Guest Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 DISCONTINUED SERIES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrypticQuery Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 o_O From what I am able to comprehend, this story seems to be quite good , though I suggest checking on your grammar, punctuation, spelling, and spacing; things sure can get confusing! Oh, and just for future reference, a vixen is a female fox; there is no need to have "Female Vixen" in the heading of the chapter :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 From what I am able to comprehend, this story seems to be quite good , though I suggest checking on your grammar, punctuation, spelling, and spacing; things sure can get confusing! Oh, and just for future reference, a vixen is a female fox; there is no need to have "Female Vixen" in the heading of the chapter riiiiiiiiiiiiiggggggggghhhhhhhhhhtttttt srry i really cant download the spell checker and im not a gramar-type person. by that i mean i am not good with grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Lots of potential for sure. good job. I had an idea like this once, but it's in the graveyard now, shame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 discontinued series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Matrix Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Hmm not bad I like it a lot. The ending of chapter 1 Really confused me. I was like. What the hell just happened? I reread it and I was like. Oh okay this dude is going to be a fag and betray her. lol. Not bad, the plot seems intresting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulvokunvrii Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Hmm very very cool! You have the makings of a story writer SFChick! "This SFChick gets a purple heart for that one!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Elite Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Hmm very very cool! You have the makings of a story writer SFChick! "This SFChick gets a purple heart for that one!" A purple heart? Doesn't that mean you have to be wounded in combat first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 no i dont! i dont write very much but i draw alot! mabey ill upload some of my art! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 Hmm not bad I like it a lot. The ending of chapter 1 Really confused me. I was like. What the hell just happened? I reread it and I was like. Oh okay this dude is going to be a fag and betray her. lol. Not bad, the plot seems intresting. OMG PLZ DONT READ THIS FANFIC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Matrix Posted May 29, 2011 Share Posted May 29, 2011 OMG PLZ DONT READ THIS FANFIC! LOL why??? You feel embarressed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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