutes ago. Mrs. Morison, what were you doing while Mr. Morison was down here cleaning. I was upstairs getting dress, but I dropped my glasses, she said as she straightened them. Mr. and Mrs. Wright, David said, Where were you ten minutes ago? The misses and I were eating breakfast when we heard Mrs. Morison scream, Mr. Wright answered as he held his wife close to him.

David then walked over to Mr. Johansson. And where were you when Mr. Morison was murdered? he said. I was watering the flowers in my backyard, Mr. Johansson responded. All thats left is Mrs. Robin, David said as he looked around the room for her. Mrs. Robin wasnt there; everyone began to wonder as she walked through the doorway. Everyone stared at her as she took her place next to the Wrights. Where were you Mrs. Robin? David and the rest of the neighborhood began to wonder. I was at home asleep, but I noticed everyone was gone and Mrs. Morisons door was open, so I decided to check it out. Mrs. Robin then fainted as she saw Mr. Morisons dead body. Nick and Ashley caught her and set her in a chair. I think we can eliminate her from the suspects list, we all know Mrs. Robin fears the sight of blood, said Nick. David looked at everyone and began to think. Breakfast, watering flowers, getting dressed: someone is lying, but whom? Why dont we all take a walk, David said as they all retreated from Mrs. Morisons home.

Davids first stop was the Wright residents. They opened the door and everyone walked in. David began to quickly scan the kitchen. The Wrights are innocent, said David as he began to leave. Hold up, David, Mr. Johnson said, What makes you so sure? The Wrights always eat cereal for breakfast. It takes twenty minutes for milk to completely dissolve cereal bits. Their bowls are now foggy with the broken up cereal bits. Its been ten minutes, so they fixed the bowls when Mr. Morison was killed. David then headed toward Mr. Johanssons house. He looked out back and noticed that the flowers soil was dark brown. These flowers were watered fifteen minutes ago, Id say. The small pools of standing water indicate that the flowers have been absorbing the water for a short while. Mr. Johansson was watering the flowers when Mr. Morison was killed.

Thats leaves only Mrs. Morison and Mrs. Thompson, said Mr. Johansson as they headed back to Mrs. Morisons house. David turned toward Mrs. Morisons house, and then headed toward his own house. Where are you going David, asked Nick. Everyone follow me, said David with a serious look on his face. They all walked into the house and went upstairs. They entered Mrs. Thompsons bedroom. My mother was sleeping, like Mrs. Robin. The bed sheet are wrinkled and the comforter is pulled over across the bed from her just waking up As David began to leave, he turned back toward everyone. Dont every accuse my mother of a crime. If you every accuse her, Ill prove you wrong, he said as he headed down the stairs. Everyone stared at one another as they followed him back to Mrs. Morisons house.

Well David, began Mr. Johnson, Youve managed to clear everyone, but Mrs. Morison. I did not kill my husband, said Mrs. Morison as she got nervous, I loved him so very much, why would I kill him. I dont know, but well find out, responded David. Mrs. Morison, he said as he walked to her front door, because your door handle is very jerky, your front door lock gets jammed a lot, doesnt it? Yes, but whats that have to do with anything? She asked with confusion. That means, David began, That your door has been locked all morning, except when you opened it to cry for help. The latch on the door is worn and gets stuck so that no one can get in, or get out. That means theres no way Mr. Morison could have left the house, he was trapped, said Ashley as she stood next to David. You claim that Mr. Morison was cleaning, but I dont see any cleaning utensils on his person, said Nick as he joined the group. And if you dropped your glasses, which we all know you completely blind without, how did you find them and get dressed, asked David as he glared at her.

Mrs. Morison began to sweat and seemed really nervous. I felt for them with my feet and found them on the floor, she said. Theres only one giant piece of evidence that proves your guilty, Mrs. Morison. said David as he lowered his sunglasses. The next time you try to kill someone, use a different knife, he said as he pointed to the knife rack in the kitchen. Mr. Johansson carefully pulled the knife from Mr. Morisons body and put it in the rack. Perfect fit, he said as he pulled out his handcuffs. As she was escorted into the police car, David held the car door open. Why did you do it Mrs. Morison, asked David. Mrs. Morison turned toward him and said I was so tired of him always treating me like a servant. He never cleaned, cooked, or did anything around the house. I had to get rid of him some how. And I would have gotten away with it if it werent for you meddling Dont even start with that, said David as he slammed the door Its called Marriage Counseling, or Divorce, yelled Nick as the police car drove off.

Another day, another case, said David as he and Nick gave each other five. Ashley walked over and hugged them. You guys are brilliant, she said through some tears, Im sorry if I cry at the end of every case guys, but its just so sad. Its o.k. Ashley, we understand. Nick and David said in unison. You were awfully quiet during that investigation Ashley, said Nick. I was just nervous that Id mess something up, she said. You shouldnt think like that Ashley, David said as he kissed her, You actually helped me with that lock thing. I couldnt think of any reason why the door would need to be lock on both sides. Ashley smiled as she hugged him tightly.

