Prince Elite Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 This is my crossover called Worlds Collide. I'll tell you why later. It's a crossover featuring Sonic and Shadow from Sonic the Hedgehog, Goku and Vegeta from DBZ. Last but not least, Fox and Falco from Star Fox. It also features several other cast members and villains. Anyway, read and review. But most importantly, enjoy the show. Note: It isn't finished yet, will update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deploy Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 Hopefully it turns out well and doesn't have the same effect as *ahem*... the last one. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 The Void The world was a void. A black demonic figure floated in endless space. The figure looked up as if considering its situation and said in a distorted voice “Shadow. I created you, and you killed me in return, I will not forgive this betrayal. I will break out of this void and destroy the entire planet.†The figure hunched and shouted in a terrifying voice “Chaos Control!†In an instant, the figure vanished. Blue Ridge Zone It was a beautiful day in the Blue Ridge zone. A light layer of snow had covered the ground and all seemed peaceful. That was, until a black hedgehog ruined those proceedings. The hedgehog ran at breakneck speed across the mountainside and was headed for the ridge of the mountains. Without hesitation the hedgehog jumped and performed a series of aerobatics before landing on the other side. The hedgehog looked back at the trail he had just run and said “not bad.†A voice behind him said incredulously “not bad?†On instinct, the hedgehog jumped to the side, ready for battle. Then he realized who had spoken. The black hedgehog said in a slightly sarcastic voice “Sonic the Hedgehog, always a pleasure.†A blue hedgehog moved from behind a tree and asked “why are you so jumpy Shadow?†Shadow replied “well, it’s bad manners not to announce yourself. Or spy.†A small look of laughter stole across Sonic’s face, almost as if he were laughing of the thought of Shadow having manners. A thought crossed Shadow’s mind and he asked “and what did you find wrong with my technique?†Sonic replied with a straight face “well you weren’t going very fast.†Shadow replied “I wasn’t trying to break the sound barrier. It’s about endurance, Sonic. More to the point, you can’t go charging around everywhere. It’s not practical.†Sonic nodded and said “I guess you have a point.†The two hedgehogs started walking across the mountain trail. Shadow asked curiously “why are you here anyway, I thought you’d be on the South Island preparing for this party that I hear you’re being given.†Sonic replied “they didn’t want me to see it before it happens, something about bad luck.†Shadow chuckled and said “those are weddings. But I guess it would ruin the preparations they gone to. I hear it’s a real fortress.†Sonic asked in confused voice “what fortress?†Shadow said quietly “oh, I guess Tails was lying then.†Sonic asked intently “about what?†Shadow replied “well I hear that they’re going to lock you inside and they won’t let you out until you kiss Amy full on the lips.†A pale look appeared Sonic’s face. He opened his mouth as if to say something, but nothing came out. Shadow said in recognition “oh that’s right, there’s none of that until you give her a wedding ring. Knuckles convinced her that you’re giving her one.†Sonic’s face grew paler and managed to utter “wedding ring?†Shadow couldn’t take it anymore, he roared with laughter. Sonic’s face returned to its normal self, and he said “you liar.†Shadow breathed to stop laughing and said “that was priceless. I’m never forgetting that one.†Sonic smiled sarcastically and said “you’re not getting away with that one. Just for that, you’re going to the party too.†It was Shadow’s turn to pale. He raised his hands in protest and said “hey, I don’t do parties.†Sonic replied harshly “you also don’t do jokes either, there’s a first for everything.†He turned his head and said “let’s go get some chili dogs. I’m starving.†Shadow asked “Chili dogs, in a place like this?†Sonic replied “well, Westopolis is two hours away for humans, so that’s about five minutes for me, ten for you.†Sonic ran off at an almost impossible speed. Shadow began running and said “oh no, you don’t.†Westopolis The two hedgehogs walked up a street, bickering about the result of the race. Sonic said “you cheated, plain and simple. I won that race fair and square.†Shadow replied “there were no rules; therefore using chaos control is legal.†Sonic shot back “races always have a default set of rules, as is.†Shadow replied grinning “my chaos control is “as is.†I could have used chaos blast and blown up the mountain instead, if that’s what you’d have preferred?†Sonic remained silent, in his head he conceded the point to Shadow. Shadow said “we’ll call it a tie. Nobody lost.†Sonic nodded, pointed to a restaurant and said “this is it.†The two hedgehogs walked into the restaurant. A stout man said in a cheery voice “Sonic, have a seat, I’ll serve you soon.†Sonic picked a booth and slid into it, Shadow followed suit and asked “you come here often?†Sonic replied “they have the best chili dogs in the city, and the owner’s a fan. He gives me free chili dogs once a week. It’s today.†Shadow shrugged and said “whatever.†The owner walked over and said “will it be the usual for you today and what about your friend.†Sonic replied “two chili dogs would be great.†The owner gave a small bow and walked away. Shadow asked “he’s a fan?†Sonic replied “I have saved the world many times.†Shadow shot back quietly “I’ve saved it more than once, where’s my free chili dog?†He eyed the restaurant subtly; several patrons were looking in their direction. Sonic asked “what are you doing?†Shadow replied “why are they staring?†Sonic answered “not a lot of hedgehogs go into human restaurants.†Shadow took a breath and said “well it’s creepy.†Sonic sat back on his chair and sighed. Shadow’s attitude had improved since the defeat of Black Doom. But it seemed it would be some time before he trusted humans completely, if at all. The chili dogs arrived and the two hedgehogs began to eat. Sonic ate with enthusiasm, Shadow, without. Sonic looked up at Shadow and asked “something wrong?†Shadow replied without looking “I never thought I’d be eating with you.†Sonic chuckled and said “well, today’s your lucky day.†Shadow replied “yeah right.†After several minutes, Sonic finished his meal and began to wait for Shadow to finish his. Sonic looked at the television in the corner of the room. The program appeared to be a musical one. Sonic looked on with interest as a band began to play. Shadow finished his meal and looked up to Sonic transfixed to the television. Shadow looked at the television; the members of the band were wearing green and pink clothing. In a quick movement, Shadow brought his hand in front of Sonic’s face and clicked loudly. Sonic snapped out of his trans-fixation and said “what?!†Ignoring this question, Shadow asked “what are you doing?†Sonic realized what Shadow was talking about and said “watching the television. It looked… familiar.†Shadow shook his head and said “let’s go then, before the racing program starts.†The two hedgehogs left the restaurant and walked down the street. Shadow asked “now what?†Sonic replied “well we still have a few hours until the party, it begins at 6.†Shadow said “good, that gives me time for a run. I’ll see you at this party, I guess.