OneUnder 1976 Report post Posted January 14, 2011 I'm in agreement with what Nick said; it shows some promise, but that potential needs to be fully realized with fleshed-out detail :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted January 14, 2011 (edited) Yeah I know I will be putting more info in but my computer was acting up and I wanted to get it out there before I forgot it all. Edit: New ones are on the way and added more to the others. Edited February 19, 2011 by Zackary Singleton Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted February 22, 2011 I have a awesome life Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fang O'Donnell 0 Report post Posted March 2, 2011 Ha Venessa O'Donnell's weakness made me laugh. anyhow she could use a bitta fine tuning but all-in-all great characters. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted March 2, 2011 Ha Venessa O'Donnell's weakness made me laugh. anyhow she could use a bitta fine tuning but all-in-all great characters. Thanks :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fang O'Donnell 0 Report post Posted March 4, 2011 Thanks no problem. do you have more characters on the way? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted March 6, 2011 no problem. do you have more characters on the way? As a matter of fact I do but it might take a wile. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fang O'Donnell 0 Report post Posted March 6, 2011 As a matter of fact I do but it might take a wile. cool, can't wait to hear about him/her Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted May 10, 2011 Im so great at what I do Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted July 14, 2011 Im an amazing person to be around Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vulvokunvrii 442 Report post Posted July 14, 2011 Awesome character Zack, lol i love the part about hes afraid of heights (and hes a Bird ) :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted July 14, 2011 Awesome character Zack, lol i love the part about hes afraid of heights (and hes a Bird ) Ironic isn't it Thanks it's been a wile since I last made one. pretty soon I'll have more. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vulvokunvrii 442 Report post Posted July 14, 2011 Sweet mabye we could RP sometime ^_^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted July 14, 2011 Sweet mabye we could RP sometime ok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted July 14, 2011 Name-Luke Graham Age-21 Species-Vulpine Gender-Male Height-6'5" Weight-204Lbs Body- tall/built up Skin Color-long brown hair ears tips are brown yellow/orange fur white torso and tip of his tail. Eye color-light blue Clothes-CDF uniform/see picture. Weapons-Barret 50.cal, Glock handgun, and a combat knife. Transportation: Arwing Skills-incredibly strong and highly developed fighting skills for his age. Home Planet-Corneria History-being the son of a weapon smith Luke grew up naturally poor, but he had a happy childhood but with his shy nature I was a rather lonely one. As Luke grew older he started learning how to build guns and ammunition he didn't care to much for the energy based weapons but he did occasionally tinker with them. Luke wanted to go and join the Corneria Defense Force(CDF) after high school,but soon after his father was diagnosed with an incurable disease, his father had only a few days and Luke wasn't sure what to do, continue the family business or fight for his planet, so he asked his father what he should do and his father's last words to him were, "Do what you think is right". Now he is a corporal in the Corneria Defense Force and every day he lives by his father's words. Bio-strong and silent type, courageous, caring. Weakness-Luke is claustrophobic. Them song-This is War by 30 Seconds to Mars Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 (edited) any comments? Edited September 18, 2011 by Zackary Singleton Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Shaper 411 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 Just a few. He could use more backstory, that's a nice picture, and you can triple post in your characters topic. And dredge it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 thanks emp. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 Got it done. Thanks for the inspiration Star! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Shaper 411 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 I feel like more could be added to show his personality traits and why he is as unsocial as he is. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vulvokunvrii 442 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 Whoa.....dude thats so.....PERFECT! Just wow...im speechless! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 Thanks guys emp. you're right I'll add more later thanks btw anybody notice the "like" button? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Shaper 411 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 Thanks guys emp. you're right I'll add more later thanks btw anybody notice the "like" button? Yes, but I only use it on posts that deserve it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Salem 44 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 agreed just something new I realized :lol: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