Everyone headed back to their homes. The detective trio headed back to Davids house for breakfast. While they were eating, Mrs. Thompson walked in and kissed David on the cheek. My little detective, she said as she headed back upstairs. Ashley and Nick laughed a little. Thanks mom, David said as he rolled his eyes toward them. I cant wait for the next case, said Nick, Im sure the next one will be really interesting. We can only hope Nick, said Ashley, we can only hope.

Next time...Case 3: The Harman's Heist

[Guest Lord_Korvis]

Thanks XG Fox. For the record' date=' everything beats out scooby doo. just my opinion. That dog should have died 30 years ago.[/size']

LOL That's right

[XG Fox]

^^ yeah, you're right...

That was another good one! Are you just making these up as you go, cause these are good!

[Gamecuber459]

I just sit here at the computer, and the story comes to me. Case 3 should be up in......20 minutes. Two in one day.

[XG Fox]

Wow... dude, you're awesome at it though!

And you do know this, right?

Scan the right side of this page... look for favorite poet or writer...

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[Gamecuber459]

XG Fox, that's really nice man, thanks.

Case 3: The Harmans Heist

The school bell rang that day at Warsaw Community High School. David went to his locker and met up with Nick. They started walking together when they caught up with Ashley. The Three all piled into Davids car and drove around town. Where you want to go guys? David asked as he rounded a corner, With no homework today, we have plenty of time to do anything. Why dont we hang out by Harmans, suggested Nick, Thats a pretty good convenient store. Convenient that that store is located down the road from my house, said David with a laugh.

Ashley elbowed David with a smile as they pulled into the parking lot. All of a sudden, as they were stepping out of the car, the alarm started to go off. Sounds like someones trying to shoplift, David said as he ran toward the door. Before he got their, two teenage boys in masks ran through the door. One was carrying a book bag: that was probably filled with the loot, while the other had nothing. David quickly tackled the loot less one, while Nick went for the bag carrier.

Nick couldnt catch him and came back to help David. Sorry David, said Nick as he helped hold the guy down, He got away. Its o.k. Nick, said David, Well find him, because we have all the help we need right here. Nick and David took the guy inside to the story manager. Ashley quickly followed after staying at a safe distance. They were all in the managers office now. David locked the door and the interrogation started. The manager of the store turned his chair around to look at his new visitors. He glared at them while polishing his golden nameplate. He placed it on the end of the table for everyone to see. It read Store Manager Mr. James P. Harman. What is the meaning of this intrusion, He asked as set a bag of chips on his desk. This boy and another were trying to shoplift your store, said Nick as he took a sit next to the window. The other boy got away, said David, But Im sure are little friend here can tell us where to find him. Im going to take a quick check around the store, said David as he left the room, Nick, make sure you get some answers.

David took his sunglasses off began to scan the room for anything interesting. All the glass over the soda pop and frozen food doors was shattered. Also, the cigarettes behind the counter were all knocked over and broken light bulbs covered the floor. Seems like a lot of damage for just a shoplifting, thought David as he continued to look. Meanwhile back in the office, Nick was busy with his interrogation methods. Do you have any idea what youre doing, said Ashley as she sat by the door. I think I can handle a simple interrogation, said Nick as he off the boys mask. The boy tried to kick Nick, but he dodged at the last second. Lets not make this any harder than it should be kid, said Nick as he paced back and forward, Just tell whom your partner was and where he is, and youll be off with a minimal punishment. The teenager just snorted at Nick, ignoring his request. Let me try Nick, said Ashley as she stood up. She walked over to the boy and slapped him in the face. Ashley! said Nick, astonished by her actions. Its the only way to get answers out of people, said Mr. Harman as he lay back in his chair with the chips.

David continued to search the store. The whole store was trashed and damaged. David looked behind the counter and saw an inventory list dated for that day he also found a picture of Mr. Harmans family. He took it and rummaged through the garbage. Everything was there: nothing was stolen. The only thing missing wasa bag of chips. David walked back to the office; he slowly opened the door and put his sunglasses back on. He walked in and stared at Mr. Harman then the boy. Ashley, David said as he handed her his cell phone, call the police and tell them to send you father to come pick up Mr. Harman. Hes under arrest. What are you talking about, said Mr. Harman, I havent done anything. Why dont I ask your son instead, David said as he stared at the boy. Son, Ashley and Nick said in unison. AshleyNickmeet Thomas Harman, said David as walked over to Mr. Harman and handed him the photo, and Im pretty sure Douglas will come back soon.

Whos Douglas, said Nick in confusion. Douglas is my other son, the boy who ran off with the empty bag, said Mr. Harman as he slumped in his seat. It was empty? question Ashley as she walked over toward David. I checked the stores inventory list, and the only thing missing, David said as he pointed toward Mr. Johnsons desk, was a bag of chips. Mr. Johnson soon arrived and David explained how Mr. Harman had his sons wreak the store, so that his family could get rich off the insurance money. I cant believe you solved another one David, said Nick and Ashley in unison. Guys, we have got to stop that unison thing, David said as he stared at the two of them, Its getting creepy how we say the same thing. The three just looked at each other and laughed as they walked out the door. So much for hanging out, said Nick as he climbed into the backseat of Davids car. What do you mean, said Ashley, we had lots of fun hanging out in the Managers office. I still cant believe you slapped Thomas, nick said as he laughed. You did what, asked David as he pulled out of the parking lot.