†He ran off and Sonic yelled after him “wear a tuxedo!†In an instant, the black hedgehog reappeared and said in a bemused voice “what?†Sonic said neutrally “it is a formal party.†Shadow replied “nobody said anything about that?†Studying Sonic’s eyes, the black hedgehog said “you’re lying.†Sonic raised his hands in a shrug and said “believe what you want to believe.†Shadow asked “and where, pray tell, would I get a tuxedo from?†Sonic replied “I had one mailed to your house, or as it’s really known, Rouge’s house.†Sonic muttered something that suspiciously sounded like the word “freeloader.†Shadow shook his head and said “fine. I’ll see you later, but I’m not forgetting this.†Shadow ran off for the second time before Sonic could add another stipulation. Rouge the Bat’s house “You’ve got to be kidding.†Shadow studied himself in the mirror. He was wearing a black tuxedo and black leather shoes, complete with a bow tie. Shaking his head, Shadow said “I’m never forgiving him for this one.†Shadow wasn’t a social person, he usually worked alone. He accepted Sonic and his friends, he tolerated their social events, but this was ridiculous. Rouge sidled into the room and said “it suits you.†Shadow said indignantly “suits me?! Are you crazy?! People will laugh at me if I wear this.†Rouge smiled and said “well, everyone else will be wearing the same thing, so you won’t look out of place.†Shadow looked at himself in the mirror again and said “this is going to be terrible, I know it.†South Island Shadow arrived at the party at 6:30. Not on time, but Sonic was lucky that Shadow was going at all. The party was being held in a clearing near the Green Hill zone. Shadow walked around quietly, familiarizing himself with the layout. “Whoever decided that we had to wear these cumbersome suits is going to have me for a best friend.†Shadow looked in the direction of the speaker and saw a red echidna struggling with his tie. Shadow gave a small grin, approached the speaker and said “hey Knuckles, enjoying yourself?†Knuckles looked up and said “oh ha. Sonic roped you into coming too did he?†Shadow replied “maybe, I guess I volunteered.†Knuckles nodded and looked at the group of party-goers. Shadow asked “where is Sonic anyway?†Knuckled grinned and said “he’s avoiding Amy; there was a bit of trouble with a ring.†Shadow said “I thought we weren’t doing that trick.†Knuckles nodded and said “I know. I had no idea that there was a ring attached to the inside of Sonic’s jacket sleeve and that it would detach while he was dancing with Amy. Furthermore, I had no possible way of knowing that Sonic’s running shoes would go missing.†Shadow stifled a laugh and watched as a yellow fox walked towards them. The fox said “that wasn’t funny guys; Amy looked like she was going to explode when Sonic ran off.†Knuckles said in an innocent voice “have no idea what you’re talking about, Tails.†Shadow shook his head and said “none at all.†Sonic chose that time to appear. He was dressed in a tuxedo with a cobalt blue bow tie, despite his normally cheerful attitude, the expression on his face did not harbor greetings. Sonic shook his head and said sarcastically “oh that was good work guys. Once this is over…†He paused to breathe. Shadow asked “you’ll do what?†Sonic replied “I don’t know, I’m a little preoccupied to think about that, but I’ll think of…†The rest of his sentence was cut of as a large shockwave hit the area. Everyone fell to their feet as the ground trembled. The wave stopped and Knuckles said as he got to his feet “what was that?†A second shockwave hit and Shadow stood up and looked around. He could see a thick plume of smoke to the east. Shadow looked at Sonic; they both nodded and started running towards the mysterious smoke. Area of shockwave origination The two hedgehogs ran quickly towards the smoke. Eventually they approached a field where a large fire was burning. Sonic began to approach, when Shadow grabbed him by the shoulder. Shadow said quietly “someone’s here.†Barely two seconds passed when a blue ball flew towards the hedgehogs. They jumped, the blast missing them by several yards Falling into their battle stances, the two stood ready for another attack. But the attack did not continue. Instead, a voice asked “who are you?†Sonic replied “Who are you.†The attacker said “ah, we’re playing that game are we?†The attacker stepped out from behind his cover. He appeared to be about 5’8â€, with long jet black hair and odd styled clothing. He also appeared to have a tail wrapped around his waist. The attacker said “I gather that they’ll arrive soon, so you’ll have to serve as a warm up, rats. Let’s see how fast you are.†Sonic was just about to ask who “they†were, when the attacker literally flew at him. Sonic managed to sidestep a punch, but only barely. Shadow ran towards the attacker and jumped, he aimed a kick at the attacker’s head. It hit, but the attacker didn’t budge. The attacker turned and somehow conjured a purple ball from his hand. He threw it at Shadow and it exploded. Sonic shouted “no!†The attacker laughed cruelly and said “you rodents are no match for me.†The dust settled from the purple attack, but Shadow was nowhere to be seen. The attacker’s face grew angry and he said “it seems despite his lack of strength, he has some speed.†Sonic felt himself being dragged behind a large rock; he looked up to see Shadow. Shadow said “I’m not going to be killed by this poser. We need to use a chaos spear. Sonic asked quietly “do you think that will work?†Shadow replied “I have no idea, but we need to do something.†The attacker stretched his arms and said “I know where you’re hiding you little rodents.†He dispatched another purple ball which detonated against the rock. The rock disintegrated, but the hedgehogs had already left. The attacker nodded and asked “is that all you can do, run? Don’t you have something original?†He turned to see two large gold arrows flying towards him. Having no time to dodge, the attacker was hit directly. The two hedgehogs watched as the dust settled. The attacker was bleeding, his clothes were smoldering, and he bent over in pain. He stood, nodded and said “I’ll give it to you, that one actually hurt. But enough, I’ll finish this now. The attacker faced the two hedgehogs and said “alright, we’re going to play a little game.†He raised his arm and said “now, the objective is to keep your eye…†He never finished his sentence as a loud voice said “not that stupid game again!†Sonic, Shadow and the attacker looked up. There were two men, hovering in the air. In an instant, they descended to the ground. The attacker with jet black hair turned to face the two newcomers and said “ah, you finally decided to come.†The taller of the two newcomers gave an informal nod and said “Raditz.†The attacker returned the nod and replied “Goku, my brother.†He turned his attention to the second newcomer, bowed and said “your majesty, Vegeta.†Vegeta turned to Goku and said “can’t we just kill him now?†Goku held up his hand and said “this will just take a second I imagine.†He looked up at his brother and said “I’m going to give you a chance to surrender. You can’t beat us Raditz.†Raditz smiled and said “can’t I. I’ve fought thousands of battles in hell. My power level has increased to over 3 million. You can’t beat me with my power.†Vegeta shouted violently “fool! My power level is over 15 million, now prepare to die.†Raditz’s smile dropped, and he said with a twinge of uncertainty “that’s not possible.†Vegeta grinned and said “that’s what made you such a weakling Raditz, not knowing when to draw the line.†He charged into battle and unleashed a quick series of punches against his foe. Raditz managed to block each shot, but he was tiring quickly. Vegeta’s attack was too fierce for Raditz to handle. Goku sidled over to the two hedgehogs and said “who are you guys?†Sonic replied “Sonic and Shadow the hedgehogs.†Goku extended his hand and said “pleasure.†Sonic shook Goku’s hand, Shadow merely nodded. Sonic turned his attention to the fight, It was completely one sided with Vegeta’s offensive attacks overwhelming Raditz’s defense. Vegeta pounded Raditz in the waist several times, threw him up in the air and flew to purse him. Sonic asked “should we help?†Goku shook his head and replied “Vegeta’s got this in the bag, although, I think we should move. His Galick Gun comes next.†Shadow asked slowly “Galick Gun?†Goku began to move and the two hedgehogs followed suit. Vegeta proceeded to kick Raditz in the back, and followed the attack up with a downward punch. He fell to the ground and the impact left a small crater. Vegeta announced loudly “This is where you take your leave.†He put his hands to his side, cupped them, and a purple ball of energy appeared. Vegeta shouted “Galick…†But he was interrupted by the sound of laughing. Raditz stood up from the crater. He was bruised and bleeding, but very much alive. Raditz continued his laugh and said “you have no idea what’s going to happen do you?†In a split second, Raditz raised his hands to his face, and the area blazed with white light. After several seconds, the light subsided. Only the hedgehogs had moved. Sonic looked at the fight area. Raditz had his hand raised and an insane smile on his face. He said quietly “now it’s time to die.†Vegeta turned his head towards the sky. A large ball of light had appeared out of nowhere. He said quietly “not good.†Goku shouted “Vegeta, do it now!†Vegeta brought his arms forward and shouted “Galick Gun!†A large beam of energy shot towards Raditz. Raditz blocked the attack his hand and roared in triumph. Thinking quickly, Goku turned to the two hedgehogs and said “stay out of sight, but be prepared to move at any time.†He flew away and attempted to blast Raditz with an energy attack. This too, proved fruitless. Shadow turned to face Sonic and said “what was that all about?†Sonic’s eyes widened and began muttering softly. Shadow said “what?†Sonic pointed at the fight area, and Shadow turned to look. He discovered what Sonic was talking about immediately. Where Raditz once stood, a giant ape had appeared. It stood at over 30 foot tall and was attacking Goku and Vegeta in a n insane rampage. Shadow said flatly “ah, now I see what he meant.†Goku and Vegeta began firing various energy attacks at the ape with little success. Goku dodged an attack by the ape and shouted “super time!†Vegeta nodded and in an instant. The two fighters’ hair tuned to gold, their eyes green, and a visible gold aura surrounded them. Upon seeing this transformation, Sonic and Shadow both said in unison “you stole our idea!†The ape heard their complaint and turned to attack the two hedgehogs. He fired a beam out of his mouth that the hedgehogs scarcely managed to avoid. Sonic said “we have to get involved in this battle.†Shadow nodded and said “I agree.†The two hedgehogs ran towards the giant ape, Shadow jumped high over Raditz’ ape-like body. Descending quickly, the hedgehog reached out an arm. Sonic jumped from out of nowhere and the two performed a simultaneous Chaos spear. The attack caught the ape off guard, and although it failed to damage Raditz’s monstrous transformation, it did distract him long enough for Goku and Vegeta to perform an attack of their own. Goku threw his arms out and shouted “Super Kamehameha!†Vegeta outstretched his hands and roared “Final Flash!†Two beams, one bright blue, the other gold, rocketed towards the ape’s midsection. The combined attack brought Raditz’s ape form to its knees, but somehow, he was still alive. The ape stood, weaker but angrier than ever. Thoughts on his own experiences, and recent experiments on his powers brought Shadow to a conclusion. He muttered “you’re gonna need a bigger attack.†Sonic heard him and asked sarcastically “do you have something in mind?†The black hedgehog grinned insanely and said “oh yeah.†He ran quickly and shouted “do that again, but hit me instead!†Goku avoided a strike from the ape and shouted“what?!†Shadow roared “Do it.†He jumped onto the ape’s back and then jumped in the air. He began to descend, and he shouted “now!†The two warriors fired their respective attacks towards the black hedgehog. In an almost prayer-like fashion, Shadow muttered “please let this work.†He brought his arms over his head in an arc and shouted “Chaos Blast!†A large red bubble of energy surrounded Shadow, the two attacks hit the bubble, and it turned a bright white. It detonated with a powerful fury and its blast hit the ape directly . Shadow fell from the air, performed an aerobatic dive, and landed on his feet. Almost casually he walked towards the now smoldering trees. The ape however, had a much less ceremonious landing. He collapsed onto the ground and transformed back into his true form. Raditz lay on the ground, broken and dying. Expending his last reserves of energy, the dying Raditz looked at his brother, and saw no more. The four fighters approached Raditz’s body. Goku knelt and closed his brother’s eyes. Sonic asked “what was that back there?†Shadow answered “well, I learned some time ago, that the chaos blast can absorb other energy, resulting in a greater attack. It worked I guess. A beeping occurred from Vegeta’s belt. Withdrawing a small device, he turned and began speaking. Obviously it was some sort of communication device, because Vegeta spoke as if in conversation. Vegeta nodded several times and said “alright, we’ll be there, we’ll have two visitors as well.†Goku gave Vegeta a quizzical look as he put his communication device away. Vegeta looked at the group and said “it seems we have a problem. We have to return to Capsule Corp now.†The four fighters didn’t notice another person fly away. Several hundred meters away from the fight area The unknown spectator flew away at rapid speed, quick enough to get away, but slow enough to ensure stealth. The spectator knew that if his identity were discovered, all chances of his task would be lost. The spectator flew away and debated his next course of action, but this was ruined when the demonic figure appeared from nowhere. The black figure asked “who are you?†The spectator replied “that seems to be a question going around these days.†The figure laughed quietly and said “indeed, hmm.†The spectator decided to flee, he didn’t like this stranger. As he began to move, the demonic figure said “I don’t think so.†To his horror, the spectator realized that he couldn’t move. The black demon said “this will not take long, let’s see who you are.†The spectator froze and felt a presence lurking in his mind. Realizing that the demon was reading his mind, he dug deep of his own power and forced the intruder out. The demon’s power broke, and the spectator flew away as quickly as he could. After several seconds, two bolts of blue energy connected with the fleeing spectator and held him in place. The black demon approached the captive and said “now that was impolite. I merely wish to speak with you, Lord Frieza.