Next time

Case 4: Bullet Blitz

[XG Fox]

"I can't believe you slapped him!" "You did WHAT?"

That was another good one!

[Guest Lord_Korvis]

Nice, Nice. Now I'm tempted to write my own stories. Since I noticed from your Avatar that you like Case Closed..

[Gamecuber459]

Case Closed was my inspiration for Inspective Detective.

Here's the next one.

Case 4: Bullet Blitz

It was a normal day for the D.N.A. Detective Agency. David, Nick and Ashley were lying around Davids living room: bored out of their minds. It was Saturday and the three couldnt think of anything to do. Suddenly, the phone began to ring. Can you get that Nick, said David as he slouched in the recliner. Its your house, Nick replied as he hung upside down from the couch. For goodness sakes, said Ashley as she left her chair and grabbed the phone at the 5th ring. Dad? She said as she nearly dropped the phone, Whats up. David and Nick quickly got up and stood next to her, waiting to hear what Mr. Johnson wanted. What did you dad want? asked David as she hung up the phone. He said he wants us to meet him down by the old bridge, Ashley answered as she grabbed her coat and headed out the door. Finally some action, said Nick as he raced after her.

They all piled into Davids car and drove downtown. David parked the car and they all went to the bridge. It was really old and covered with dirt and moss. They saw the inspector appear from bellow the bridge and went down to greet him. Hello Mr. Johnson, said David as he shook his hand. Its great that you guys could come down so quickly, Mr. Johnson responded as he shook Davids hand, There was a gang shoot out last night, and someone was killed. We already have to suspects, but we cant figure out who shot the man. What man? asked Ashley as she looked under the bridge. Lying there in the dirt and slimy water was a dead man. He had a shot wound on his chest. Who ever shot him must of tried to hide the body, said David as he examined it, When did you capture the suspects? We caught them last night, sneaking around down here, answered Mr. Johnson. David noticed a gun in the mans hand, covered his fingers with his shirt, and picked it up. It was a six-barrel with five bullets in it. Did you know that man had a gun in his hand, asked David. No I didnt, responded the inspector as he had David put it in a plastic bag. I also found a bottle cap and a shoestring, said David as he showed them to the inspector, and theirs a shoeprint, but it has a strange mark in it like the person stepped on something. Lets all head back to the police station, said Mr. Johnson, you three can help me with an interrogation.

They all arrived at the police station a few minutes later. Mr. Johnson led David, Nick, and Ashley to an interrogation room where two teenage boys were sitting in chairs. One had a red sweater and blue jeans while the other had a blue tank top and shorts. These are the two suspects, said the inspector. David took the seat that faced the two, while the other sat on a side bench. Theres a simple way to solve this, said David as he lowered his sunglasses toward the two boys, If you just tell us who did it, youll get a lighter sentence The two boys just glared at David, then at each other. A gang member never rats out another gang member, I guess, said David as he leaned back in his chair, What are your names? Im Josh, said the one in the red sweater, and hes Tom. How do we figure out who did it, asked Ashley as she stood up and walked over to David. We can match the shoe print to the suspects, said Nick as he joined the group. David looked at both suspects shoes. Joshs shoe tread matched the print. Does that mean Josh did it? asked the inspector. Not exactly, said David as he continued to check their shoes, This broken shoe string I found is from Toms shoe. Whats that mean, asked Nick. Tom is our culprit, said David as he looked at him.

How can it be me? yelled Tom as he quickly rose from his chair. Im sorry Tom, said Josh as he remained sitting, But you and I both know you did it. Damn you, yelled Tom as he punched Josh hard and ran for the door. After him, yelled the inspector. David was already on his trail before the inspector said that. Give up Tom, said David as he ran after him, No one can out run me. Its worth trying, said Tom as he knocked a chair over to block the path. David quickly jumped over any object Tom threw in his way. Tom busted through the front doors and began running down the street toward the park. David slowed down and started walking. Whyd you stop, yelled Nick as he, Ashley and her father ran toward him, Hes getting away. No hes not, said David, Hes heading to the old bridge to prove hes innocent.

They soon arrived at the bridge and saw Tom looking at the body. There has to be a way to prove my innocents, he said as he looked at the four approaching. I already know your innocent, said David as he went down and stood next to him, I sorry for scaring you, but I had to get you down here some how. I dont understand David, said the inspector.

Theres another foot print here that matches Toms, David began, and Tom and Josh were both standing here when the man was killed. Josh was standing on Toms shoelace. Tom was afraid that Josh would shoot the man, so he took off running and the shoelace snapped. But what does that bottle cap have to do with anything, asked Ashley. The bottle cap only signifies that a home made silencer was used, answered David, By filling a bottle with special chemicals and shooting the bullet through it, the noise it makes is lessened. But where is the bottle now, asked Nick.