†Frieza, horrified at his captor’s power asked “what do you want?†The demon replied “your knowledge. From what I could gather, you seem to know a lot about planets, and how to conquer them. I need that knowledge.†The demon looked at his captive and said “so I’ll offer you a deal. What I need, are new planets to reform my army. With your help, this idea would be possible. The galaxy would be ours, and as a gift, I’ll give you anything you wanted.†The energy bolts disappeared and Frieza was released. Frieza turned to the demon and said “You mean this?†The demon nodded. Seeing that the demon’s plans were similar to his, Frieza said “there are several objects that I must collect from this world. I want your assistance in finding them.†The demon bowed and said “of course, your lordship.†Frieza asked “out of curiosity, do you have a name?†The demon replied “of course, my name is Black Doom.†Capsule Corp The four fighters arrived at the Capsule Corporation building in record time. Vegeta and Goku’s flight powers outclassed the hedgehogs running speed, which left them depressed. Vegeta said as he led the group through the building “it seems you’ve gotten yourselves into quite some trouble boys.†Sonic asked “what do you mean?†Vegeta said “that depends. What year is it?†The two hedgehogs looked at each other in confusion. Vegeta asked “well?†Sonic answered the question, and Vegeta nodded. In a very serious tone, the shorter warrior said “well boys, you’ve somehow arrived about 700 years from where you just were.†Sonic’s expression turned to disbelief as he said “what?!†Goku noticed that Shadow’s body language hadn’t changed regarding this news. Either he was that good at controlling himself, or he really couldn’t care less. It reminded Goku of a certain prince who happened to be standing in the room with him. Vegeta led the group to a door and said “it’s me.†The statement must have been some sort of password as the door opened immediately afterwards. Sonic said sarcastically “oh that’s secure.†Vegeta grinned and said “I’d like to see you try getting in here. Apart from being voice-printed, this room has every security measure in existence, except for the roving squads and dog patrols.†The group walked into the room. It was very cool, and full of various technologies that boggled Sonic’s mind. Shadow however, was less than impressed with the technology. Vegeta showed the group to a set of chairs and said “have a seat, gentlemen.†The two hedgehogs sat down and Sonic said “so, how did we end up in the future?†Vegeta said slightly irritably “not yet. We’re not all here.†He walked to the end of the room and took out his communicator. Goku approached the two hedgehogs and said “forgive him. He has a thing about people running late for meetings, even if it’s his wife.†Sonic asked incredulously “he’s married?†Goku grinned and said “I have no idea how it happened either.†Vegeta said from across the room “I heard that Kakarot.†Sonic asked “what’s Kakarot?†Goku answered “It’s my…†He was interrupted by Vegeta cleared his throat loudly. Goku continued “it’s one of my nicknames, believe me, I didn’t choose it.†After several minutes of silence, the door opened, and a woman with blue hair entered. She embraced Vegeta and turned her attention to the rest of the room. Upon seeing the two hedgehogs, the woman asked “are these our visitors?†Goku nodded and said “Bulma, meet Sonic and Shadow the hedgehogs.†Bulma said “aw, they’re so cute?†Sonic gave a mischievous smile, and Shadow nodded. Vegeta said “now that we’re all here, we can begin.†Bulma nodded, walked over to the wall and activated a switch. A 3D picture of the world appeared in the centre of the room. Sonic asked “what happened?†Vegeta said “I’ll take that to mean, ‘how did we get here?†Sonic nodded. Vegeta said “we don’t know. What we do know is that we were tracking Raditz flying across the sea, and an island just appeared.†He accentuated the last word by waving his fingers repeatedly. Bulma said “maybe you should tell us what happened, before the fight.†Sonic said “well, we were having a party of sorts on the island. There was a shockwave, we went to investigate, and then we met that Radish guy.†Shadow said “his name was Raditz, Sonic, and there were two shockwaves.†Bulma walked to a computer, pressed several buttons, and the 3D image changed. It showed the sea and a clock. Bulma said “this is what happened with us.†A red icon appeared and started moving across the sea. The south island appeared on the image, and the red icon moved towards it. Goku said “the red icon is Raditz. I don’t know why he landed, but we set out after him soon after.†Bulma typed something, and the image descended, eventually it showed a bird’s eye view of the battle area. Bulma said “this was taken by our satellite, by the way.†The hedgehogs nodded and continued watching. It showed two yellow icons reach the battle area. Sonic said “that was us.†Goku replied “well you held him up pretty well, considering his increased power level.†Two white icons appeared and the recording played out the rest of the battle. Bulma nodded as the recording of the battle finished. Vegeta said “interesting, but how did Raditz escape from hell, and how did he get so strong?†Goku said “and, how did our friends get here?†Sonic asked “and, how do we get back?†Shadow asked “and, how do we stop speaking like this?†Everyone laughed at Shadow’s joke; it was the first friendly thing he had said since arriving in the new timeline. Goku stopped laughing and said in a light tone “but seriously, that was some excellent fighting from you two, especially that blasting finish. What did you call it, a chaos blast?†Bulma broke the line of conversation and said “I think the machine might be broken.†Vegeta looked at his wife and said “why?†Bulma replied “well, I can’t pick up any energy signals on this recording after the battle. Your signals should still be active.†Vegeta looked at the recording and said “maybe there’s something wrong with it.†Bulma shrugged and said “I don’t know. It’s like there’s interference, but I can’t pick up any signals of that. If it were electrical inteference, there would be static all over the place.†Shadow’s expression became anxious after hearing these words. He quickly walked over to the image and said “go back to when the static began.†Bulma typed a command, and the segment restarted. Shadow closed his eyes and began to use his chaos sense. He could feel a dark presence, and every bit of that presence screamed out to him, calling for his death. Sonic asked “what is it?†Shadow bowed his head and said simply “Doom.†After several seconds of quiet, Goku asked “what’s doom?†Shadow replied “Black Doom, he’s an evil alien who wants to take over the world.†The black hedgehog looked at his hand and said “he created me as an implement for his plans, not that it helped.†Goku asked “then what happened?†Shadow replied “long story short. I killed him, or, I thought I did.†Vegeta enquired “and you think he’s here?†Shadow replied “he has to be.†Leaning back in his chair, Vegeta said “our work never finishes.†Goku asked “where do we find this guy?†Shadow shook his head and said “you don’t.†Sonic piped in and said “isn’t there a more pressing matter? How we got here?†Shadow nodded and said “good question.†Bulma said “I have a theory.†Sonic replied “go on.†Bulma said “simply put, it would seem that the island and by extension, you, were brought 700 years into the future, almost as if it went through a giant time machine.