Its in the water, said Josh as he walked toward them, I shot the bullet through it, then filled the bottle with water, so its at the bottom of the river right now and I planted the gun in his hand to make it look like a suicide Nick wadded in up to his knees and found it. It was a root beer bottle, same as the cap. Id give him a lighter sentence, said David to the inspector. But he killed an innocent man, responded the inspector, We can let him go for that. But he could have taken off while we were here, said David, Any other person would have taken off, since we left him alone in the interrogation room, but he didnt.

David, Nick, and Ashley piled into Davids car and took off. Wasnt it great of my father to give him an easier punishment, said Ashley as she looked out the window. Five years is better that ten I suppose, said Nick. Why did you do that? asked Ashley, You scared the heck out of that guy. Because he and I both knew he was innocent, but I had to get him to the river to prove it, answered David, and I knew Josh would come eventually. Your brilliant David, said Ashley as she kissed him on the check. I prefer the lips, but Im driving, said David with a laugh. Ashley elbowed him as they drove back to his house.

Was that enough action for you, asked David to Nick. You bet, answered Nick, That chase was awesome, but Im just wonderingcould you have caught Tom. Of course, but I needed him to run toward the old bridge, answered David as they pulled into the driveway. Thanks David, said Ashley as she kissed him-on the lips this time. What are you thanking me for? asked David. For helping my father out again, she answered. If your father is ever in a mess, he can always call me, said David. Ashley looked at him and smiled. And if Im ever in trouble, I know who I can count on, she said as the three of them headed in.

Next time

Case 5: Assassination...Ashley?!

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Thanks XG Fox. This next case is really special, my first two-parter. I'll be back every other weekend so...wow, and two week cliffhanger...ouch.

Case 5: AssassinationAshley?! Part One: Crime

David and Nick were walking down the street that day. It was 3:30p.m. and school was already out. I cant believe that Math Quiz, said Nick, I bet I failed for sure. You better not, said David, we studied all night to get ready for it. Hey guys, wait up, yelled Ashley as she caught up with them, I wish you had driven today David Do I look like a taxi driver, said David as he slowed down to walk beside her. Very funny, she said as they headed toward Ashleys house. Ashley lived in a very fancy neighborhood. Her house was huge, with giant windows and shudders. It also had a rather tacky lawn organization. Ive got to talk to my mom about those garden gnomes, said Ashley as she unlocked the door. Ive never been to you house before, said Nick as the three of them entered.

They headed up the stairs and entered her bedroom. She had a giant bed with fancy head and footboards; a dresser crammed with clothes and junk, and several shelves on the wall holding books and stuffed bears. You have a very nice room, complimented Nick as he and David sat down around her desk. Ill be right back, Im going to get some snacks, said Ashley as she left the room. Dont forget my pretzels, yelled Nick as he heard her descend the stairs. David rolled his eyes and gave Nick a light punch. Ashley walked through the living and proceeded to enter the kitchen. Ashley enters, then stopped after seeing the most horrible thing. HELP, she screamed at the top of her lungs. Ashley! yelled David as he ran down the stairs with Nick in tow.

They enter the kitchen and saw Ashley on her knees crying. There on the floor in front of her was her mother. She had a shoot wound on her left arm and a knife was sticking out of her breast. Oh my God, said Nick as he looked. David then turned his attention to the back porch window, where he saw a figure run past. Where are you going David, said Nick as he saw him race out the door. Hold it right there, said David as he pursued the person. The man stopped, turned around, and punched David in the face: shattering his sunglasses. David fell backward and landed on the pavement as he saw the man pull a gun out. Nice try Kid, he said as he aimed it at David. Ashley, David thought as he awaited death, Im sorry about your mother.

Before the man pulled the trigger, Nick came out of nowhere and started rushing for the man. Leave him alone, he yelled as he leaped to tackle the man. Nick, NO, David yelled as the gun was fired, sending Nick flying backward. Your next, said the man as he aimed it at David again. Nick, David thought. He quickly rolled to the side and drop kicked the man. David tackled the man and held him down. Youve hurt to many people mister, he said as he punched the man repeatedly. He pulled out a pair of handcuffs and handcuffed the man to the back porch. Nick are you alright, said David as he knelt next to his friend. Never better, said Nick as he got to his feet, I grabbed one of the kitchen pan lids and put it under my shirt. Nick pulled the lid from his shirt; the bullet was imbedded in the glass. Smart thinking, said David as he patted him on the back, Ashley.

David remembered Ashley and ran inside. In tears, she was talking on the phone. She had called her father, then an ambulance. The ambulance came and took Mrs. Johnson to Kosciusko Community Hospital. Ashley, said Mr. Johnson as he ran up and hugged his daughter, Shes going to be alright. David, said nick as he stared at his eyes, your eyes are so light and pale. I was born that way, said David as he held his broken sunglasses in his hands, That why I always wear these sunglasses. Ashleys one of few people who knows about my eyes. Thats weird, said Nick, No offense None taken, said David as he went over to Ashley. She finished holding her father and began embracing David. Im sorry Ashley, he said as he began to cry with her. The culprits handcuffed outside Inspector, said David.

The inspector went outside, and then a gunshot was heard. David, Nick, and Ashley quickly ran to the door. There, the man was standing, pointing his gun at them. He grabbed Ashley and started running to his car. ASHLEY, yelled David as he ran after them. The man threw her in the back and took off. David continued to chase to car on foot. ASHLEY, he said as he tripped and fell to the pavement. SHE DIES NEXT, said the man as he turned the corner. DAVID, Ashley screamed out the car window. The inspector quickly ran up next to David and helped him to his feet. Wheres Ashley, he asked. The man took her, said David as he faced Mr. Johnson. David quickly ran back to the house and began searching around. Maybe theres something he dropped that can tell us where hes going.

Mr. Johnson phoned a squad car to chase the criminal. Hes driving a Blue Contour, License Plate reads, 2111518, he said. Where could he have gone, thought David as he paced, wait a minutethe second letter of the alphabet is B, then A, 11th is K, 5th is E, and the 18 is R. That wont be necessary, said David, I know where he got the car from. How? asked Nick. The License Plate numbers are a code, it read BAKER. He must have stolen Martins car from Martins Bakery. I think we should visit Martin. But that doesnt tell us where Ashley is, said the Inspector. Its just a start Mr. Johnsononly a start, said David. The three got in the inspectors squad car and headed down town. Martin was sitting on the bench out front when they arrived. He had blonde hair, and wore his Baker hat and apron. Whats up guys, he said as the three headed over. Martin, you know your car was stolen right, asked Nick. Yep, Martin answered, Its was a guy. I tried to stop him, but he just wired it and took off. Damn it, said David as he slammed his fist on the inspectors car, This is getting us no where. Are you alright David, asked Nick as he tried to comfort his friend.

While they were talking, a figure came out from behind the building. Ashleys having fun, hope youll join her soon, the man said as he ran down the street. David, wait, said the inspector, but David already was on the mans trail. You kidnap her, threaten to kill her, and you think you can just appear in front of us and get away, said David as he continued to pursue. You look funny without your glasses Kid, the man said as he rounded the corner. When David turned, the man was gone. Where is she, David whispered to himself. And if Im ever in trouble, I know who I can count on, said Ashleys voice in his head. Mr. Johnson and Nick soon pulled up with the car. Get in David, were going to the station, said Nick. Take us back to the house, said David. The inspector did and David looked again. Theres got to be something Im missing, David thought to himself.

David went to the back porch and saw the handcuffs still on the guardrail. They had blood on them from the man pulling them over his wrists. Whats this, David said as he saw a folded piece of paper on the ground. He opened it and grew angrier by the second. Inspector, he yelled, take us to the Abandoned Warehouse District NOW. They soon arrived and the place was cold and deserted. Rust had formed on all the buildings. I know youre here, yelled David. The man appeared from one of the buildings with Ashley over his shoulder. She was tied up and had tape over her mouth. What have you done to her, said Nick as he grew angrier, Stop playing with us. She alright for the moment, said the man, She went unconscious after I kicked her in the stomach

David began charging the man with furry and anger. I wouldnt do that, said the man as he pulled out a knife and held it by Ashleys thigh and slowly rubbed it up and down, you wouldnt want me to hurt your girlfriend now would you. What do you want with the Johnsons, asked the Inspector. I dont want anybody, I just grabbed her because you were the closest family I could find, the man said as he dropped Ashley to the ground and ran inside.

Ashley, said David as he lightly shook her, Please wake up. She was out cold and had a slit on her neck. Ashley please wake up please, said David as he began to cry. Im going after him, said Mr. Johnson as he started to run inside. NO, yelled David as he stood up, Im going. The three went inside and found the man, but he was standing next to three other men. They all look the same, said Nick as he stared at the men. Only one of us is the real attacker, they all said in unison.

How do we tell them apart? asked the inspector. You may tell us one command and all of us will do it, thats the only way to tell. Nick and Mr. Johnson looked at David. Show us your hands, said David. Whats that going to prove? asked Nick. Youll see, said David as he approached the men.

He began slowly pacing and eliminating suspects. When he cleared one, the man took off. David figured there was no point in arresting all of them. The attacker isNumber 3, yelled David as he glared at the man with his light, pale eyes. What makes you so sure its me, said Number 3. Because, David began, youre the only one with cut wrists. It happened when you broke free from the handcuffs. You cut yourself pulling your hands through the small openings. Before the inspector takes you to jail. David began punching the heck out of the guy. Stop please Im sorry, the man pleaded. NOBODY HURTS ASHLEY AND GETS AWAY WITH IT, yelled David as he continued beating the man.