†Shadow hit Sonic over the head lightly and said “didn’t I tell you not to bring the time machine?†Sonic smiled grimly and said “oh, ha.†Vegeta said “could we get back to the topic?†Bulma said “how this happened though, I have no idea.†Sonic asked “what do we do?†Bulma said “we have a magical wish-granting dragon, we could wish you back.†Sonic smiled and said “a wish granting dragon, eh? That’s original.†Goku said earnestly “it’s completely true. But we’d have to deal with this Black Doom guy first.â€Shadow said sarcastically “and I thought this was going to be easy.†Interior of the Great Fox II. Fox woke with a start, his heart raced and sweat soaked his face and pillow. He covered his face with his hands and grunted in anguish at the thought of the his recurring nightmare. Rolling to one side, he grabbed an item from his bedside table. It was a handsomely framed photo. Fox looked at the picture intently, even in the dark he could see the picture well, he had viewed it many times. It was a picture of himself standing next another vulpine, they both hand their fists clenched and were grinning like madmen. The other vulpine was taller than Fox and his fur was darker. The two were clearly friends. Fox smiled thinly and said “the day isn't going to get interesting if I sit here.†After a quick shower, Fox dressed into his uniform and left his room. He walked down the corridor and stopped three feet from a door, considering his situation, Fox tapped on the door gently. The knock was quiet, the average person wouldn't have even noticed it. But Fox wasn't knocking on an average person's door. The knock was heard and a voice grunted groggily “who?†Fox muttered “it's me.†The voice sighed and said “come in.†The door slid open and Fox walked into the room. Several posters adorned the walls, but the room was very clean and neat. A blue avian asked “looking for something?†Fox replied “no Falco, just a routine inspection.†Falco snickered and said “since the war began you've been more and more like an officer.†Fox said with a little bravado “well Corporal, you've passed inspection with flying colors.†Falco stood up, saluted and said “Thank you Captain Star Fox.†Fox answered the salute and sat down on an armchair. Falco asked indignantly “since when was I a Corporal? Surely I’ve earned a better rank than that.†Nodding, Fox said “well if I'm a Captain, and you're my executive officer, that should make you a Commander.†Falco considered it for a moment and said “Commander Falco Lombardi. It has a nice ring to it.†Fox grinned and said “I'll send the papers through and your stripes will arrive in the mail.†A loud whining noise sounded over the comm system. “Emergency, Emergency. Incoming enemy fighters. Prepare to engage.†The two stood up and Fox said “time to jet.†Exterior of Great Fox II. Three Arwings flew out of the hangar bay, one by one. From inside his Arwing, Fox activated his headset and said “all wings report in.†Falco replied “Sky Claw here, all systems clear.†A high male voice said “Bullfrog clear.†Falco asked mockingly “no pithy opening statement Slippy?†Fox said “cut it out, keep the comms clear. I'm here too by the way.†A slight wave of sadness passed through him as he realized who was meant to call in next. Shaking it off, Fox said “take it to 'em gents.†He rolled to the side and fired a stream of laser blasts at a group of fighters. Performing a quick roll, he turned quickly and shot several more fighters out of the sky. Slippy said “I've got two fighters on my tail guys.†Fox studied his radar and said “move to point 35 and I'll intercept. Cover me Falco.†Falco replied “on it boss.†Fox edged his fighter left and soared towards Slippy's quarry. Falco muttered “three fighters on your starboard side, they're mine.†Fox accelerated as the Sky Claw zoomed past. Within seconds, he had reached firing range. A couple of well placed shots leveled Slippy's quarry. Almost on cue, a mechanical voice said “alert priority 3.†Fox asked urgently “what is is R.O.B?†R.O.B replied “three missiles approaching from the left.†Falco said cheerfully “just like old times.†The three fighters turned and approached the incoming missiles. Slippy said “impressive, it's a new model. Someone must really want us.†Fox said “we're wanted all over the Lylat System, how do we destroy these things?†Slippy replied grimly “no need to be so crabby, Fox.†Falco said “any day now Slippy. Those missiles are near distance 50.†Slippy said exasperatedly “I'm being attacked on two fronts here.†Fox and Falco shouted in unison “Slippy!†Slippy half shouted “alright, the weak point is the fuel cell, just below the solar frame.†Fox muttered “thank you.†He honed in on the fuel cell and began firing, after several seconds, it exploded with a bright orange glow. The second missile exploded soon after, and Fox said “how's the third missile going.†Slippy said urgently “there's a problem, this missile has some sort of deflector shielding.†Fox asked “what do we do?†Slippy replied “we need to overload it, fire everything at it and we're good. Nova bombs and all.†R.O.B announced “Distance 30.†Fox said “alright gents, fire everything. Go!†The three Arwings unleashed their immense payload on the remaining missile. Despite the shielding, the missile couldn't stop the massive power surging through it's system and exploded in a ball of brilliant light. As the team cheered, a mechanical voice uttered “simulation complete.†Fox said “alright guys, we've had our fun.†He pressed a button on his control board and the canopy opened. Quickly stepping out of the Arwing and into the hangar, Fox said “that was a good simulation Slip. It was really authentic.†Slippy exited his fighter and said “I aim to please.†He accentuated this with a small bow. Fox asked “what did you think, Falco?†Falco nodded and said “it was adequate, a bit nostalgic maybe.†Slippy said in a mock-hurt voice “you wound me buddy.†Fox grinned and said “well done guys, time for breakfast.†Falco grinned and said “good idea.†Capsule Corp The two hedgehogs lay in two single beds. After their debriefing, Bulma had offered them houseroom within the corporation building. Sonic had accepted on his own, and Shadow's behalf, as Shadow was nodding off to sleep anyway. But sleep was not kind enough to accompany the blue hedgehog. He had been in a resting position for twenty minutes, and no amount of sleep had followed. Sonic rolled over and said asked “Shadow, you awake?†The black hedgehog replied from across the room “trouble sleeping?†Sonic said “yeah, I guess I'm all worked up about us being here.†As an afterthought, he added “have you considered what would happen if we can't make it back.†Shadow replied “then we stay here, it's kinda simple.†Sonic said “but everything back there, our lives, everything. It's just a big nightmare.†The black hedgehog said “it's one of these times where it's good to have nothing, that way you can't miss it.†Sonic replied “but you had something back home.†Rolling to one side, Shadow asked “what was this?†Sonic answered simply “Rouge.†Shadow demanded “what do you mean?†The blue hedgehog said “It's obvious isn't it? She likes you buddy.†Shadow shook his head and said “ah, no she doesn't.†Sonic gave an inquiring look and said “let's look at the facts, she takes you into her house.†Shadow replied “I had nowhere to go, it's a friend offering help.†Sonic continued “and she always takes you with her whenever she goes out. Whether a simple shopping experience, or to the cinema's for a romantic movie.