David, Stop, yelled Ashley as she slowly entered the room. Ashley? questioned David as he left the man and headed toward her. She felt limb and started to faint, but David caught her before she hit the ground. Its o.k. Ashley, said David as he stroked her hair, No one will ever hurt you again. I knew I could count on you, said Ashley as she fainted and went limb in Davids arm. He embraced her and heard the rate of her heart beat slow downthen stop. We need to get her to the hospital right away, said David as he carried her body to the squad car. He lied her down in the back and told Nick to take the front seat. David sat in back, with Ashleys head on his lap. Several tears fell down his cheek and landed in her hair. Im sorry Ashley, he said as they pulled away-sirens wailing-and took her to the hospital.

Next Time

Assassination...Ashley?! Part Two: Compassion.

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Case 5: AssassinationAshley?! Part Two: Compassion

David was lying in his bedroom. His shoes and jacket were on the floor by the wall. They spot on the dresser where he placed his sunglasses started to form dust from their absence. He was still dressed and had his head on the pillow. His eyes were close, but he wasnt asleep. He hadnt slept easy the past nights. Since the incident, David had lost all confidence in him. If I cant even save Ashley, whats the point in trying to help others, he said to himself. Because people need you, came a voice from outside the door. It was Davids mother with a sad look on her face. You cant just lie hear for the rest of your life, she said as she sat down on the end of the bed. I dont know what to do, said David as he sat up. Why dont you go visit her, Mrs. Thompson said, Im sure shed really appreciate it.

David had neglected visiting Ashley in the hospital because he feared what she would say to him. No matter what she says, began his mom, Shell always love you. How could anyone love someone who couldnt protect him or her, said David as he slumped back on the bed. You did protect her David, said Mrs. Thompson, You did the best you could. Thats better than doing nothing. Dad always protected you, didnt he, asked David as he stood up. YesYes he did, she answered with a small tear in her eye. David put his shoes and jacket on and started to leave his room. Thanks mom, he said as he headed down the stairs.

David pulled out of the driveway and headed down the street. He started to head toward the hospital when he saw Nick on the street. Nick was sitting on a bench, watching the cars go by. Finally going to see her, said Nick as David pulled over. Yeah, said David, I hope shell forgive me. Dont worry, said Nick, Im sure shell forgive your for not visiting for a while Thats not what Im talking about, said David as Nick climbed in. Nick and David were usually talkative and cheerful when every they went for car ride, but this trip was quiet and rather sad. Nick kept glancing at the corner of his eye. He was looking at Davids eyes again. He looks like a whole different person without his sunglasses, thought Nick as they parked the car.

David and Nick made their way to the front door and headed in. They went to the receptionist and collected their visiting passes. They made their was to the elevator and went to the 5th floor. Ashleys room was ROOM 156, but David stopped at ROOM 130. Whats up David, said Nick, Ashleys room is down the hall. Nick, began David, I want you to go in first. Comfort her and ask her about me. What she thinks, what she knows, if she cares. I understand, said Nick as they headed down the hall. Nick knocked on Ashleys door calm, but hard enough to be heard. Come in, said Ashley. Her voice ringed in Davids head as he sat in a chair outside the door, out of Ashleys view.

Its great to see you Nick, said Ashley as she lied in her bed. Ashley was wearing white Pajamas. Her right leg was elevated with a cast and her arms had several cuts on them. She also had several bruises on her stomach; they were noticeable through her shirt. She started to lean over to hug him, but fell back on the pillow in pain. Please dont move Ashley, said Nick as he watched her hurt. Im o.k. she said as she relaxed. o.k. Doesnt get you in the hospital, said Nick as he took a seat, Hows the food here? Nick was nervous and tried to start conversation. Its alright, she answered, I think the potatoes are a little soggy though. Nick laughed then remembered David in the hallway and got nervous again. By the way, Ashley began, Wheres David.

David isHesWell, Nick tried to think of something. Its fine Nick, said Ashley, can you deliver a message for me. Anything for you said Nick as he stood up. Its for David, she began, I just want to tell him that I am alright and I dont want him to worry to much. I also want to thank him for saving me. I knew I could count on him. Ill make sure he gets the message, said Nick as he started to leave, You take care now. All right, bye Nick, Ashley said as he left. Nick and David were about 2 meters from her door when Ashley said, You can come in now David. Nick and David stopped and starred at each other. They turned around and headed back. Howd you know I was in the hallway, said David as he looked out the window. I had a feeling, she said, Why wont you look at me David? Because I dont want to see how much pain Ive caused you, he said as he turned around.

He walked over to her bedside and stood there. I wasnt there when you needed me and you could have been killed, said David as a tear found its way down his cheek. Before the tear dripped of his chin, Ashley caught it with her index finger. David, she began, you were always there for me. From chasing the car to tracking the man down, you were always hoping to find me and keep me safe. Its not your fault I was hurt. The only one to blame is that man. Your right Ashley, said David as he kissed her, I will always be with you and Ill always be ready to do anything for you. Nick started copying David as a tear also fell down his cheek. Dont you start crying, said Ashley as she leaned over to hug him again. This timeit didnt hurt at all because people who truly cared for her surrounded her.