†Feeling pressured, Shadow replied “she just wanted company, and how do you know about the movie?†Sonic replied with a grin “let's just say, I had a friend who was at that movie and my friend saw the two of you, she was cuddled up on your shoulder, all cute like.†Shadow froze at this bit of information, he hadn't thought of the possibility of someone else being at the cinema, and if they saw that, then they could have seen more. Thinking quickly to defuse the situation, Shadow said “she fell asleep on my shoulder, I couldn't have helped that.†His grin growing wider, Sonic said “If she was asleep, why did she keep winking at my contact?†Shadow's mind spun into overtime, he had not known this little well of information, and far worse, in Shadow's mind, was the possibility of more details being dragged into the open. Shadow said warily “alright, so she wanted to be close, is there anything wrong with that?†Still grinning, Sonic said “she may have wanted to be close, but you wanted to be closer.†This comment sent Shadow's already stressed mind into new levels of tenseness. He was already making preparations for his surrender speech. With a grain of defiance still in him, Shadow asked “what do you mean?†Sonic replied “don't give me that, you were stroking her hair and you know it.†Shadow's defense, and all his excuses fell at this statement. He lay in silence, unable to think of anything to counter the indeterminate truth of Sonic's eyewitness. Sonic asked “are you gonna deny it?†Shadow replied “how can I, you're the master spy here.†Sonic asked “so, how long have you been, well you know what I mean?†Shadow supplied “going out?†The blue hedgehog nodded. Shadow replied “about two and a half months now. Mainly lunch and dinner, and those shopping adventures you mentioned.†Sonic nodded and said “good for you buddy.†Shadow said with an edged voice “don't mock me.†The blue hedgehog said “I’m not mocking you, I really think this is good for you. It's good to have someone.†Shadow muttered groggily “sure whatever. I don't know about you, but I could use some sleep.†He rolled over and closed his eyes Sonic too felt drowsy and said “all this talking has done me some good. Goodnight Shads.†He heard Shadow's answering snore as he slipped into sleep. Interior of Great Fox “pass the cereal will you?!†Fox was shook back to reality at this statement, looking across from the table, he saw Falco with his hand outstretched. Fox handed the cereal box and said “sorry, I was out of it for a second.†The blue avian sighed and said “more like thirty. I had to ask three times. You and your little daydreams, it’s a bit off putting you know.†Fox grinned and said “so says the person who was listening to the South Cornerian Synthesisers two days ago.†Falco pointed and said “they’re a very under-appreciated band, they deserve recognition.†Fox nodded and said “I’m sure it’ll be the highlight of their careers having the great Falco Lombardi as their number one fan.†The avian shook his head and said “it’s not as bad as that stuff you listen to. Impact 4.0, wouldn’t they be proud to know who’s on their fan list?†Fox waved his hand in a mysterious manner and said “ooh.†From the other side of the table, Slippy sighed and said “give it a rest you two. Don’t you have better things to be doing?†Falco chewed on scoop of cereal and said “yeah, breakfast and then observation. If we’re not needed, I really need to get to the city.†Slippy swallowed a scoop and said “why?†Falco said “I need to buy a jacket.†This comment caused Fox and Slippy to snicker, which did not escape Falco’s attention. He asked “what?†Slippy asked “you do realize what you just said, right?†After several seconds, understanding dawned in Falco’s mind and he said “oh very funny guys. That was old when I was in school. Grow up already.†Fox asked “aw, is ickle Falco angry, does he need to go and buy a jacket.†Falco raised one finger threateningly and said “knock it off.†Slippy said “we’re not the ones who just said we were going to try for some kissing action, buddy.†The avian pointed at Slippy and said “I said, knock it off.†Slippy rolled his eyes and said “oh alright. Sheesh Falco, where’s your sense of humor?†Falco replied “its intermittent.†Fox finished the last of his cereal and asked seriously “what kind of jacket do you need?†Falco replied “just a simple black jacket. Nothing fancy. †Fox said thoughtfully “if we’re not needed, maybe I could go too. I haven’t been to the city in a while and I could use a new pair of boots.†Slippy piped in and said “I’ll go too, I need to get Amanda something for her birthday.†Falco said “oh swell, it’s practically newsworthy.†Fox said “yes, I can see the headlines now. The Star Fox team, fresh from their intrepid adventures, have been seen shopping in Corneria City. It’s brilliant.†Slippy said simply “I think we’ve earned a little recreation time.†Fox said “perhaps, but I’d rather not be seen in public at the moment. One minute it’ll be all over the holo-news and the next minute Andross will perform another on of his little useless attacks. But this time, we won’t be there to stop them.†Falco said “if that last battle is anything to go by, I’d say Andross should be just about ready to fold now.†Fox nodded and said “maybe, but there’s another issue we haven’t considered, an important chink in our defense.†Falco grinned and asked “you’re talking about the fan-girls?†The vulpine nodded with the sliest of grins on his face as he remembered one of their more recent escapades. The last time the team had appeared in public was for a charity fund-raising party. Keenly aware that there would likely be followed after the party had finished, they had decided to take the back way out of the party. It was shortly after they followed their escape route that they were beset upon by a small army of fan-girls, it then became apparent to the team that their official request for privacy had not managed to stop these determined women. They also realized just how much unofficial Star Fox merchandise had been put into production. When that had happened, and seeing the vast numbers trying to besiege them, the team had decided to bravely turn tail and run . Falco grinned and said “They really did a good job making those handbags. We looked really good on them, that and the shirts and the hats, amongst other things.†Slippy said “that may be your idea of fun, Falco. Its not mine.†Falco looked at him and said “you can’t say that wasn’t a fun day. Some of the merchandise looked good, and the babes looked even better.†Slippy asked “why did you run then?†Falco raised his hands and said “Falco Lombardi is not for sale.†Fox chortled quietly and said “we’d better get to the bridge and see if we have any missions today. If we don’t have any, then we can plan our little skulk around the city.†After a quick clean-up, the Star Fox team entered the bridge and stood in front of a holo device. Slippy flipped a switch and the face of General Pepper appeared. The team saluted and Pepper asked “how are we this morning gentlemen.†Fox answered “ship shape really.†Pepper nodded and said “well gentlemen, the news is good on all fronts, Andross’ forces have been pushed back, there’s really nothing we need you for today. So I guess you guys can have a day off.†Keeping his tone neutral, largely to hide his desire for a personal day, Fox asked “are you sure, General?†Pepper nodded and said “you’ve earned it, enjoy yourself.