Ashley was released from the hospital a week later. She managed to live with the leg cast, while the bruises and cuts slowly healed. David and Nick helped her to catch up in school and even tended to her every will. Your going to spoil me guys, she would say as they brought her food, book, and presents. Maybe I should break my leg, said Nick as he handed her some ravioli in a bowl. I wouldnt count on it, said David. The three of them all laughed while sitting in Ashleys living room. David in an armchair; Nick and Ashley shared the couch; and Mrs. Johnson sat in a recliner. Mrs. Johnsons left arm was all wrapped up and she was feeling great. They all laughed and talked and had a great time relaxing. Something was still bothering David though. That man seemed very strange to just attack any family he could find, he thought to himself, I wonder

Next Time:

The High School Locker Theif

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Case 6: The High School Locker Thief

It was in the middle of Math class. David, Nick, and Ashley were working on their homework when the announcement came over the intercom. "Will David Thompson, Nick Bratt, and Ashley Johnson please report to the Assistant Principal's office", said a voice over he PDA system. The three stood from their desks and exited the room. "What do you think the principal wants", asked Nick. "Probibly wants our help again", said ashley as she lead the pack.

The assistant principal, Mr. Fulsome, usually called the three down to help him with a "crime". "remember when he offered us extra credit for figuring out who ate his last donut", said Nick. "That was a waste of time, but at least we got out of class", said David with his arms behind his head. David, Nick, and Ashley walked around the corner and headed down the hall: past the media center. They entered Mr. Fulsome's secretary room and were greeted by his secretary, Mrs. Graham.

"Nick, Ashley, David", said Mr. Fulsome as he walked out of his office door, "It's great to see you again. Please, come in". They all walked into the office and Mr. Fulsome shut the door. Nick and Ashley took a chair, while David remained standing. "What's going on this time Mr. Fulsom", asked Nick as he relaxed in the chair. "This is a serious matter of the greatest importance, so listen up. Several students have reported to me that their stuff was stolen from their lockers"

"A locker thief", thought David, "how immature". "Normally I would ignore them: telling them not to keep valuables in their locker, but five students walked in my office with the same problem", said Mr. Fulsome as he sat in his desk chair. "And you want us to find this person?", asked Ashley. "Of course", said the assistant principal, "If this keeps up.." "The order of the student body will collapse", said David as he leaned against the wall, "We're on it.

Right before the final bell rang, David, Nick, and Ashley had the assistant principal call all the students who had stuff stolen to the cafeteria. Sitting at a table, waiting for the "detectives" were Ashley Johansen, Thomas Carter, Heather Cramer, Adam Johansen, and Zach Traftny. "Let's make this quick and simple", said Nick as he walked in with a notebook and pen. "Don't scare them with you ego Nick", said Ashley, "We need them to stay here for a few minutes".

"We're going to ask you what was stolen and write it down, then we can get somewhere", said David as he walked over to Ashley, "What was stolen from you Miss Johansen" "My Math and Social studies book", she answered," and don't call me miss". "I lost my Math book also", said Adam. "Brother and sister both missing the same book", thought David, "interesting. "I lost a Health book", said Thomas. "and I lost a bracelet, earrings, and a hair ribbon", said Heather.

"Someone likes their appearance", said Nick as he wrote the items down, "and what did you lose Traftny. "Please don't call me by my last name, it's annoying", said Zach, "I lost a...a CD player". "Why did he studder", thought Ashley as she looked over Nick's shoulder. "You may all leave now, but as you leave, write down the description of the items on that piece of paper over there.", said David as he grabbed the list from Nick, "Come on guys, let's go find a janitor.

David, Nick, and Ashley spent the next few hours using the keys the custodian gave them. They unlocked every locker and checked it's contents. As they walked, David noticed something shiny on the floor. "A screw?" thought David, "weird" "This is tiring", said Ashley as she lugged a box full of items, "Can one of you carry this?". "Sure", said David as he grabbed the box, "I guess a box full of books, CD players, and jewelry are heavy. They headed back to the cafeteria and dumped the box out.

"O.k.", said Nick as he wiped some sweat of his forehead, "We have every Social Studies book Matt book, Health book, bracelet, hairbow, and earrings in the school. "We also have what locker they were in and the descriptions from the five. After a few minutes of sorting, David, Nick, and Ashley came to a conclusion. "We now have our suspects", said Ashley, "All of the same items were found in three lockers: Matt Anderson's, John Marcos, and...Adam Johansen?" "What were the items doing in his locker", said Nick. "I don't know", said David as he took his sunglasses off, "But we'll find out".

The next day, the three had Mr. Fulsome call the suspects to his office. "One of you is a locker thief", he said with anger in his eyes, "such a thing is complete disrespect for your fellow students". "How can I be a suspect, said Adam, "I had something stolen too" "We never found that CD player Adam", said David as he walked in. "I'm innoscent", he yelled. "Until proven guilty", said Nick as he and Ashley entered. "Good timing", David whispered to Nick, "There's noway any locker theif could take five books, a CD player, and jewelry home, without someone suspecting something. All the stolen items are here, and they're in a locker.

David, Nick, and Ashley lead the three suspects to Adam's locker. "Please open it", said Ashley Adam turned the locker dial and opened it. "It's empty?", questioned Nick, "but how?". "I told you I was innoscent", said Adam as he started to relax. "What did you do with the stuff", said David as he glared at Adam. "That's enough David, this boy is clearly innoscent", said the assistant principal as he shut the locker. When the door shut, a small thud was heard. "What was that", said Adam, feeling nervous.

They were all back in Mr. Fulsome's office, after checking Matt and John's locker's. "non of these students had the items David", said Mr. Fulsome, "I'm ashamed of you for acusing innoscent people, now please leave my office. The final bell's about to ring anyway. "Damn it", said David as he, Nick, and Ashley walked down the hallway. "It's alright David", said Ashley, "So you made a mistake" "But I didn't", he said, "I know he's the culprit.

Damn it!" David slammed the side of his fist into the closest locker. As he walked by, a loud crash was heard from the locker. The door had flown open and books were scattered on the floor, along with a bracelet, some jewelry, and a hair bow. "Quick, back to the office", said David as he ran down the hallway. The three reached the office, before Adam had left. "He is the culprit", yelled David through the door. They took Mr. Fulsome to Adam's locker and showed him the books. "But how", said the assistant principal.

"Every locker in this school is made of metall and has a back to it. Behind that it an open space the attached the locker to the wall with screws. Adam took the screws out and hid the stolen goods in the space. The screw I found outside his locker and the ones on the floor of his locker are proof. "But I don't see a CD player", said Mr. Fulsome. "Adam lied about he CD player and pretended to have something stolen from him", said David. "Adam was the fifth person to tell me about the locker thefts.", said the assistant principal, "He must have done that to take blame off of him."

Adam Johansen was given a month suspention from school and David, Nick and Ashley were rrewarded. "David",said Ashley, "If Adam was the culprit, what made the other two suspects?" "They never were suspects", said David, "The prinicipal and I wanted to put Adam in a state of calmness, so he wouldn't panic and run while we were checking the lockers. "You knew who it was all along", said Nick. "Yes, and now he's suspended and all the items were returned", said David

"Did we ever find out why he stole those items?", questioned Nick. "Because he wanted to make himself known", said a voice behind them. They turned around and standing there was Ashley Johansen. "My brother told me he wanted to do something to make this school remember him", she said. "Another person in this world trying to gain acceptance in this society", said David, "Not like that's ever happened before". The four walked down the hallway together: leaving the silence in the air, and the case solved.

Next time:

Case 7: Trouble at the Thompsons

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Case 7: Trouble at the Thompsons

It was 8:00p.m. on that Thursday night. It was raining really hard and thunder clapped in the distance. Lightning fell from the sky as David looked out his window. "This is quite the storm", said David, "Hope it doesn't last til tomorrow". "Are you talking to yourself again?", said Mrs. Thompson as she entered with a laundry basket. "Hey mom, yeah I'm just bored that's all", answered David. David hadn't received a case in days and he started to worry about people trust in him.

"Don't worry David", said Mrs. Thompson, "That phone will ring any minute now and you'll have a case". As she left the room, the phone instantly rang: as if by magic. David answered it, hearing his mom's laughter about the phone ringing. He rolled his eyes and said, "Thompson residents, David speaking".

It was Nick and he asked needed to know the Math homework. "Couldn't you have called me earlier Nick", said David. "I wanted to, but my Televison had the most amazing show on and I just had to watch it", said Nick. "Is that always your excuse for doing your homework late at night." "You know it David...haha". "Some storm we're having, eh Nick", David said as he laughed. "Hope it doesn't last until tommorrow", answered Nick, "Well, I'll see you tomorrow". Nick hung up and David stretched out on his bed.

The next day everyone at school was whispering about something. Everyone kept glaring at David, and he became curious. "Why is everybody staring at us", he asked Nick. "Probibly because your a famous detective", said Ashley as she came up from behind, "your a celebrity for crying out loud". "I know I'm a good detective, but people don't usually look at me like this.....it's weird". The whole day, students and teachers kept glaring at David until one finally approached him.

"Man David", said John Truman, "I can't believe someone as cool as you was born from such a freak". David instantly grabbed the guys shirt and looked into his eyes. "Don't call my mom a freak", he said in his face. "Well it's true", John continued, "Your mom killed that man in her office". David was in shock as he let go of the kid's shirt. John ran off while Nick and Ashley tried to calm him down. "What is he talking about", asked Nick. "I don't know, but i'm going to find out", said David.

As they headed to David's car, Ashley's cell phone rang. The caller ID said "Johnson", so she answered and said "Hey dad, what's up". After a few minutes of talking, Ashley hung up. "My dad wants us to meet him at the police station" "The station?", question Nick as he sat in back. "That's what he said", answered Ashley. David started the car and drove downtown. He parked the car next to a blue one. "That's a pretty nice car", said Ashley "Yeah", said David as he headed in, "It's my mom's"...................I've have more tomorrow 8)