†Fox nodded and said “thank you sir.†Pepper said quickly “Peppy sends his regards, by the way.†The General turned and nodded, the hologram faded soon after. Fox turned around and asked “could we have had a better result?†Falco nodded and said “he could have given us two days off. That would have been better.†Slippy snorted and said “a whole week of would have been really nice, and maybe a bottle or two of vintage bubbles.†Fox grinned and said “well let’s get started shall we, and this time we’re going incognito.†Corneria City The trio entered the central shopping district without any hassle. All three wore dark gray business suits, complete with sunglasses and a small lapel pin on their collars. The three stopped in the middle of an empty street and Fox asked “how do we look?†Falco adjusted his cuffs and said “we look like something from one of those action films. Slippy indicated his lapel pin and muttered “it’ll be fine as long as you don’t break your D-300.†The pins that they wore were actually a clever device invented by Slippy. Provided one kept theirs close to their body, it could project a perfect likeness of any programmed look. This resulted in anyone with such a device being able to disguise themselves efficiently. Fox nodded and said “so let’s activate our disguises now.†After a few seconds, three very different people stood were the Star Fox team members had just been standing. Fox looked at his friends and said “nobody would ever guess it was really us. You guys look so different.†Falco withdrew a small mirror from his pocket and said “I don’t know, these good looks aren’t exactly common.†Slippy rolled his eyes and said “let’s get going.†The trio walked up into the high street and melded with the crowd unseen. As Fox walked the street with his friends, he felt a sense of daring that followed him whenever he did something sneaky. This feeling had been borne from years of well-meant deeds from his childhood. Whether it was a simple skipping of his homework to play his favorite game, or being late after morning tea due to a time of, what he and his friends had coined ‘jacket purchasing.’ Fox and Falco walked astride, whilst Slippy sauntered on the other side of the street, as he was going to a different shop. His comm signalled, and Fox quickly put on an earpiece. He activated his comm and said “receiving.†Falco’s voice crackled over the comm and said “we’re approaching Maurice’s now, shouldn’t take too long.†Slippy’s voice said “well Jonathan’s Jewellers is on the next street, so I’ll go ahead and get the present. We should regroup at the corner in ten minutes.†Fox muttered with a convincing northern Cornerian accent “yes squad commander. We will reconnoiter at that time. †Slippy replied in an annoyed voice “will you stop it with that accent, I thought you were him for a second.†Fox said “that’s what I was trying to achieve.†Falco piped in and said “ok guys let’s just get this over and done with, and then we can have some cake.†Fox’s expression changed slightly as he said “I love cake.†Falco replied over the comm “I know. We’re Heading into Maurice’s now Slippy, commence comm silence.†Fox deactivated his comm, looked at his friend and said “see you in five.†Falco gave a small salute and the two split off to their various departments. Maurice’s Clothing store was a well respected establishment in the Cornerian Shopping District. They sold quality garments and other accessories, and had a list of high class clientele, including well known celebrities, politicians, and other noteworthy people. They were about to get two more added to the list. Fox located an information console and quickly typed a inquiry. Seeing that his desired boots were on the second floor, he ended his search and approached the adjacent turbolift. The vulpine walked inside and turned. As the doors closed, a female voice said “hold the lift.†Fox held out his hand and soon after, a grey feline entered the lift. She breathed and said “thanks.†The woman looked at Fox, after a few seconds she asked “have we met before?†Fox was about to reply positively, when he remembered his disguise. In actuality, Fox did know this woman, her name was Katt Monroe . She was one of Falco’s old friends, and Fox had met her during the Lylat Wars. Throwing caution to the winds, Fox said “yeah we have actually.†Recognition dawning on her face, Katt asked “Fox?†Fox quickly indicated his lapel pin and said “Yeah it’s me. Slippy and Falco are here too. These pins are disguise mechanisms. Quite handy considering what happened the last time we came here.†After a few seconds, Katt nodded and said “very true. Why are you guys here?†Fox replied “I need a new pair of boots, Slippy is getting at Jonathan’s getting a present for Amanda.†Katt asked “and Falco?†Choosing his words carefully, Fox said “he’s getting a coat.†Katt asked incredulously “a coat?†Fox said meekly “a jacket really.†Katt asked “why didn’t you just say that?†The embarrassed Fox answered shyly “I don’t know, slip of the tongue I guess.†She smiled and asked “do you really think I’m that immature?†Feigning ignorance, Fox asked “what do you mean?†Katt said “you know what I mean. That code about purchasing a jacket.†Fox asked “how do you know about that?†With a sly grin, Katt replied “because Falco and I have purchased jackets before. Not that he’d admit that.†Fox blinked and said “way too much information.†Katt gave him a small punch to the arm and said “not like that.†She pressed a button on the panel and the lift began to ascend. After a couple of seconds, the lift stopped and the door slid open. The two stepped out and began walking. Fox adjusted his collar and asked “why are you here?†Katt replied “I’m going to try their new perfume. I’ve heard good things about it.†Fox said nonchalantly “I haven’t.†Katt chortled and said “of course.†As they approached the footwear section, Fox said “this is me, I might see you later.†Katt nodded and said “maybe. I should really find Falco. See his jacket .†Fox grinned and waved as the feline walked away. Looking through the various shoes, Fox said “well Falco, you’re in for some trouble now. Let’s see how you handle this.†Falco Lombardi was not a ladies man, despite his claims. He had once emphatically denied any interest in relationships, and that had seemingly ended the matter. Making a mental note to flame his friend later, Fox found a suitable pair of boots and picked them off the shelf. He undid his shoes and quickly swapped footwear. Fox moved his feet and said “not bad.†After a few minutes of testing, Fox decided to buy the boots. Quickly donning his business shoes, he picked up the boots and left the section. After a minute, the vulpine reached a sale counter and handed the boots to an attendant. The attendant scanned the label attached to the boots and named a price. Fox withdrew a banknote from his pocket, placed it on the counter and was given his new boots. The vulpine approached the mens business section several minutes after his transaction, his new boots in a bag. Looking through the section, he found his avian friend holding a black jacket in one hand, and his gray business jacket in the other. On Fox’s approach, Falco said “you’re late. What kept you?†Fox shrugged casually and stated “it takes a long time to find the right shoe, and that logic applies to boots too.†Falco nodded and said “we can apply that logic here, I’m thinking about this jacket.†He put it on and asked “what do you think? Do I look fearsome?†Fox said “do a stern look.†The avian nodded and his expression changed to that of someone who did not want to be approached. Fox nodded approvingly and said “I wouldn’t go anywhere near you.†Falco’s expression brightened and he said “oh good, then I’ll get it.†He turned and approached a sales counter. Fox watched in disinterest as Falco, using his disguised accent, chatted with the sales attendant. Fox said to himself quietly “I’ll never understand how those attendants can be so social with everyone. It’s a lot better when you just buy the item and leave.†He turned looked around and noticed Katt walking down one of the sections. She carried several bags. Fox grinned and said “more than just perfume then.†She looked in his direction, and he pointed at the preoccupied Falco. Nodding in recognition, Katt walked casually towards the avian. Fox watched with interest as the feline approached Falco, who had finished his purchase. She brushed into him, dropping a bag as she did so. Katt stumbled and said innocently “please forgive me, I’m so sorry.†Falco gave a small double-take at her sight, but recovered quickly. He retrieved her dropped bag and said with his disguised tone “oh it’s no problem.†He quickly looked at Fox, who fought the desire to laugh, and adopted a confused expression. He finished the act with a shrug. Falco faced Katt and said “well you have a nice day.†Katt nodded and said “my, you’re a proper gentleman aren’t you? Perhaps you could help me carry some of these bags to the exit?†He looked at Fox who gave another shrug. Falco stammered and said “of course.†After draping the new jacket across his shoulders, he took several of the bags and they began to walk. Fox followed quietly. Katt walked at a deliberately slow pace, it was obvious that she wanted to keep the pressure on Falco for as long as possible. Katt said “I’m Katt Monroe, may I ask your name?†Falco waited a few seconds and replied “Cresswell.†Katt said “it’s nice to meet you Mr. Cresswell.†Fox watched as Falco swallowed and said “it’s nice to meet you too, Miss Monroe.†Katt asked “and what would a strapping gentleman like yourself do for a living?†Falco replied “I work as a advertising in Water’s Advertising Company.†Several more minutes passed as Katt kept up her questioning. Fox noticed that many of Falco’s answers were details pertaining to his undercover field identity. Fox muttered “and you’re giving those details away at bargain prices buddy.†They approached the door and Katt said “thank you for your help.†Falco replied, “it was no trouble at all.†He handed her bags back to her. She took them and gave him a small kiss on the cheek. Katt said “goodbye Mr. Lombardi.†Falco watched as she walked out the door, oblivious to the last revelation, he rubbed at his cheek furiously. Fox walked up to him and said “wow, you handled yourself pretty well.†Falco paused and said “thanks, I thought that would never...†Realisation dawned in his mind and he stuttered a few unintelligible words. Fox asked “what?†Falco replied frantically “she said my last name, she knew it was me. Somehow she knew.†The vulpine adopted a look of horror and said “you’re right. How the heck did she know?†Falco asked miserably “how the heck did she know?†Fox said “Slippy’s probably waiting for us. We need to get going.†Falco just grunted and the two left the store. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 You are allowed to double/triple/etc post if your fanfic is too big to fit in one post. Just copy paste what you have and put it here. It's that simple. Edit: Kaaay, you just did that, nvm what I said then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggsnipa Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 I have released the Worlds Collide Crossover. You will no doubt notice that i have a different writing style to the mainstream one. Anywho. It is a Crossover starring Fox and Falco from Star Fox, Sonic and Shadow from Sonic the Hedgehog, and Goku and Vegeta from Dragon Ball Z. Interesting combination. Anyway, it's not finished yet, but there is a battle and stuff. Lol,I want to do a Crossover Fic featuring me,the VGC crew,the Gorillaz,and Arby 'n teh Cheif. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 I just want to put in that Star Fox is in this story, just not yet, and this was a small part of a story, just a teaser if you will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milkyway64 Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 A teaser that takes like four years to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted April 12, 2011 Author Share Posted April 12, 2011 A teaser that takes like four years to read. It has to be long, because it's a look, and then it's whisked off to the writing lab. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nope. Posted April 12, 2011 Share Posted April 12, 2011 It has a similar name of a project of mine ( a crossover, but it has just some elements from various series ). Well, time to read... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 Due To renovations for the project, this post has been removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 Due to renovations for hte project, this post has been removed Note: This and the post prior to it were both parts of the story, But I went back, did a few edits, put in paragraphs, so now everyone will be happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deploy Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 How come no one around here knows the concept of paragraphs? Paragraphs are your friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 Put an update in btw, just added it to the last one i posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Matrix Posted May 16, 2011 Share Posted May 16, 2011 Put an update in btw, just added it to the last one i posted. Prince my man. You gotta space out your huge essasy. Otherwise, its going to be a huge blob of text that no one will even want to read.. Every 5-8 sentences in your story, you need to start a new paragraph. Like when you read a book, notice how you see a big space, an indent? You gotta do it like this. Fox went to the kitchen to get something to eat. He met krystal which made Fox nervous and shy. Falco jumped in and tried to hook up Fox with krystal again. However Slippy came in and started yelling. Falco was tired of the loud noise, so he punched him in the jaw. Slippy fell to the ground and started to cry. Peppy came in and asked "Whats going on?! " Falco just shrugged his shoulders and walked away. Fox was still nervous and quickly ran away as Krystal looked at him. Krystal looked at Peppy, and she to had shrugged her shoulders. Peppy grabbed himself a plate and started to put food on his plate. Now in the main command center. Fox was by himself until Krystal came in and scared him. Krystal was laughing as Fox jumped up from his seat. He shouted. "WHATS WRONG WITH YOU?!! ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK??" Krystal giggled again as he heard Fox scream that. She started to flirt with him and Fox's face turned cherry red. Krystal drew her face closer to his. They both were alone until... Like that.. You gotta space out or indent and make a new paragraph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted May 16, 2011 Author Share Posted May 16, 2011 Alright, I put in the paragraphs, so everybody can read with ease now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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